AR FF: TMLS [Chapter 13: Pg.76] 30/7/14 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome !! Great job as always 👏

Thanks 4 the PM 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
TFS.

Thanks for pm!!!!

I loved it lol
As usual

This is the only ff I read

Since u wanted a review I just think confession ending of asmud was too rushed and child like
Like asad is more embarrassed and hard to express his feelings
And kumud is very shy when it comes to romance etc

Lol but that's it

Loved everything else!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyee hoyyee ananya ji.. kya update diya upney...👏👏
juz loved it dear...😆😆
woww.. kumud had asad's pic in d buk..
truly close escape.. i was happily shocked reading dat line..
superbb!!!👍🏼👍🏼
nd the ending... it made me hell curious to read more..
they confessed..
they actually confessed!!!
yeayyy...😃😃

now nxt part.. jaldi jaldi plz...
waitingg...😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
waooo they confessed...
lovely and kumud having asad photo in her book .. hahahaha
she was loving his photo and talking with him in photo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome paart loved it
Sorry for not commenting on previous part it was great
Loved the mills and boons scene hahaha
Woww they confessed
It was a lil rushed i guess
But cute
Cont soon
Plzzz pm me from next part onward
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG... How did I miss this FF. it was awesome. I totally love the way you hav brought together everyone. Plzzz do cont soon. And thank god they confessed technically kumud did but no probs. plzzz do cont soon nd do pm me plzz 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late comment but the part was so so gud..really liked it..you are a fab. Writer..post the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ananya jiii...

kitthey chali gayee tussi??
update plz...
dono ko confess karwa diya aur aab jab hum dreamland mein khoye hue hain nxt part mein kya hoga soch ke toh aap kaha chali gayee jee????


😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

I know I'm late. Scratch that, very very late. Kill me already. I was seriously out of ideas and my FA's are going on too and if I do update, it won't be more than 500 words ka. If that's fine please do let me now. Abhi ke liye, a promo is all I can post. Once again, I'm so sorry guys. :(


Promo:

"So finally I can call you bhabhi officially. Glad to know that because I was getting seriously tired of shifting between Kumud and Bhabhi. I missed the first part of the confession, could I have a repeat telecast? The last part itself was pretty intense so I can only imagine what the first part was" Ayaan teased Kumud. Asad immediately began running behind him. "Ayaan, wait for me. You are so dead. Why the hell are you teasing her anyway?" he shouted because Ayaan had already run far away.

Najma quickly took up Ayaan's role and said, "Kumud, what have you done to my bhaijaan. He's defending you and running! Two miracles in a day. That is so unexpected." Kumud started blushing and said "Nothing like that. What can I do if he runs? I didn't tell him to anyway."

"Oye hoye Bhabhi. You're so shy. I was just kidding. My brother runs a lot. You probably know because I'm pretty sure you've seen his six packs" she told Kumud and winked at her.



It's bullshit. I know. Once again, I'm so sorry and once again, kill me now. :(
I won't be sending PM's for this promo because I'm too lazy to do it.
I'll probably post a part within Tuesday because I have two tests tomorrow and another one on Saturday. :(
Individual replies will be tomorrow. :)

Feel free to throw jhootas and chappals.

Love,
Ananya. 😊

Edited by ARandKJFan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeay.. finally i'm 1st..

no problm dear.. i'm fine wth 500wrds but dnt tke this long..
i juz luv ds ff of urs..😳

nd about d promo.. its really nice..
asad has alrdy taken d role of would-be-mrs.-khan's savior..
dats super awsm..

waiting for d actual part..
but write only aftr ur exm..😊

ALL THE BEST for ur exam dear...👍🏼

Edited by --Orchids-- - 12 years ago

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