Swaron OS : My Perfect LoveStory!

..Aishaa.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
SWARON OS : My perfect LoveStory

hey guys im back with another OS. but this is dedicated to my DI, as it was her bday on 3rd. sorry i couldnt put it up that day, blame m y hectic schedule. anyways its up now. and ya there is some more stuff which will be up soon. for now please read the os
and yes, this is written from Sharons point of view.



"The course of true love never did run smooth."
- William Shakespeare, A Midsummer Nights's Dream



Love, as we know it, a believe, a bliss, a worship, it's the most purest feeling in this world. Everyone loves someone in this world, whether it's their soul mate, their family or their friends. One should consider themselves very fortunate to have all three with them but me, I don't even have 1. Fate, my worst enemy or I can say my only enemy has played the cruelest games with me ever. My parents, my family, my friends I have nothing, simply nothing. The day I was born, almost a year after that my parents were gone. But I had my granny and grandpa with me always. They sent me to school, took care of me and brought me up. But not even a year back, I was left all alone. 14 long years they were my parents, and now I miss them even more than I miss mommy. Even they left me alone and went away. I was sent to an orphan place. I left behind everything, my school my friends, my best friend and my most special memories, my childhood memories. Soon I was even adopted by a family. I was happy. Maybe I get to live my life again, but again fate never seemed to be on my side. This was a family who knew the correct meaning of discipline. They had adopted me just for the sake of having a girl child as they already did have another 2 younger sons. Though they loved me but they wanted strict discipline. I was given many instructions by them, as well 90% above in exams, no partying, only studies, playing chess, and I like one obedient child followed everything. Sounds a little dramatic right? But that's how my life is. Everyone around me used to consider me a studious child, keeping in mind my attire, I mean my spectacles, which I used to adjust after every damn class. But I didn't like studies at all. I was sent to one of the classiest schools of the city and there being a studious child was so not cool. So this ended up me not having any of my friends.

Anyways like everyday I came back home, mom greeted me with a kiss and I met my 2 little brothers. I went back to my room and changed. I just lay down on my bed and closed my eyes. I didn't know when I fell asleep till I heard some knocks on my door

" Honey, u awake. U have tuition baby. "

I suddenly got up with a jerk.

" Yes mommy, I was just studying for a while and to avoid disturbance I just preferred locking my door"

" That's alright baby. Its tuition time so get ready and yes doesn't forget to carry ure snacks wid u. u may just feel hungry there"

" ofcourse mommy. Thanks"

I packed my bag with my books and put on my shorts and tee. Then I wore my new glasses, which mommy had brought me last month and I left for my class. I always prefer walking it down than using the car. It being in the same colony as mine turns out to be a good thing for me. After a 5 minute short walk I reach the place. I climb up the stairs and enter my class. Ms. Mary was sitting there with only 2 of her students. I go inside and we greet each other with a "hi". The other 2 students were 2 girls who were younger than me. They were sisters and I must say one of the sweetest people I have ever come across. I simply say a "hi" and take my place. I take out my maths book and start solving my problems. Almost an hour and I was finished with them. I look up to call for Ms. Mary but she was nowhere. Instead the group of the 3 Musketeers had arrived. They were the most rowdy people this tuition had. I wonder how Ms. Mary tolerates them. I ignore them and continue with my work. I flip over my pages to find another exercise for myself when I suddenly see another guy entering. He was one of their friends. He was not really a part of the 3 musketeers group but yes a very close friend of them. Together they would always crack jokes and I would always be their victim. For the first few months I used to feel bad, once tears even started making way through my eyes but now I had learned to ignore. But these days it was getting harder for me to concentrate. Swayam, yes right, the close friend of the musketeers group, I don't know when I developed feeling for him. Many a time I would find my self staring and stealing glances at him while the class was on. Something like this coming from me is a bit surprising but I don't know life just gets complicated day by day. But for I knew we could never be together. He could never like me, I was always be the center of jokes for him. And he was a total playboy, I could always hear these guys talk about his past and present relationships and every time I would hear a new name of a new girl. Nyways I decided to wipe these thoughts out of my mind. Exams were just round the corner and I was busy admiring this guy. Praise the lord! I started solving my problems when suddenly I see a chit being thrown on me

" you like swayam na?"

I see the chit properly. It was from Pragya. Ohh wait when did she come? And when did she get to know. I just look at her and she had this slight glint of smirk on her face. Freakk! She got to know. Dammit! Swayam and Pragya were neighbors and childhood friends. They never used to talk much in class but they were pretty close. And that's what mainly freaked me out

" how do u know"

That was all I wrote and I threw back the chit. I had no idea how she got to know. Neither any of my classmates nor any of the people in tuition knew. I should have kept a control on my feelings, atleats later I wouldn't have to repel. I should have known this is just some infatuation, which is common at this age.

" That means you like him! :O Its just that I have caught u staring at him a numerous times and so I just gave it a random thought. I never knew this was serious! OMG! I gotta tell this to swayam "

While I was reading the chit, someone suddenly snatched it. I look up to only find Ms. Mary glaring at me with those horrifying pair of eyes. " I hope she doesn't read it." That was all that was echoing in my mind. She was about to read the chit when her phone suddenly starts ringing. She checks the caller id and I could sense a sort of panic on her face. She tucks the paper inside her book and goes out of the room to attend the call. I took a sigh of relief and continued to do my work. I will tell her to give me the book once she comes back to check a problem. That's when I can take out the chit. I continue to do my work. She comes back after another 5 minutes. As I had previously thought, I ask her for the book and she gives it to me. Thank god she had forgotten about the chit. I open the book, and why was the chit not there? I very well saw her tucking it here and now it suddenly disappeared. I look around my chair and almost everywhere possible.

" Sharon any problem?"

" No maam, im fine"

I give back the book and further solve all the problems. I cleared all my doubts and then left to go back my home. Throughout my walk I was wondering about where exactly could the chit go. I turn around and see my house s. I hardly got to know about the time. I go inside and make myself some bread and milk. I eat it fast and then go to the garden. I sit on the grass and look up at the sky. Soon to make myself more confortable I lie down and still think about the chit when suddenly my phone starts blaring. It was from an unknown number so I pick It up

" Hey, is this Sharon?"

" Yes, this is me. But may I knows whose speaking"

" Hey Sharon, its me swayam. Umm I was just wondering if you could come and meet at the colony park right now. "

" Right now?"

"Yup, pleasee. Trust me this not one of my crappy pranks. "

" Okay then ill see you in 5 there. Bye "

"Thanks a ton. Byee"

I keep down my phone. I sit there wondering what could it be. And why would swayam be asking help from me? I decided to go there and find the answers myself. I go to my room and check myself at the mirror. I then go to my brothers room and inform him that im at the near by park and will be back shortly. I take a nutrition bar from the kitchen and while munching it I walk to the park.

I enter the park and look around. I couldn't find him anywhere blame the area it covers. I go a little ahead and find him standing beneath a tree. I was a little nervous but I eventually gather up a little courage and walk towards him

" hey swayam"

He looks up with a warm smile on his face. He was hiding something in his hand that was behind his back. My curiosity was just increasing moment by moment.

" hey shar, sharon. How are you?"

" im great. What about you?"

We both were very nervous while talking and one could just see our faces and tell us that how much nervousness was there. After all this was the first ever one to one conversation we were having. I realize I better go back to the topic.

" umm I suppose you called me here for something"

" yeah! Actually I found this little chit in tuition today. "

He hands me over the chit I was looking for all this while. He was kinda feeling shy and a bit embarrassed. Well I could only blame myself for that. What a jerk I am This was what he was hiding behind his back. Shitt! He got to know. I was deadd. It would be even difficult to look up to him at tuition now. I was in a total soup, and my life was nothing but a total mess right now.

" I just wanted to know whether whatever is written is true or not"

I didn't know what to say. Not even in my wildest dreams I had imagined this would ever be happening. I was confused, whether shall I say the truth or shall I just lie again. I thought it would be better to say the truth and get done with his now.

" umm yess, that's true"

I answered with my head hanging downwards. I just couldn't look into his eyes anymore. But what came next surprised me. He had suddenly engulfed me in a tight hug.

" I love you Sharon, I love you"

Those were the sweetest words I had ever heard. The sweetest melody one had ever sung, the feeling was magical, the moment was a bliss. Everything was just looking so perfect.

" I love you too swayam. I really really love you "

We still didn't break the hug. Afterall it was not something simple. It was big, the best moment of my life, I couldn't let it slip so easily. Finally after a while we started feelings a little suffocated and decide to leave each other.

We both sit down under the tree holding each others hand. I was resting my head on his shoulder and his head was upon mine. We were playing with our hands, twirling them, ticking each other's; all seemed so beautifull.

" Thank you Sharon"

"Thank you? But for what?"

" for believing me.for coming to the park today. For a moment I thought you would never come here"

" Swayam, I love you and I believe you"

" im glad Sharon. You know I never made fun of you. It was always my friends. I tried to stop them, always did I try but never did they stop. They would always question my relationship with you? And I would never have an answer, but today, today I can proudly say, my girlfriend is Sharon Raiprakash"

I instantly started blushing after listening to his last words, which definitely didn't go unnoticed by him. " Someone is blushing and all. Haan? " I playfully hit him on his chest " ouch "was all he murmured.

" sorry, was it too hard?"

" yaa, obviously if u hit me soo hard ill get hurt. Human hun, lagti hai mujhe" "really? Then there you go again"

I hit him on his chest again and ran for my life while he chased me behind. Me being a slower runner was soon caught by him. . he held my hand and pulled me towards him. Just when I felt that our lips are gonna finally brush against each other he just pulled me into another tight hug. At this moment, by his this gesture, I could proudly say, I have chosen the best boyfriend." His hand were holding me protectively by my wiast and my hands were encircled around his shoulder. I made myself a little comfortable and just rubbed my hands against his hair. After a few minutes we parted away.

We looked up and it was getting dark

" I don't think its safe for you to stay here any longer. I think we shall leave "

I was about to leave when he joins me.

"I'm gonna drop you and then ill go back home"

He just held my hand and we walked till my house together holding hands. We reached my house and he just gave me a small peck on my cheek

" This was ure good night kiss"

"and this is urs" I gave him another peck and as I was feeling to shy to stand there any longer I just ran into my house. Without meeting anyone I run off to my balcony. I go inside and there I see him standing downstairs. I just send him a flying kiss, which he catches and kisses back. He then waves a bye and leaves.

I can easily say this was definitely one of the very special days for me. A day ill cherish all my life. Now what was left was to make mommmy and daddy accept him. Im keeping fingers crossed now and hoping for the best.



Hope you all liked it. please do comment and like. criticism is most welcome. im ready for all tomatoes and joota chappals as i know this was quite boring. it seriously didnt turn out the way i expected it to.

-Aisha




Edited by ..Aishaa.. - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

34

Views

5.1k

Users

27

Likes

87

Frequent Posters

..Aishaa.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Happy Birthday Lalita dii!!!
i know im super latee and you have full authority to kill me for that. but kya karu, yeh schedule mujhe aaj kal annoy karne laga hai. anywyas wishing you a very hapyy belated birthday. i made some VMs but this stupid youtube is just not cooperating with me. ill soon fix it and theyll be up soon. and yup ive even made edits which ill post soon. tab tak os padho :
i wont say much , just that hope you ahd a wonderful birthday. i wish you all the success and happiness in life and may you achieve all ure goal and hope all ure dreams come true.
PS - hope you find ure prince charming soon :P
..Aishaa.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
varsh - mayur

cute love story ...continue soon😊😊😊
cscs thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
res😊
unres..
teddy..i loved it..🤗
its a super duper lovely os..
Edited by cscs - 12 years ago
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
that was cute and lovely os...
-spongy- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
that was super cute...
i loved it
swaron ☺️
adorable
do write more
SanskritiS thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Amazing Os 😊
Sharon liked Swayam n Swayam found out accidentally
Loved the confession
Please continue
BusyIndivaBee thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
angel 🤗🤗🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
thank you sooo much jaan for this birthday gift 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
something from your side for me is always extra special 🤗 🤗 🤗
well coming to the os it was really adorable and amazing to read...
and id be really glad saying that you've improved your writing skills a lot 😃



"The course of true love never did run smooth."

it was a perfect start for your os. The sharon's pov was explained very well.
yoi showed sharon as a loner, she had lost her parents a year after her birth, then her grand parents who were her only support after a span of 14 years. she was sent to an orphanage 😭
then she was adopted by a family where discipline was given the 1st priority ... discipline toh har ghar mein hona chahiye par yeh kya, inke yaha toh thoda zyaada hi hai 🤢

"I was given many instructions by them, as well 90% above in exams, no partying, only studies, playing chess, and I like one obedient child followed everything."

sharon was such an obidient child 😃 😛 she did everything that her parents expected from her even though she wished to live a different life apart from studying all the time, but in the process she was lost in her own world and nobody wanted to be friends with her 😒 her family loves her but they are failing to see her lonliness 😡

the tuition part sad again when those 3 musketeers and swayam too 😲 would make fun of her. sharon liked swayam 😳 🥳 ❤️ of course she would have felt different because it was so new to her. she would keep staring at swayam 😆 😛
ahh what an obidient girl.. 😆 she completed her excercise and started doing the next one.. heyyy it reminds me of someone at tuition... 😲 it feels like me 🤣 😕 can relate sharon to myself in this os...boring 😆 but i didnt like anyone like sharon 😉 😆

sharon gets a chit and shes caught 😲... her friend and mostly swayam's neighbour caught her red handed that she has feelings for swayam 😛... i thought she'll reveal about sharon's feelings to swayam but what's this 😲 her tuition teacher got hold of the chit... oh damn 🤢 😲 but the call was a saviour 😃... sharon lost the chit 😕 now what 😲

she went home and was still thinking about the chit... before we could think that her ma'm has the chit swayam calls her it was actually unexpected for sharon and even for the readers that swayam will call sharon 😃.yay swayam called sharon and asked him to meet her near their colony park

she goes to the park believing swayam 😳 and their formal conversation 😆 in the beginning 😆 then finally sharon shoots a question and in return swayam surprises her by showing her the chit in his hand... now that was a shocker for sharon 😲 now swayam had come to know that sharon likes him and he's even asking her to tell him the truth
sharon thought he's anyways not going to reciprocate his feelings so she told him the truth and then yay swayam confessed his love to her ❤️
a total surprise for sharon ... it definitely had to be the best day of their life...
their conversation after the confession was cute...
it is so rightly said "truth is beauty, beauty is truth"- by keats and because sharon told him the truth they are together today 😃

swayam told her that it was his friends who always made fun of her and then swayam would be questioned about his relationship with sharon if he tried to stop them... now when they are officially a couple swayam proudly tells her that he will tell them that sharon rai prakash is his girl friend 😃 ❤️ so cute... and the good night kiss ❤️

this was an adorable os and really well written 😊 . you kept the innocence alive while writing it because swaron were still in school. jaan swaron ko school mein hi pyaar hogaya, main toh college mein hoon, phir bhi nai hua aur shayad kabhi nai hoga 😆🤣 loved reading every bit of it 😃 it was perfect angel... perfect as a birthday gift for me. thank you soo much jaan 🤗 🤗 thank you for making out time from your busy schedule to write an os for your di 🤗
love you lots 🤗
P.S. bohot time baad itna bada comemnt diya 😆 hope tujhe acha lage 🤗 🤗
thank you soo much for the dedication🤗

P.S. mere gift pe bhi comment kar kabhi 😕 on both the os 😆







Edited by BusyIndivaBee - 12 years ago
..Aishaa.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
why am i being told to continue this?
this was an OS. and it only consisted of 1 part. though if u guys want, i can try and write a sequel but i had initially not planned on continuing this. so guys do let me know whether u wanna continue or not
pakpearl thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
So nice...
A beautiful gigt 4 my Lali 😃

Related Topics

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima · 5 months ago

A Love Story Sealed in Dance Dreams The sun shone brightly over the beautifully decorated outdoor venue, where fairy lights twinkled even in the...

Expand ▼
Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse · 9 months ago

Hello, I don't know what came into i pen it down. Hope you like it. COVER BY @EXOTICDISASTER It was supposed to be just another evening at...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".