MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
beautiful maaneet moments
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Superb update. Delhi jake koi prblm to nhi aa jayengi na
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
nice dear😊

geet bossing maan😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
part 13
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
thnkss alot guyss for ur support...
love you all...😊😊
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~~here is part 14~~~
MG SS ~DILRUBA~~


PART -- 14

Maan was resting & geet was watching him...😊

After sometime MAAN wake up & goes to washroom...

nd maan's phn start ringing...
geet frm room: maan sir apka phn baaj raha hain...
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maan: utha lo...
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geet: sir par main kese???
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maan: kuch nahi hoga utha lo...
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so geet recieve the call
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geet: hello!!! namaste...
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dadi: namaste bete!!! yeh MAAN SINGH KHURANA ka number hain na??
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geet: jii... yeh sir ka he num hain... actully woh washroom hain toh main phn utha liya....
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dadi: ohh
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geet: wese aap kon ???
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dadi: hum savitri devi... MAAN ki dadi...
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geet: ohh sorry dadi.. i mean maam... kese ho aap??
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dadi: hum thik hain beta... MAAN bhar aaye toh hume phn karne ko kehna...
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maan slowly coming out frm washroom...
maan: kiska phn hain geet...
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geet to maan: apke dadi ka... aap asse bahar kyun aaye... mujhe bla nahi sakte the.. { maan ke pher main chot lage hain na isliye}
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dadi: was shockd: MSK ko chilla raha hain?? strange..
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geet: ek min maam !! aab 2 min wait kijiye woh bahar aagaye
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DADI WAS Listening everything
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geet goes to help maan
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geet: mujhe bula nahi sakte aap?? abhi apko lag jate toh..??
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maan: kuch nahi hoga mujhe...
... geet help him to sit in bed...


geet: yeh lijiye dadi ka phn hain
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maan: hello dadi... kese ho aap??
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dadi: hum to thik hain bete ...par apko kya hua hain... HP jane ke baad toh aap sab kuch bhul he gaye... koi phn nahi... koi kabar nahi... asse toh aap nahi the...
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maan: dadi woh yaha koi hain jiske wajje se main sab kuch bhul gaye... { maan looking at geet}
... {geet blushing}...
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dadi: woh toh apko apke dream girl mill gaye??
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maan: ha dadi mill gaye par, woh mujhe like nahi karte...
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geet{slowly}: maine assa kab kaha???
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maan {slowly} : wesa bhi toh nahi kaha??
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maan to dadi: dadi main soch raha hu wapas dehli aa jau.
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dadi: woh toh apko aana hi hoga... .
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maan: kyun dadi kya hua?? sab thik toh hain na??? annie toh thik hain na????
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dadi: aap shant ho jaye bete sab thik hain... but KC main bohot important meeting hain jis main apka hona bohot jaruri hain... ek din ke liye toh aana hi hoga...
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maan: thik hain dadi... i'm coming 2morrow...
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dadi: ok bete... hum rakhte hain... bye.
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maan: bye dadi...
...
. geet was listening silently { nd a tear drop frm her eyes}
{ maan saw her tear}
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maan: geet yaha betho..
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geet: mujhe kaam hain ... baad main aate hu...
.she was about to go...
maan pull her duppatta

maan: tum chahte ho main uth ke tumhare pass aau iss halat main...
geet : nahi
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maan: toh phir yaha betho...
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geet sits beside him...

maan wipe geets tear..
maan: roo kyun rahe ho???
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geet: aap jaa rahe ho iss liye...
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maan: ek din main wapas aa jaunga...
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geet: phir bhi jaa toh rahe ho naa...
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maan: main aa jaunga... ek din bhi nahi reh paoge mere bina...
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geet: ek minute bhi nahi.
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maan: toh phir woh teen labz kyun nahi keh dete...
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geet: toh aap nahi jaaoo ge?? { innocently}
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maan: ek din ke liye toh jana hi hoge... par agar tumne keh diya to tumhe bhi le ke jaunga...
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geet: aab jante ho main nahi aaunge,,,,
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maan: par tum keh doge toh mujhe aacha lage ga...
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geet: par main apne feeling ko leke sure nahi hu... i knw u love me...but iss liye main apke pyar se khel nahi sakte... mujhe khud nahi pata main apke bare main kya soch te... mujhe thora time chahiye ...
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maan: agar sure nahi ho toh phir mere liye itne fikar kyun karte ho.. mere jane se tumhe rona kyun aata hain???
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geet: mujhe kuch bhi nahi pata... iss liye toh apse time maang rahi hu..
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maan: toh main jaa rahu ... kal tak tum soch loo...
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geet: aap nahi hoge toh main sure kese ho paunge??? mujhe apko janna hain...
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maan: par princess mujhe ek din ke liye jana hoga, na??
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geet: aap iss halat main kese jaoo ge??? yaha ke school ka kaam bhi toh hain...
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man: woh sab toh tum sambhal loge... i knw that... aur sirf ek din ki baat he na...
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geet: par main kese...
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maan: tum he karoge...or tumhe mujhe janna hain naa toh phir main tumhe apne baare kuch baate likhe ke de jaata hu.. woh sab par ke mujhe jaan lene, thin hain??
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geet: par...
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maan: par war aab kuch nahi main aaj ek diary main main bare main kuch khass batee likh dunga,tum usse par na... or tab tak main loot aaunga... ok??
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geet: ok!!! par aap waha jake mujhe bhul toh nahi jayenge na???
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maan:kabhi bhi nahi... aur main tumhe phone karta rahunga.. ok??
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geet:ok... main apke packing kar de te hu...
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maan: packing nahi karne hoge... ek din ki baat hain...
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geet: thik main medicine de dete hu...aap time pe le lena
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maan:ok!!! aab mujhe bhuk lage hain... kuch khane ko doge??

geet:main toh bhul he gaye abhi late hu...
... geet goes to kitchen...
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precap: maan in dehli & geet reading diary...😊😊
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~~note: plzz guyss more likess nd big comments plzzz~~
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
awesome part
geet not sure about her feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
nice dear😊

plz do nt separate maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
😃awesome update
👏geet never knew that maan had a dadi too😲
aww maaneet are so cute plsss don't separate them in any circumstances😕
hmm so geet madam still confuse about her feelings hope she realizes her love soon 😳
maan going to delhi and geet reading diary very interesting 😆
waiting waiting waiting 😃
plzzz update soon 😳
thank u so much for the pm 😃
love aanya😃
p.s don't get disappointed cheer up ur likes will increase remember u r an awesome writer .
I will always comment on ur thread .keep writing 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update'
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update.
Daadi ko bi pta chl gya. Thats gr8.
I hope maan wapas aa jaye.

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