THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your extra bits on the thanking note made me laugh. Indeed, it might feel like writers are crybabies. 😆

Since you said that the first portion of this chapter is a continuation from the previous chapter, this means that it is two years ahead of the timeline from Maan's portion, haina?

I don't really want to comment on Brij's way of entertainment for himself. I can't find any strong words in my vocabulary to tell how much I am hating him. The scariest part for me was him thinking he'll find a prettier girl the next time. I really do not wish that any girl - let alone the female leads of the story - fall into his trap anymore.

Sibling rivalry. Something that starts deep within and only begins to grow at a very slow pace which doesn't let the parents know or control it. After reading how much a flesh and blood brother hates his own kin and what he has done to get put him down, I have one wish. I very desperately want this man's downfall. I want him to be robbed of what wasn't his own to claim in the first place. In my opinion, if sibling rivalry takes root in one of the children, the parents are still to be held responsible for it, it doesn't matter that they're not usually aware of it. Even though Brij had hidden his hatred for his brother under the guise of care and concern, the parents should have realised that they need to pay attention to both their children rather than just one of them. No matter how old a child gets, he still will want his mother to feed him with her hands, so it's quite natural that when he finds his younger brother being pampered by his parents, he felt neglected and that led to him hating his brother who was the point of their parents' attention. I wonder, though, why there was this injustice and why the Thakur couple favoured their younger son - if that is the case at all, because this is only one side of the story.

Needless to say how much relief Maan's portion brought to me and it was not because of SBV or anything.

Him staring at his body in the mirror and challenging SRK to beat that and then that GG and jiji part was all hilarious. Poor Nakul! He is going to go mad by the time that both the brothers get through to their feelings and their love interests. 😆

And let me tell you, SRK can't beat Maan's body. 😳

You know, I have never really found out what a colour or the colour of rose represents, but I've always been intrigued by it. That is the reason I loved Colors by Palin. Maan's choice of which rose he wants to give to Geet and the meaning behind it is apt. And yes, imagining his parents plant those roses in the garden so lovingly brought a smile to me. Precious memory, isn't it Avi? 😉

I haven't heard the song but the lyrics and translation seems nice and well-suited for this chapter. Will be waiting for Maan to actually attempt gifting Geet a rose. 😆

Thanks for updating Avi! And apologies for you know what. 🤗
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
is it that bad? 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...really nice one...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


is it that bad? 😭


That emoticon came here before you even updated. It's a complain about being fifth to reserve. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hieee avi how is you?... 😊 😊 ...

It feels sooo good to read locket after ages...kitna spl din hair aaj...hmmm thanks a lot avid food such beautifuland splendid story...hugs tightly...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Brij🤬 such a pervert disgusting!!!!!
such men should be whipped in public so that their reality is disclosed to all🤢

Felt really bad for Chandan😒
The power game is such that relations and emotions hold no value
What was in the will interests me now
Probably Chandan was the supposed heir😕

So that clears the air tha Brij and Pammi had deliberately deepened the rift between Poonam and Chandan for their ulterior motives😡


Bechaara Nakul😆
Maan aur Dev ki lovestory main uski band baj rahi hain
past or present Nakul it is!
Neem and karela juice
🤢


Maan working out to impress his lady love
Competing with SRK not bad😉

So its a Rose day and
Munda all set to take a plunge slow but steady😳

Loved the part where you mentioned about his parents planting roses and their sweet memories associated with it😊

Awesome update
the way you brought out a part of past with the character sketch of Brij😡

All the pieces are falling in place now

Felt terrible for the poor girl but this is one of the dirtiest and harshest reality today

Would also love to read Chanadan's POV along with Tara's side of story too
And I know you already have it all set hain na😳

Avi it was very gripping and direct
perfectly written
just loved it
😃

The lovely song perfectly weaved in giving words to Maan's unspoken love😳

Thanks for the lovely update😃
and really sorry for being this late


Love u
🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
First thing first Avi...tune bechare Nakul ki watt laga di...poor him...log girlfriend ko call karna chodte hain us becahre ne to apni JIJI jko bhi call karna chod diya and upar se neem aur karele ka juice...bechare...Maan babu ke pyaar mein sacrifice ho gaya😆
Just loved the rose part and i have actually seen that yellow rose with red tips here in London quite often...they are absolutely beautiful. Hum bhi chahte hain ki Maan babu ke dil ki baat kabool ho...Btw I just love the song you choose. It is one of my fav and was a perfect fit here.
Your comemnt about creepers coming to balcony reminded me of old Km set where they had creepers in the walkway. I loved that part of KM so thankyou for mentioning it...
Now last but the most important part...tharkey Brij...such an a**hole... In this age also, his kaminapanti is no less...where is his wife Pammi now? Well these seemingly harmless budhas are worst because u don't even recognise the enemy. What he did to Chandan was horrible and I wonder what is hidden in that cane. Is it a hysical proof and if yes, i hope one day that cane becomes the reason for humiliation and punishment...I will wait for that day...amen
aweomse update darling.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

First thing first Avi...tune bechare Nakul ki watt laga di...poor him...log girlfriend ko call karna chodte hain us becahre ne to apni JIJI jko bhi call karna chod diya and upar se neem aur karele ka juice...bechare...Maan babu ke pyaar mein sacrifice ho gaya😆

Just loved the rose part and i have actually seen that yellow rose with red tips here in London quite often...they are absolutely beautiful. Hum bhi chahte hain ki Maan babu ke dil ki baat kabool ho...Btw I just love the song you choose. It is one of my fav and was a perfect fit here.
Your comemnt about creepers coming to balcony reminded me of old Km set where they had creepers in the walkway. I loved that part of KM so thankyou for mentioning it...
Now last but the most important part...tharkey Brij...such an a**hole... In this age also, his kaminapanti is no less...where is his wife Pammi now? Well these seemingly harmless budhas are worst because u don't even recognise the enemy. What he did to Chandan was horrible and I wonder what is hidden in that cane. Is it a hysical proof and if yes, i hope one day that cane becomes the reason for humiliation and punishment...I will wait for that day...amen
aweomse update darling.

First a hundred jhappis Ritzy!!
I was nervous as heck with this part..
That rose is my DP..😳
Pammi is still very much around. I will keep including jhatka wala parts in between to catch up with each of the characters..
Thanks for being here..🤗 It means a lot to me...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Hieee avi how is you?... 😊 😊 ...

It feels sooo good to read locket after ages...kitna spl din hair aaj...hmmm thanks a lot avid food such beautifuland splendid story...hugs tightly...

Kittu...🤗
am good dear.. what about you?
Hope you are settling down better now...😃 glad you are liking the locket too..😃

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