The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres my comments


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
am so happy to be back... missed reading u...

last part was the best i feel... u just rock in portraying emotions... the way u express maans eagerness, fear, anxiety, hurt , happiness and then dreaming was just sooo lovely...

till now i thought u were dealing with two duos in this story... maan geet and then dev tara... but now u came up with an another awesome duo... maan and nakul...😆 i just enjoyed reading them... especially at the end when nakul says "khaana laga doo, maine bhi nahi khaya" ... i cant stop myself from the laughter explosion...

loved geets dilemma ... the way she gave significance more for her daarji and her studies but at the same time didnt let maans love down too by coming for the flower was commendable... i am among those who believe that a gal should never forget about her responsibilities ... i hate those who forget that with a glimpse of love in their life... am happy that geet knows understands her duties...

the pics u used just perfecttt... love them...

the song u chose... again lovely one...

its so romantic na that ur hubby dedicated such a beautiful song to u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Anyone in the mood for a teaser?

Let me know...




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Posted: 12 years ago
soon... music not uploaded yet..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Maan dressing up for his first official Rose day😉

Nakul at his service again😆

Maan doubting his interests😲 🤣

Maan in Black = Black Magic!!!😳

Only for you guys!😃

Geet waiting in the library thinking about Maan😛
Her inner war still continues between her heart and her responsibilty
Maan and Daarji😕
She tries hard to get rid of all her distractions and dreams so that she can concentrate on her studies thereby taking over up her responsibilities😳

Maan all excited for a new beginning but the slap to another guy😲
did dampen his spirits but still MSK never gives up does he😉

Geet falls in Maan's arms
This is where I belong!!!!!

Avi has to keep Maan happy too na😉
😉

Pure passion, love, attraction, fear, anxiety, confusion so many emotions in a moment😳


Bechaara Maan ke rose ko passing the parcel samajh ke ghooma rahe hain 😡

Ek ek petal ki keemat tum kya jaano Prof babu
Maan ke dil ka haal hain
uski aankhon ka khwaab hain
aur Geet ke liye uska pyaar hain😳

Waah! Heytal delivering dialogue Deepika ishtyle...😆

But I really liked how Prof Pereira actually disclosed the exact feelings associated with this rose
Maan's feelings found words even if it was Prof's but his message directly conveyed and the best part was


Their eyes met with the professor's words. His heart's desire was out in the open for her now. He pointed with his chin as if to say that the rose was for her.


And this time he didn't shy away from accepting his Untold Love for Geet😳

He could not come up with words so had to make the professors say it...Avi knows her Maan is a bholu...😆

But yet again love makes way for responsibility and she has to break his heart by denying her feelings🥺

But its one of the harsh reality of life not all can get what one dreams of
Geet's emotional turmoil prohibiting her to venture those paths which every young girl dreams of


The best part of the whole update was Geet coming back for the rose and Maan watching her
I was just hoping while reading that atleast she takes the rose with her and You actually fulfilled it😊

He had woken up to that song and he had asked Rabba for it... usse tu laga de ab gale... tenu dil da vaasta... How could I not? Aakhir uske dil ka vaasta tha..😊

His pain at the moment when she refused, the description of him in the dark conference room when the darkness envelopes with his black attire was so well penned down
Kudos to u Avi
It was totally flawless!!!!!

And Black is indeed his lucky colour😉
She kissed his rose😳
A hint given and well taken by Smarty Maan😎



Maan all set to be her shadow 😃


Avi it was a fantastic update
I am happy that all is not lost and Maan hasn't given up
😃

Thanks for updating
just loved the update plus the song is sone pe suhaaga😛

One of the priceless creation of A Legend which will always touch the chords of every heart who believes in love!!!!!

Extremely Sorry
&
Love u
🤗

No Sorries Heytal... I love u too... Knowing that my friends are reading it makes me want to write...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



peak a boo... yep main aa gayi...

how r u? missed u

off to read the update... cya...

Welcome back...
I missed u too...
Love humming birds...
Lovely picture..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

am so happy to be back... missed reading u...

last part was the best i feel... u just rock in portraying emotions... the way u express maans eagerness, fear, anxiety, hurt , happiness and then dreaming was just sooo lovely...
Thanks Lakshmi for saying that. He is the hardest for me to write because he is so different from MSK. I am glad you liked it.
till now i thought u were dealing with two duos in this story... maan geet and then dev tara... but now u came up with an another awesome duo... maan and nakul...😆 i just enjoyed reading them... especially at the end when nakul says "khaana laga doo, maine bhi nahi khaya" ... i cant stop myself from the laughter explosion...
Poor Nakul! He will get no breaks for now...
loved geets dilemma ... the way she gave significance more for her daarji and her studies but at the same time didnt let maans love down too by coming for the flower was commendable... i am among those who believe that a gal should never forget about her responsibilities ... i hate those who forget that with a glimpse of love in their life... am happy that geet knows understands her duties...

the pics u used just perfecttt... love them...

the song u chose... again lovely one...

its so romantic na that ur hubby dedicated such a beautiful song to u...

Thanks Lakshmi. I missed having you around with your lovely pictures...
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Posted: 12 years ago
song ... which one would be this time...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

song ... which one would be this time...

From the movie Gangster... Bheegi bheegi si hai ... na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagani...
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Posted: 12 years ago
me waiting... update tonight na...

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