MG FF: A TORN RELATION #2 LINK TO th 3 PG 1

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thank you so much all the readers of

A TORN RELATION...

this was way too sensitive topic with maan and geet as being the main characters ..thank you so much for this support

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CHARACTER'S

MAAN KHURANA AND GEET MAAN KHURANA

AYESHA

ARJUN AND AROHI SINGHANIA

PAYAL

( still hunting a suitable character)

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INDEX

link to thread 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3371465/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-pt-link-to-thraed-2-pg-1

teaser page 1

pt 14 page 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1?pn=8

pt 15 page 29

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1?pn=29

teaser page 34

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1?pn=34

pt 16 page 48

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1?pn=48

pt 17 page 60

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1?pn=60#

teaser page 69

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1?pn=69

pt 18 page 82

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1

pt 19 page 91

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1

pt 20 page 104

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89789717

teaser page 115

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1

pt 21 page 128

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1

pt 22 page 136

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1

teaser page 143

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3636888/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-2-link-to-th-3-pg-1

THREAD 3

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~PROLOGUE~

She was sitting in the corner a fear , a longing a hurt was visible on her face she was clutching her knees sitting with a fear " WHAT WILL HE SAY " His reaction she was like a rag doll sitting with tears spilling from her doe shaped hazels .

He roughly pulled her to him making her fall on him . She was crying weeping silently she couldnt gather the courage to meet his eyes she probably could not afford to meet his eyes which were spitting fire on her... On their unborn in a sudden discomfort she started going away from him backing to the wall , his anger and rage was getting high , she was trembling like a feather when he again shouted on her...

maan : kyun nahi bolti bolo whose child is this whom you are trying to get through me ... BOLO he roared

he was shouting hurting her with his words.. She wanted to tell him clear him "cheenk cheenk kar kehna chahti thi " but that pains that torture that still she is enduring in her heart is something that made her numb everytime... When he again yelled she replied in a feeble choking voice before collapsing on the ground ...

geet : aa.a...pka hai ye bacha hamara ...

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teaser

Maan looked at his wife..she was looking pale and worn out..her heart beat was now stable..the pain that was inflicted by him on her was something that he couldnt even think off...but he was the reason of that pain..

she was sleeping her hands clutching his shirt..she was holding him with such a grip that was even difficult to release ...

geet..

this was the word that always echoed in his heart for the last two months ..since the time he came to know bout her she was his ...

her fading voice the fear to loose her was still gripping her ..his hand went towards her tummy.. unknowingly he was attracted towards the feel of having a child..still was it his or nor...

why was she not telling anything..was he responsible ...

her faded words that were ringing in his mind..

RA*****

his tears dried up..she was so vulerable and now this child..
but his all intellect was not able to join the dots...

update tomorrow

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congrats 4 the new thread...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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congo 4 new thread...
n wat a teaser...
i thought ki maan ne sach ka pata laga liya hoga...
bt here evn after 2 months he is clueless...
waiting desperately 4 d part...

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