AsYa SS: Breathing Again { Current Track}

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Posted: 12 years ago
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She was Shocked, There she was all happy and excited for her nikha and here was her Mr.Khan in someone else's arms.

Tears sprang down her eyes , Un-controllable they were.

Her heart broke million times,

She again lost her beloved one.

She lost the battle with Destiny, Again
Even After losing everything, She was strong since birth.

But couldn't be now, no more was the strength to fight back.

How lucky as girl she was !

She gave her heart to him just to get it back broken!

She was tired from all this.

So She just ran away from the mess.

She was ready to welcome the new Life in

||Ajmer ||


~*~*~*~

He wouldn't let her go !

He will stop breathing.

He has no idea how he ended up hurting her.

But he knows how to make it up for her.

He was all energetic to get her back.

Ready to under go hell , just for her.

They Will be together ,

As Mr. & Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan.

With determination he stepped on the land of

|| Ajmer ||

~*~*~*~*~

I wouldn't let them together.

I took away her beloved one.

And next is her Life.

I would get Him, not her.

With The ambition of darkness.

She slept a peaceful night in

|| Ajmer ||

~*~*~*~*~

I won't let the innocent Love suffer.

I'll bring back the happiness in their life.

I won't let darkness over shadowing their life.

With the new goal of his Life he booked the ticket of

|| Ajmer ||

~0~0~0~

Story of a Couple, Fighting to get together.

A story Of true soul mates

A Story Full Of Romance

A Story of Being Together

A Story Of Breathing Again.

~0~0~0~

Hello, My Lovely New Readers. :)

I am Babydevil, Popularly Knows as Diva in IPKKND Forum, I am Old to writing but new to AsYa.

I am a 16 year old girl, trying make people see things through my eyes.

And this again a small try for the same,

A very Small SS on the current track of the show.
It's a happy ending Story with lots of positive twist and unveiling of Evil in Angel.

Hope you Like the prologue.


so please


And keep a watch for it :D

Love
Diva
{ Chottu sa Badmash }




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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice work... do continue :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a good start...Plzz continue...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds very great and well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start!!

This is my guess of the people-
Zoya
Asad
Tanveer
Rashid??? ( not soo sure )

Anyway continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it

do continnue soon

and do add me to ur pm list

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Absolutely loved the prologue..Please add me in your PM List :))
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Mind blowing start! Can't wait to see how you take the track further! :)
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Please continue writing, I think its going to be an awesome storyline !!

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