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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much dearies for liking the ff

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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~A TORN RELATION~



PART 14

thank u to all those readers who liked and comment


Maan: geet please tell me the truth.. I know that you are hiding something …..

Again she was numb and quiet …even his calm voice and almost begging voice was not making her to look at him…. The fear the apprehensive nature was making them away from each other..somewhere both of them share the same set of mind this time…

For maan his anger was his worst enemy ..he sometimes fail to express himself that was his negative point … even If he wants to express himself words fail to come and even if he wants then his anger makes it worse that was the same thing happened with maan..

He was regretting his harsh and inhumane behavior with geet ..his rage or say his senses betrayed him when he came to know that she was pregnant … the wise and right thinking was now lost… and his wild and jerk attitude overpowered him..

The maan who was so caring for geet about her health was sudden transformed into the ruthless and arrogant maan….

Standing with her head hung down..the tears were falling… she had finally gathered that much needed courage to tell him the truth…

The words the mean and callous words were ringing in her ear… tears of helplessness… vulnerability was there in her ..she was getting lost in the past .. his words were making her hate her more… the question of paternity was the last thing that she had expected from him..

Geet bitterly thought…

Geet: I wont let go this child… he did the wrong why should my child suffer ..i wont let him suffer … she was being over protective to the unborn for whom she was against ..now the deep emotions of being a mother overpowered the helpless girl..she will fight ..she will struggle she will do anything to give his name to this child…

Geet: i..this…baby….

Maan : tell me geet ..still his back was facing her ..he was outraged..his eyes were closed in silent guilt ….

Geet sighed in failure he wont believe her ..she knew he wont believe her he will say the things that will further broke her … this was her blind belief the fact was that she didn't trust him..she didn't even have the slightest of trust , her all beliefs hope and expectation he had crushed that night…

It will definitely take a lots of amends to heal her wounds..he need to make her speak her heart..she was quiet her silence was the main cause of their differences… she was nave and quiet…

Dari sehmi si…

When she didn't replied he in his utmost frustration ….

Maan : just leave geet… leave me alone.. please geet I beg infront of you…please leave me alone.. I don't want anything just go away…

His pupils dilated … her bile rose to her throat ..it was his final decision.,.to leave him..suddenly feeling defeated ..nothing can change her condition..no one will believe her he wont …

There was a image formed in her mind.. that needed to be broken and the sooner it gets the faster it will help to start their relation from the point it was broken.. though there won't be fresh start but it will a newer experience ..but efforts are needed that too from both the sides..he needed her support her words and she want his love and care laced with the amount of trust that she could have on him….

When he still felt her In the room..he uttered the words that he didn't have the slightest idea what will be its effect on her…

GET OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please go out of my life..i cant bear your presence anymore ….

Geet knew that this would be coming…but her feeble voice told him what he was supposed to hear…

Geet: I ..i was raped ….

Saying so she left …. She left him… leaving alone to die In his guilt and shame which was not even a bit of what he will feel when he will now the entire truth….

The truth was out .. but his senses betrayed him …. The words were faded with her dispersal…. His mind was blocked it didn't register the words that she spoke…


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It was an hour when he suddenly realized that he was alone in the study..all the happenings played in his mind..his family's excitement ..geet's pregnancy news..his anger..her cries.. her fear the scared expression..his anger and rage on her.. her dismissal… his words..

He asked he to leave..his mean and hurt laced words…..and her last words finally hit her.. she was R****….

Maan's eyes widen in shock… sudden sense of protectiveness grip him….

" where is geet…"

He suddenly looked worried .. anxious.. anxiety filled his mind.. his attitude towards her.. he hurt her..damn what he did …

Maan: where is geet… maan what have you done.. she was pregnant and you .. you asked her to leave , you hurt her… what kind of animal you are you slapped her ..

His eyes widen in the sudden realization ..she was not here..

Maan immediately left the checked the whole mansion..she was nowhere… their room was complete dark..

Maan: it means she left..chali gayi wo…

He with much frustration ruffled his hair…she was missing..where was she how is she..he always does the mistakes… it was the result of his anger … he was again on the verge of something that was dear to him…GEET..

Yes , he felt the some feelings that he had banned in his life..this was the reason of his aloofness… his own guilt stricken self was not letting him accept geet and later her behavior and expression made him have a expression that he was not worthy of her…

Maan left the mansion..he need to find her… even if she care for the child..she is saying its his… but where is she..

Maan sighed in tension and pressure…

The weather was definitely not in his favor it was raining cats and dogs.. and geet was out alone and pregnant …. He was a definitely biggest jerk.. how could be behave so inhumanly…he just wanted her safe..they can talk about the child later .. he wanted geet safe and sound..

It was the restricted area.. she was all wet..eyes red from crying… it was like her eyes didn't let her know where she was heading..it was the life her life which she needs to protect ..but instead she was on the verge of loosing ….


She was about to fall when a hand catch her from dying off.. this area was definitely a suicidal place and geet was unaware …she just walked where her feet took her..no aim nothing she cant let anyone know why she was going where she was going… his one mistake and she was suffering for it…

The girl yelled at geet ..

Girl: are you out of your mind… where do you think you are going… gir jaati toh.. mar jaati..dekho neeche..kitni gehri khai hai…. Just have a look …

Her bitter words made geet to look at her with the blank eyes..

The girl softened a bit she was definitely not well…

Girl: are you fine… anything wrong … hey…

But the next moment geet loose her conscious..only to be caught by him….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshitaIrani

pls update do kaha ho suhaana



updated pg 8


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me scnd
Awesum update
Geet left the home
Thnk god a stranger girl has saved the Geet frm falling
I think Maan will take Geet back to home
Edited by jassdip - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice part
maan is overpowered with his rage..thinking she betrayed her..
why she is so naive
her words reached his ears very late
she left him
he poured his frustration on her..
but its his sin..
she is sufferring becoz of him..
now even the vhild which is his
is questioned by him..
she left him walking aimlessly
thank god nothing happenned
who is the girl saved her..
geet collapsed..
hmm the mental pressure,physiaclly weak
his accusations..walking in bad weather
poor girl..
when will maan know the truth..or consider it..
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
power shut down today..c im peeking here thru ups which is in critical stage..lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

power shut down today..c im peeking here thru ups which is in critical stage..lol



heheh dont be here di...

wait for power

i am updating parchaai too

aaj i am free for the day
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭😭😭

y all this is happening with them. specially geet

superb update

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