The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 22

Lovely update but then I'm left with a question that instead of getting diverted hasn't he pushed her & himself into a pool of desires and dreams to be resisted here onward. 😉😳

The few songs you incorporated in this part were too good to help to switch from moods while reading the scenes... be it the start where that song spoke of his need to break the silence between them... or the chak dhoom song speaking of the joy and contentment of re-living an aspect/memory from her childhood. ... roop tera mastana breaking the awkwardness (even though being replaced with indifference to shadow the actual attraction and vulnerability) and making them feel to stay in that room... Bheege bheege si yeh raatein a song that spoke of Naina's inner turmoil and fight that she has to endure each day with self & her own desires and pain... 👏 This part was a musical collaboration for me making me feel all the emotions expressed. ❤️

I liked how you showed both Dev- Naina in different light to the other in their own childishness and carefree self. A new aspect to discover for both.

Dev called her Haathi... 🤣 he still remembers that slap but nonetheless couldn't stop from receiving another slap from his personal Haathi... 😆

Naina is having a lot to deal with at a single time... from fighting her past memories to her own wounds, to this handsome man who keeps invading her dreams, thoughts each moment with his actions, presence and ways. But he is there for her in his own way to soothe her when she is in the clutches of her dark and lonely past.

Naina misses a father figure but Dev in his own ways and dealings is renewing her wounds but also giving her a solace.

Both Khurana twins are quite fond of kids and are making a special space in the hearts of their lady love through bonding with kids... 👏😳

He advised himself that good things come to those who wait but couldn't wait to kiss her in that sleep dazed mind and in his own pool of longing and desires and ended up getting a slap... Poor Dev but yes he deserved it for his action... 😆

Continue soon... 🤗

wow now he s sure that he want her...loved her concern 😳

NTs past is stopping her from dreaming...feeling bad for her...hope Dev will give her the strength to move on...

loved his entry at the airport...he is really a charmer...am falling for Dev in a story, for the first tym, it was always Maan for me...Why are you doin this to me Avi??😳

loved the talk between kids n Dev...

haaaww, he really did that😲 my mouth was literally like this after reading the last part...now the awkwardness will increase ... phir bhi hume mazaaa ayega 😉😆

am loooviiing the story...loved this update dearie...this part has increased my love for Dev-Tara jodi...

eager to see their reactions after this...

Thank you for updating 😊🤗