Swaron OS : My Perfect LoveStory! - Page 4

Originally posted by: BusyIndivaBee

angel 🤗🤗🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

thank you sooo much jaan for this birthday gift 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

something from your side for me is always extra special 🤗 🤗 🤗

itne hugs 😲 🤗🤗 mein kanjus hun sirf 2 dungi 😆

well coming to the os it was really adorable and amazing to read...

Thanks :D

and id be really glad saying that you've improved your writing skills a lot 😃

really? WOW! me superr happy! 😃😃😃

"The course of true love never did run smooth."

it was a perfect start for your os. The sharon's pov was explained very well.

yoi showed sharon as a loner, she had lost her parents a year after her birth, then her grand parents who were her only support after a span of 14 years. she was sent to an orphanage 😭

then she was adopted by a family where discipline was given the 1st priority ... discipline toh har ghar mein hona chahiye par yeh kya, inke yaha toh thoda zyaada hi hai 🤢

di, in todays world also such families exist. there are some people who just think that studies are enough for one. and thats y i just thought of using this problem in my OS

"I was given many instructions by them, as well 90% above in exams, no partying, only studies, playing chess, and I like one obedient child followed everything."

sharon was such an obidient child 😃 😛 she did everything that her parents expected from her even though she wished to live a different life apart from studying all the time, but in the process she was lost in her own world and nobody wanted to be friends with her 😒 her family loves her but they are failing to see her lonliness 😡

di thats because she never expressed it. She was too afraid to even speak up. Thye loved and thought these instruction would only help her in life and noone else. at the end of the day, it was all for her good. They were right on their part whereas she was right on her part.

the tuition part sad again when those 3 musketeers and swayam too 😲 would make fun of her. sharon liked swayam 😳 🥳 ❤️ of course she would have felt different because it was so new to her. she would keep staring at swayam 😆 😛

ahh what an obidient girl.. 😆 she completed her excercise and started doing the next one.. heyyy it reminds me of someone at tuition... 😲 it feels like me 🤣 😕 can relate sharon to myself in this os...boring 😆 but i didnt like anyone like sharon 😉 😆

really? you seriously do that? main aisa kuch nahin karti 😆 balki mein ek exercise nahin khatam pati , dusra toh sur ki baat 😆 and it would be better if u dont tlk bout liking guys. ive lost all hopes on u 😆

sharon gets a chit and shes caught 😲... her friend and mostly swayam's neighbour caught her red handed that she has feelings for swayam 😛... i thought she'll reveal about sharon's feelings to swayam but what's this 😲 her tuition teacher got hold of the chit... oh damn 🤢 😲 but the call was a saviour 😃... sharon lost the chit 😕 now what 😲

she went home and was still thinking about the chit... before we could think that her ma'm has the chit swayam calls her it was actually unexpected for sharon and even for the readers that swayam will call sharon 😃.yay swayam called sharon and asked him to meet her near their colony park

she goes to the park believing swayam 😳 and their formal conversation 😆 in the beginning 😆 then finally sharon shoots a question and in return swayam surprises her by showing her the chit in his hand... now that was a shocker for sharon 😲 now swayam had come to know that sharon likes him and he's even asking her to tell him the truth

sharon thought he's anyways not going to reciprocate his feelings so she told him the truth and then yay swayam confessed his love to her ❤️

a total surprise for sharon ... it definitely had to be the best day of their life...

their conversation after the confession was cute...

it is so rightly said "truth is beauty, beauty is truth"- by keats and because sharon told him the truth they are together today 😃

swayam told her that it was his friends who always made fun of her and then swayam would be questioned about his relationship with sharon if he tried to stop them... now when they are officially a couple swayam proudly tells her that he will tell them that sharon rai prakash is his girl friend 😃 ❤️ so cute... and the good night kiss ❤️

this was an adorable os and really well written 😊 . you kept the innocence alive while writing it because swaron were still in school. jaan swaron ko school mein hi pyaar hogaya, main toh college mein hoon, phir bhi nai hua aur shayad kabhi nai hoga 😆🤣 loved reading every bit of it 😃 it was perfect angel... perfect as a birthday gift for me. thank you soo much jaan 🤗 🤗 thank you for making out time from your busy schedule to write an os for your di 🤗

love you lots 🤗

P.S. bohot time baad itna bada comemnt diya 😆 hope tujhe acha lage 🤗 🤗

thank you soo much for the dedication🤗

P.S. mere gift pe bhi comment kar kabhi 😕 on both the os 😆