Phir Mohabbat #2 - Maaneet ff Part 35- pg 40/14 april - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
eli re eli kya hai ye paheli
aisa waisa kuch kyun hota h saheli
tururum...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Aankho se tune ye kya keh diya..
Dil ye deewana dhakne laga...
Tanhayi mein hum mile is tarah..
Baarish me shola bhadakne laga...
Tu machalne laga...
Cha raha hai ajab sa nashaaa...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Mein shayar to nahi...
Magar ye hasi... Jab se dekha tujhko mujhko shayari aa gayi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
arrey tu inni jaldi jaldi kaise post kar rhi h
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Tip tip barsa pani...
Pani ne aag lagayi...

Hayeee maaneet ki yaad aa gayi yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Sorry wo gulam ka song and tip tip..
mat pakad... It was aivehi... :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
am going re
sabzi lana hain
byee
30 mins mein aati hun bye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Hinal I m waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE

Many of ur are in doubt as to why Geet has left???

The main reason is her past along with the incidents that happened to Nandini which has broken her trust on love n she now believes that she can never fall in love but yet she has fallen in love n her fate will never have happiness n so she decided to leave as she doesnt want maan n others to suffer bcoz of her... U can call her a coward as well as she is trying to run away but this is her love bcoz of which she is trying to protect those whom she loves... plz do read her convo with Shilpa in Part 25 to know the reasons if u have missed it

N Many told that why didnt Vicky try to stop her???
Well their friendship is a bit different... In their friendship they have a mutual understanding that we cant always share everything to them... U must have heard Ranbir's words in Ajab Prem Ki Gazab Kahani right... No demands... No expectations... the same is in their friendship so he didnt try to stop her but he did all that was possible by him to know where she would be n if she needed any help...

If u have any other doubt plz let me know...

Love,
Hinal
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u sooo much Shruthe Di for this beautiful banner... Im so much in love with it ❤️❤️❤️


PART TWENTY EIGHT

One Month Later,

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pMFl6R5OqT4[/YOUTUBE]


Music


A girl is seeing walking on the narrow streets of Kasauli rubbing her arms to protect herself from the cold. She smiled sadly at the irony of the situation... she could warm herself from the cold outside but the cold inside her was consuming her and she didnt know how to protect herself from it...


Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila


A guy is seen shirtless breaking ice pieces in a dark room lit only by the moonlight. As he is about to hit the next ice slab he remembers her face and his eyes are filled with pain and agony and he hits the ice slab so hard that his hand scratches a sharp edge and his hand starts bleeding a bit.


Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan

Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan


The girl soon reached a small cottage and opened the door and rushed inside. She removed her shawl and lit the fire. She then went to the small living room and took the photo in her hand n caressed it. She remembered their first meeting where they both dashed and his coffee was spilled on her dress and her arms... the way he looked at her... the way he saved her... and the way she scolded him without listening to him... She started laughing remembering his face...


Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar


He sat down on the floor and remembered the first time he saw her in the hospital... the first thing he noticed of her was her voice... as she sang he felt he was in heaven... but the most beautiful feature of her was her eyes... they expressed her heart's tale... her eyes would shine when she was happy... her face was the most beautiful face he had seen like a face of an angel... She was indeed an angel who saved his life... but then she left him...


Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar


Geet remembered the time Maan kissed her cheeks... the way her heart fluttered when he was so close to her... she felt she was in an unknown land... she remembered all the times he caressed her cheeks... his hands were so soft... He was always caring and sweet to her... whenever she was hurt he used to make sure that she would apply some medicine on her wounds...


Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila


Maan remembered the rains when she hugged him for the first time... He saw a sweet innocent child in her as she played in the rains... but there was something else in her eyes when she hugged him... Pain... Hope... Why was there pain in her eyes??? He remembered seeing the same pain the last time he saw her... He tried to find her...but it seemed that she had disappeared but he wasnt one among those who left hope... He was still trying to find her and he would continue doing it till either he found her or death took him away... He then got up and went to his room n changed and took Geet's photo and sat on the rocking chair looking at it. He soon dozed off.


Music


The night passed and gave way for a new morning. But it wasnt a new morning for either Geet nor Maan. They were still there where they were a month back. Maan in the hospital bed waiting for Geet... His Mishty... while Geet was outside the ward looking at Maan for the last time... Though they had moved ahead with their life but they were still stuck there looking into each other's eyes...


Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka
Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka
Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein
Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein


As Geet finished her morning work, she left the house wearing a sweater on her dress. She texted to Vicky that she was fine and she was going to work and then put it on silent mode. She had somehow persuaded Vicky that he wouldnt call her until anything important. As she walked to her work place the memories crashed into her mind. She tried to not remember them but she couldnt stop herself... she remembered the times she troubled Maan when she was drunk or angry... The way he used to manofy her so sweety... the way he called her Mishty...


Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai

Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar


Maan woke up early and first went and checked on Dadi... He was not the only one who was hurt and in pain after Geet left but everyone was... Dadi seemed to have lost herself in some place... She never smiled nor she talked much... She would just sit in her room staring at a place... Maan went and touched her feet and then helped her stand up and took her for a walk in the garden... Dadi didnt talk just walked... It was as if she had become lifeless... Maan had tears seeing his family like this... He wanted to be angry on Geet and hate her for the tears and pain his family was in but he couldnt... Not after reading her letter...


Music


As Geet reached the small shop where she worked as an assistant she put up a smile on her face... though it looked like she was happy but her smile never reached her eyes... As she entered she saw the owner, Mrs. Verma and Mr.Verma in a hug... She always had a smile when she looked at them... Their love was evident in every action of theirs... The way their eyes shone as they saw the other... the way they would try to make the other smile... their care... their teasing everything just shouted Love... Seeing them she wished she could also have such a beautiful relationship with Maan... But alas she would never have it... As the reality sunk in her heart broke again and tears welled up in her eyes but she hid them before anyone could see and greeted Mr. and Mrs.Verma

The day soon passed away... Geet returned to her cottage while Maan returned to Khurana Mansion. Geet made some sandwich and had them and then she went to the near by temple. As she sat there she prayed for everyone and wished she could go back... She prayed God to show her the right path...

Koi Na Sune Sisakati Aanhon Ko
Koi Na Dhare Tadapati Baahon Ko
Aadhi Aadhi Puri Khwaishein
Tooti Footi Sab Farmaaishein

After the morning walk,Maan had freshened up and left for office. He had the final presentation of the project for Mr. Shah. The same project which Geet had worked on... After coming back from the hospital he took up this project to complete so that he could have Geet in his memories while he kept his search for her still going... Soon the presentation started and everyone loved the designs... Maan had personally presented his Mishty's designs and made sure that nothing wrong went with the presentation. After the presentation Mr.Shah congraluted them for the success of the project... Though he was smiling he wished Geet was here as she deserved all the credits but she wasnt here...

Kahin Shak Hain Kahin Nafrat Ki Deewaar Hai
Kahin Jeet Mein Bhi Shamil Palpal Haar Hain
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

After finishing dinner everyone left for their room while Maan went to Kanchi's room. He had requested Gaurav and Vidya to stay back and every night he would take Kanchi to the garden like Geet used to and talk to her... Today also he told her the same time he used to tell... How he had met her bua... how they had become friends... how they used to fight... how she used to irritate him... how she left him without a word...how he was trying to search for her everywhere possible...

Ho O O Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Ho O O O Ho O O O

After returning home,Geet texted Vicky about her day and then she went to the rocking chair and sat there looking at the moon in pain... she wondered if this pain would ever cease... if the distance she had created would ever lessen... if she would be able to see them once more...

Na Poocho Dard Bandon Se
Hansi Kaisi Khushi Kaisi
Musibat Sar Pe Rehati Hain
Kabhi Kaisi Kabhi Kaisi
Ho O O O... Rabba, Rabba Ho O O Ho
Rabba Ho O O, Ho O Ho Rabba

Maan returned inside after sometime. Kanchi had slept hearing to him. He went to her room and placed her in the crib and made sure she was comfortable and warm and then closed the door slowly. As he was going to his room he heard someone's phone ring at the dining table. He looked around to see if anyone was there but no one was around and so he went near the table. He took the mobile and saw a notification...

Precap -

Tum Hi Ho

Love,
Hinal

~ Prev ~ Part 27 ~ Next ~ Part 29

P.S. - I know its a small update but frankly Im not happy the way it has come I hope u guys like it...
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago

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