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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: aanya84
😊😃Thank u nelu for such a warm reply
See u again proved that u r a fantastic writer by giving us a such an awesome update

Aww It feel so good to see them all happy happy 😃😳

maan allowed geet to read his diary this shows their immense trust on each other😃

aree maan is going to delhi hope he comes soon 😆😃

geet is such a cutie 😛so enthu for reading her lovers diary 😆😆

maan is seriously so advanced he planned every aspect of his lihe with geet cant wait to see his dreams coming true 😉\

waiting waiting and waiting

plzzz update soon 😃

😃thank u so much for the pm

love aanya 😃

Again thnkss alot lot dear... i feel very happy after reading ur comments... u r such a sweetheart...
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love nelu...

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: aditimaan
wow superb
maan going to delhi nd geet missing him
hayee kya diary hain
geet drooling on maan in sleep
awsm .thnx 4 long ud.waiting

long updates are only for you...😊😊

thks a lot dear😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: preeti555
awesome part
maan dialogues were superb MSK ka charm hai hi aisa oh I so much loved it
geet jaldi apni feelings maan ko bata do
maaneet were amazing
You are really a good writer

Thank you so much dear 😊😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

wonderful updates...

sorry for late response...

saare pms padte padte late ho gaya...

this is very simple and beautiful love story...

Geet is Maan's dreamgirl and Maan is Angel in Geet's life...

but Geet bhool gayi and Maan bhi ki Maan ko uske Dad ke doctors se baat karni thi...and how is her dad in all these days ...he is completely forgotten...does Geet started living in KH ?...how can she ?...she is living in village and these all things can create problem...if her dad get his conscious back then what will he feel if others will tell all these rumors to him...what they are doing inside nobody knows...people see from outside and can create rumors...

thanx for pm...

firstly thnkss lot for ur comment...
tumhare thore doubt toh iss update ke baad dur ho gaye honge...
nd want to tell u that... geet & her dad is like best frnds... they understand & trust each other a lot... nd geet ke dad jab thik honge oh of course maan ke bare main sab pata karenge... AUR MANEET dad ke permission ke bina kuch bhi nahi karenge..😊😊😊
nd more doubt clear karne ke liye toh baki ke bhi updates parne parenge...😉😊😊
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with lots of love NELU...

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Superb part
loved it
maan is so sweet and caring
geet wants to be sure that maan is a nice person
maan told geet about his past and nature too
cont soon

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dhakdhak22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

nice dear😊

maan is so nice😃

geet reading about maan⭐️

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

loved maans drooling

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

thanx for reply Nelu...

so Maan ne baat kar li Doctor se and Mohinder has been shifted to Handa house so geet also shifted there...

why she is crying suddenly for her dad because he was more in pathetic condition last day then today...

Geet reading Maan's diary but when a person writes something addressed to someone it is called letter not diary...diary means incidents or life story written by owner of that diary before without knowing that somebody will read it after some days or years...but here how Maan has written addressed to Geet is like letter where he is sharing his past and life style, thinking with her...

very interesting update...

waiting for Maan to come back...

thanx for pm...

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

part 16
nice lovely part...
cont soon dear...

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

thnkss guysss for ur support...😊
Return gift to you all A BACK TO BACK UPDATE...

PART 16 { PAGE 21}

HERE IS PART --17--

...MG SS ~DILRUBA~...
...PART--17...
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IN DEHLI KHURANA MANSION...
morning at breakfast table...
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Maan : gd mrning dadi.. annie
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dadi: gd mrng beta...
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annie: mrng bhai..😊
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maan: dadi aap aur annie apne bag pack kar le na... hum aaj raat ko HP jaa rahe hain...
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dadi & annie: what😲?? par why??
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maan: kyun apko mere princess se nahi mill na??
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dadi: milna hain beta.. par u achanak kyun??/
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maan: dadi achank kuch bhi nahi hu hain... maine pehle he soch liya tha... dehli aaunga roh apko aur annie ko geet se mila ne le jaunga...
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dadi: thik hain beta hume ki prob nahi hain... hum sagun ki tayari karte hain...
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maan: what sagun??? abhi kuch nahi dadima... jab tak geet ki dad thik nahi hote aur humare riste ko accept nahi karte tab tak kuch bhi nahi... please..
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dadi: par bete asse kese hum ushe khali haat main mulakat karenge... kuch toh dena hoga na??
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maan: dadi agar aap sirf geet ko aasirwad do ge toh woh jiyada khush hoge😊😊.
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annie: kya baat hain bhai... do din main bhabi ko itne ache se jaan gaye... wah wah bhai... {teasingly}
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maan: haa main usse bohot ache se jaan gaya hu... us ke liye honest & trust he sab kuch hain...
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dadi: bilkul apke tarah...😊
annie chalye humare sath hum packing kar le te hain...
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maan: dadi main meeting ke liye ja ra hu...😊
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dadi : ok beta...
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... IN HP HANDA HAVELI...
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geet make breakfast for herself & dad...
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geet feed his father...
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geet: dad nasta kese bana hain??? i knw bura ho ga toh bhi aap mujhse kabhi kuch nahi kehte😊.. par i knw aaj acha bana hain... wese dad main soch rahe the apke therapy start kar wa du... aap kya kehte ho???
dad: was trying respond ... his hand was slowly up nd hold geet's hand...
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geet: dad aap ne mujhe chuaa?? aap ne response ki ya mere baat o ka???? { she hugs mr.handa} i'm soo happy dad... aab saab thik ho jayega... I LOVE YOU DAD... main abhi doc ko phn karte hu...
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Doctor came to check MR.HANDA...
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doc: good news ms geet... ur dad is recovering.. i think aab hum inn ke therapy start kar sakte hain... aap kya kehte hain??
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geet: jesa aap sahi samje doctor... mujhe baas dad ko thik dekhna hain.....
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doc: thik hain phir kal se nurse in ke therapy start karenge.. now i hv to go...
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geet: ok doc...
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... doctoc left & geet went nd sit beside her dad...
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geet: apko pata hain dad main aaj bohot kush hu... aur jaab maan sir ko yeh baat pata chale fe ho aur bhi jiyada kush honge... ohh maine toh unhe bata ya he nahi... dad main abhi aate hu & she left...
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geet calls maan...
.ringing ringing ringing... { no response}
.Maan was in meeting & phn was silent.
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geet" maan phn kyun nahi utha rahe??? phir se try karte hu...
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again ringing ringing...
nd maan notice that it was geet ... so he excuse himself...
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maan: hii princess... kese ho??
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geet: main thik hu.. aur aap?? aap phn kyun nahi utha rahe the??
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maan: main meeting main tha iss liye... aab bolo kya baat hain??
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geet: apko pata hain main aaj bohot kush hu... bohot jiyada..😛😊
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maan: acha.. aasa kya hu???
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geet: dad ne aaj response kiya mere baat pe... he also touch my hand... i ssooo soo happy..
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maan: really geet... main bhi bohot kush hu... i egerly waitig to see him...
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geet: toh aap kab aaa rahe ho??
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maan: aaj raat ko niklunga... kal subah tumhare pass...
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geet: {blushing} : thik hain main abhi rakhte hu... bye...
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maan: bye...
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... MAAN'S Meeting continues...
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😊😊... next part see below the comment...😊😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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