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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

exactly 14-21 paraghraph''s are too much na...😳


time is also long 7 days
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Posted: 12 years ago
mera 7 kya 70 din main bhi wahi speed hoti hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 15(A)

He was very angry not at Geet but at himself.

What a fool he has been he fell for NT? And that chit, she was lying all the way.

In his sore mood he entered MP's cabin only to find his sweethearts being entertained by Prem.

He tried to smile, but was caught by MP.

MP: hey Maan, we have been waiting.

M: hi, Prem

Pr: hi Maan

M: looks we will have to leave now

Pr: ok

P: Ok Prem, will continue tomorrow

Pr: ok Pari, I will be waiting for you

P: you will not wait for MP

MP: Pari!

P: Look MP you two are still not married and he is fed up of you

M: Stop Pari, MP I am telling you she watches too much of daily soaps

MP: let's leave, I don't want to argue in front of Prem

P: and ruin her image, right Prem

Prem was speechless

In the car

MP: what happened Maan? She did not come?

M: she did come

MP: then?

M: we will talk later about that

MP: ok

She knew something was wrong, the afar look in his eyes told her everything

Finally when Pari slept she asked him

MP: what's it Maan?

M: MP she is NT

MP: who is NT?

M: that girl I fell for she is Myra's sister Naintara Behl, she is not Geet Handa

MP: you fell for NT

M: yes

MP: so what's the big deal (she tried to sound cool)

M: Manpreet, she lied that she is Geet Handa

MP: ok does her being NT change things in your heart

M: that's not the issue MP, the thing is she lied

MP: ok why would she lie?

M: IDK

MP: look Maan you are overreacting

M: MP!

MP: listen, calm down, now I will tell you who Geet is?

M: you know that she pretends to be Geet

MP: Maan first listen

M: but

MP: Maan!

M: no

MP: Chup Bilkul Chup, listen carefully

And as always he was quite

Manpreet told NT's story from her persepective.

M: OMG, he is such an animal

MP: yes, now let me carry on

She told him more

M: so if she got the divorce why change her name

MP: I am coming to it Maan

She told him more

M: What! Arjun tried to kill her, OH MY GOD

MP: Yes, it was then this change of identity was decided, and her Brother knows about all this, he helped her get her new identity.

M: so much happened with her, poor soul

MP: first she had to pay for Myra's mistake, then Dev's and his family's and now when she is trying to start her new life, you are unsettling her

M: I am sorry MP

MP: go and tell her

M: yes I will go and tell her first thing in the morning

MP: no! you are going now

M: Now! Its 11:30 pm and by the time I will reach there it will be 12:30 am

MP: Maan you should go now, she is broke, she is sad and at night unhappy mind attracts negative thoughts, what if she does something in her unhappy state.

Maan was scared

M: I will talk to her on phone

MP: no you will go now or never

M: ok am going

And he left to meet her

I recently don't pm so check FB and IF pages to see if I have updated😉


Part 15 (B) coming soon

hope you liked the part 14(B),
now let us see what happens in the next part.
what will Maan Babu do now?
will Geet listen to him?
will she be Ok ?
will she do something as MP redicted?

now the parts have started merging...

please read it
and tell me how you find it

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hope you understood where I went😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
10 min main hogaya😃
smj1977.shruti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

I had it in my mind since I started typing 2day

but was not getting time

so after you said I thought about it

I usually give short updates😉

so could manage it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan ko sach maloom pad gaya...
sab seeda hogaya...
Maan bhaaga apni pyaar ko manane...
waiting for more
smj1977.shruti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Maan ko sach maloom pad gaya...

sab seeda hogaya...
Maan bhaaga apni pyaar ko manane...
waiting for more


not 2day dear

this much for you
as return gift to your pm

now 2moro

will finish this one in a day or two
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


not 2day dear

this much for you
as return gift to your pm

now 2moro

will finish this one in a day or two

yeh give n take policy thodi hai...
will be waiting anyways...
kal night going out of station ...
so can read it on Saturday only...
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Posted: 12 years ago
she knows he can speak...

he knows the truth...

will be waiting to know what happens next...

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