Originally posted by: ritzy09
What a beautiful beautiful update Avi...you are master of romance and story telling...👏
Awww! Not true, but I will take the compliment. This is only my secod story, still learning but trying... 😃
Before I dwell any further, first of all poor Nakul. He was just trying to help his sir but poor guy doesn't realize Maan wants help from his GG and not jiji'.The day he understands this mool mantra his life will be much better'..😆
Nakul is fun to write. It breaks up the silence between the two. Plus I feel I am better at comedy than romance...
Maan was so excited to give flower to his lady love..aww that was so sweet. He even wore lucky black'this is what loves does to a completely sane person. I wish Daadima could be there to tease him a bit'he he he😳
Daadima won't know until later. MSK is good at hiding everything...Only person who will maybe guess is Batman ka Robin, Nakul...😉
Loved the song. It is one of my fav and your hubby dedicated it to you'aww so romantic. You may be giggling but I am sure that is to just hide that blush creeping up on you. I wish my hubby was even half romantic then that'.LOL. He is the most practical person around'..😉
I am the practical one between us. I get easily embarrassed and it comes out with a giggle. I think God enjoys making pairs like us. Opposite at everything... Then he can sit back and enjoy the tamasha...
Loved whole seq when she falls into his arms...haye so romantic. I could almost visualize her in his arms with ragged breathing just filling themselves with each other's aroma and presence. Golden days of GHSP''absolutely smashing😳😛
I think the pictures helped here...
Maan was hurt by her dejection but than god she got the message. What if she didn't even understand thinking her gaon wali logic 😆'.poor girl is already chiding herself to concentrate on her studies. She has so many daily normal life issues and it is not easy to just live in a romantic paradise in her situation. Usually youth is associated with feel of romance but sometimes one is forced to be mature and more pragmatic. How can she put her family's life on line for something she is not yet sure of.
But his hurt was wiped away with her gesture as well. Her picking up of that flower and kissing it had given him hope and determination to remove all obstacles in their path'..now that is a true calling of a love. It just keeps on growing as it fights to survive'..⭐️
Love you for such a sweet and beautiful update🤗
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