Taarey ff : DIL MIL GAAYE

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Taarey ff : DIL MIL GAAYE

Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control

Is tht so!!!!!!!!!! Do I really luv him!!!!!!!! Ummm no no no thts cant b possible!!!!!!!! We r just frnds!!!!!!! Yup Just Best Frnds nothing more den tht bt!!!!!!!! Ok ok ya i luv him bt as my best frnd yar & aisa thodi na koi book pe likha hai tht luv sirf ishq wala hota hai frnship wala nehi. ufff wht rubbish I m thinking!!!!!!!!! badly need a shower!!!!!

Dis is our Moosibat

Upsss nt ours aapni khadoos ki Moosibat!!!!!!!!

Want 2 knw more about her!!!! So here u go

Moosibat:

a simple girl of 24 atleast she thought tht bt 4 her khadoos she is the most special girl of dis planet . she dosent believe in luv & marriage or any kind of commitments . no no actually she hates dem because of her bitter past!!!! Bt in 1 corner of her heart she wishes someday some1 vl remove this hatness frm her heart, some1 vl make her believe in luv , relationship & commitments!!!!!!! She is an independent girl dream 2 achieve her goals with her own abilities. In dis whole wrld there is only 1 person whom she trust blindly nt actually trust she luvs him blindly bt she herself is unware frm the fact!!!!! The person is none other than her best frnd , her & only her khadoos

she knws him frm the tym she was in 8th standard when they became frnd & she herself don't knw when they became best buddies who shares everthing with eachother, knws about eachother more than they know themselves . At present they work in the same office & also live in the same building. In 1 wrd they r inseparable!!!!!!! Bt bt bt the only thing tht they don't knw actually they didn't realize tht they luv eachother & only made 4 eachother''

ab jab moosibat ke baat kar hi di to kadoos kahaan gayaab ho saktha hai!!!!!!

Bilkul pagal baki ladkyon se bilkul alag jab baki ladkyon ke moof par ishq wala luv & shaadi ki bate rehti hai, iske moof main sirf stocks n shares kii bat hoti hai..

har bat pe mujhse lad lethi hai n galathi uski ho ya meri par raat ko mujhe hi usse maanane ke liye ice cream lekar jaana padtha hai. Par pata nehi kyu jab mujhe wo uss ice box k sath usk balcony me dekhti hai tab jab uski face pe ek cutly naughty sa smile ati hai uski face ki wo smile k liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu!!!!!! Akhir kyu na karu best frnd hai wo mera. par kya sirf best frnd!!!! Aur kuch nehi!!!!!! Kuch bhi nehi!!!! He again sigh!!!!!

Khadoos:

naam se lagta hai sabko yeh kadoos hoga,par yeh naam uske moosibat ne hi use diya hai though ussme khadoos wala koi baat nehi hai aur nahi koi nature hai!!!! he s d sweetest person u vl ever meet, a mamma's boy, he has only his mom n moosibat in dis wrld . he lost his father when he was one bt he never got dishearted frm his lyf . He believes tht wht ever lyf gives u is only wht u really deserve nd u should accept it smilingly.

he is responsible,happy go lucky guy,respects woman , a perfect cook who only cook 4 his moosibat & more than everything d most awesomest friend anyone could ever have!!!!!!

he had dated 2 girls but he was trying to show or prove that moosibat was jus his best friend n both d relationships failed coz he didn't luv any of them..

Somewhere in his heart he alwayz knws tht he is madly in luv with his nd only his own mossibat but didn't want to loose her forever coz he knew dat she hated commitments''

As aap sabko pata hai ki ye ek taarey stry hai so obviously khadoos & moosibat aur koi nehi balki humare Rey & Taani or I should say taarey hi hai .

Bt guyz its nt just a taarey stry its also a real luv stry of 1 of my bff. Aur aap me se bohot sare readers usse jante bhi ho & uski stries bhi par chuke ho. As aap log samajhdar ho so I hope meri isara kafi hai us person ko guess karne k liye. She requested me 2 write dis stry so the entire stry is dedicated to her''

It's a journey of frndship 2 luv, journey of a girl who used 2 hate luv bt nw is madly in luv with some1. Journey of how dis 2 bff vl realize & expresse their luv 2 eachother!!!!!

I knw guyz aap sab log bohot ache writers ho & aap me se kafi writers ki mai fan bhi hu . Aur mai ye bhi janti hu tht meri writing skill bohot hi bakwas hai par its my 1st try so hope u all vl consider my mistakes & vl guide me. Critisizms r most welcome'..

Last bt nt the least I want 2 thank Lachu , Amy, Debu, Fatima di , ish & priya 4 encouraging me & 4 being with me 🤗 🤗🤗


INDEX:

PART-1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3636979/taarey-ff-dil-mil-gaaye?pn=11

PART-2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89770421

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on ur first ff sami..
D cs s awesome n agar,meri style main bole toh bahut changa hai ji,ab der kis baat ki ji,jaldi first part likh do..
n tumhare cs pe main fida ho hi gayi to kabardaar agar isse bakwaas kahi to😆
I luvd d c.s n d name dill mill gaye...haaye luvd it...
n am waiting to read dis stry more..
so plse plse plse update soon..😊
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res will never comment because u did not gave me the link sam
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: flicka

res will never comment because u did not gave me the link sam


aisa mat bol yar tere comment k bina to mera ff adhura hai...😆
chal ab jada vau mat kha samjhi & unres karde...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for ur first FF dear...
CS was amazing...i m loking forward to this stry..intresting concept .so plz continue soon.
😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mindblowing concept 👍🏼
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So, now my friend is also writing a story and trust me, this is just AWESOME👏👏

Sam, the concept , the presentation everything is so loved by me..specially the line , not quoting exactly, kiski gaalti hai ye maalum nahi par manana hamesha mujhe hi parta hai and jab wo ice box le kar balcony mein aati hai, wo simle dekhne ke liye main kuchh bhi kar sakta hoo

I think, these few words express the entire feeling of Khadoos😉😃

And somehow, I love this girl who always talk about shares and all, but every one wants hands to be hold by her prince charming..awesome

well Done Sam..pls keep writing and keep rocking..

I love you and your story loads🤗
Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome and very funny concept 😊
a very good start 👏 all the best 👍🏼

but plz update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome... kon hai vo ladki???

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