AR FF: TMLS [Chapter 13: Pg.76] 30/7/14 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Anu Ji... 😛
Awesum promo, sumthng very interestin on our way... 😉
Aur 500 words chalega nahi doudega... 😃
Bas tu update karde, bahot din wait karwaya... 😔
Bt nt at d cost of ur studies ha... 😊
V can wait, ab itne din ruke hai, toh tode aur din sahi... 😉
Love yaa n all d best 4r ur tests... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey *pout* promo..

plz update the part na...plz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .nightqueen

will have to catch up all the parts

n v nicee story Ana :D


Thanks a lot Sumi..
Means a lot.. :D
Glad you liked it. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ranya01

Finally, she realised she is in love ... Overall an astounded part what a reader can demand for...Ananya I loved the way you narrated Khan's family's scene... Super like for "Duhaai hai" and the way she was sleeping holding hand.. Isn't it a shock that you updated so early 😛 Ps-last line doesnt mean that u will ud late now... Hehehe... 😃 superb... Love uh ❤️


Ranya, I am pretty late. :P
Duhaai Hai is good isn't it? ;)
Why is everyone shocked when I update early? :P
Glad you liked it though. :)
If you hadn't reviewed it, you probably wouldn't have gotten a PM for this superlate part! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.


Thanks. :)
Glad you liked it.
And your welcome. :D

Originally posted by: Sana70

Awesome !! Great job as always 👏


Thanks 4 the PM 😃


Thanks a lot.
Glad you liked it. :)
And your welcome.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mith-

Hey Anu hwz u nw??? 😊
Aur madam humhe jhute chappalz fekne ki koi zarurat nahi hai, kyunki ur updates r alwayz "worth d wait"... 😳
N waise bi i was quite surprised 2 c u update itni zaldi, datz wat i feel huh, nahi toh bohat spam karna padta hai... 🤣
Nw 2 d part... 😛
Marvellous job as alwayz sweetie... 😊
Start mein hi kitna bada dhamaka, my gawwd... 😲
Finally she realized k she loves him, n Loved d way she was sleepin holding his hand tight... 😳
N wow yaar puri ki puri paltan in Khan mansion... 😆
Mee lovin d family reunion... 😉
Phir se ek aur punishment to Asad, poah baby... 😔
Njoyed d way Asad teases her vt dat book... 😆
N d biggest part i loved d most is d whole antakshri game n d songz dat u chose were beautiful, specially d one wich Kumud sang "duhai hai", i love it very much... 😳
Den while playin blindfold game, came d most awaited blow... 😆
Hayye Asad bi naa, loved d way he took her away frm every1 n finally confesed his love, vt she reciprocatin it in d same way 2 her Mr. Obvious... ❤️
Nw m all excited 2 kno d reaction frm her family... 😃
Ab next update jaldi karna ... 😛
Jus kiddin deary, tak ur own tym, vl wait... 😊
Love u... ❤️


I'm good. Just studying a lot because of my tests. :( I have two tomorrow too.
My updates are worth the wait? This time, you're seriously going to kick me for this very very late update.
And again, why is everyone surprised? Bacchi ki jaan loge kya? :P
Marvellous aur main? Kissi aur Anu ki baat kar rahi hogi tu. :P
Arey, take your time bolegi toh itna hi late update aayega. 20 days ke baad. :P

Love ya too,
Ananya. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for commenting. :)
Glad you liked it. :D

Originally posted by: kandygrover

Awesome update, looovvveeeddd it!!!!!!!!!


Thanks. :)
Glad you like it.


Thank you. :)
Glad you liked it. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.armanmallik

TFS.


Thanks for pm!!!!

I loved it lol
As usual

This is the only ff I read

Since u wanted a review I just think confession ending of asmud was too rushed and child like
Like asad is more embarrassed and hard to express his feelings
And kumud is very shy when it comes to romance etc

Lol but that's it

Loved everything else!!!!


Your welcome, I guess. :D

Only FF? Wow, I'm so happy you like it and it's worth your time then. :)

Thanks a lot for the honest review. I did want to portray it like that because I kinda already have something planned ahead so the rushed confession was necessary. :)

Glad you liked the other parts. :)
Thanks for commenting. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

oyee hoyyee ananya ji.. kya update diya upney...👏👏
juz loved it dear...😆😆
woww.. kumud had asad's pic in d buk..
truly close escape.. i was happily shocked reading dat line..
superbb!!!👍🏼👍🏼
nd the ending... it made me hell curious to read more..
they confessed..
they actually confessed!!!
yeayyy...😃😃

now nxt part.. jaldi jaldi plz...
waitingg...😆😆😆


Arey, please no ji yaar.
Main bas 13 years ki hun. :P

Glad you liked it that they confessed and the book.

The part is unfortunately very very late!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishs

waooo they confessed...

lovely and kumud having asad photo in her book .. hahahaha
she was loving his photo and talking with him in photo...


Ya. :)
Everyone loved the book part? :O
Glad you liked it.
Thanks for commenting. :)

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