SwaRon OS : Eternity - Page 7

Originally posted by: mrash

This is awesomeee ❤️

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment.

Originally posted by: Suni1986

it was amazing update

sharon know him very well nd wanted to be with him. She know he wil be here at any moment bt she impatient to meet him
she walking like maniac nd waiting for me

bt when he step in her room, she became humgry tigress
swayam placed her on bed n went to seat on chair bt sharon want him to seat with her on her bed

while talking sharon started to coughing bt swayam got nervous due to her
he gave her mouth to mouth session bt sharon feeling lungs full with his oxygen nd feeling of his lip on her made her to go cloud 9

sharon slept in his lap hugging his leg tightly
then end was fab
sharon love increasing day by day like her likes increasing day by day which she told him
their love increasing n noone can deny that
they bound to be each other

lovely os

Thanks for the sweet comment. I am very happy that you liked this OS. And thanks for your appreciation! :)

Originally posted by: Love_shantu

Wow how sweet... ❤️

Awesome OS i just love this... ❤️

Thanks for the comment dear! =)

Originally posted by: BeulaSwaRon

Its very nice...related to current track...beautifully writte...the smallest of the things is what brings happiness for us...wish to see such lovely scenes in the upcoming episodes

Ya. I wish the same! ;)
Thanks for the comment! =)

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

dat ws cute and sweet os..loved it.. 😊

Thanks for the comment dear! :)

Originally posted by: swaron_pk

Amazing OS Tanya
Loved the way you described Sharon's monologue about being distanced from dance and swayam and MSG of simmi was cute
Then the entry of the lover boy and swaron convo was cute. sharon asked swayam to sit near her ...Swayam's care for sharon .and the way Sharon's asthma revealed ...sharon's trust on swayam was beautifully penned down...the confession was so beautiful finally sharon said she like him very very very very much ...care of swayam for sharon how he well he knows her and made her sleep on her side of the bed . Ioved the OS.
Hope ur hand gets better soon.

Thanks for such a sweet comment, keep them coming as i like reading your comments! :)

Originally posted by: vaishu88

loved d os..
it was not at al boring but was cute n sweet..
loved it..
awesome os..
sharon feeling restless coz swayam didnt come to c her.. n her curiosity to check whether he at d door step was cute...
simi's text her words she spoke d other day made her sad n cry..
swayam came n made her sleep n sharon asking him to sit next to her was nice... sharon suddenly feeling heavy n lack of breath n swayam searching for her inhaler while checking on her so that she doesnt faint showed his concern..
he gave mouth-mouth respiration coz he was not able to find d inhaler n d way he asked whether she trust him r not before doing m-m was superb it showed sharon's trust n love for him,...
swayam kept staring sharon wen she slept hugging his legs..
finally sharon said she likes him a lot n said ll make sure she changes d very to love soon n d way she said i know u ll wen swayam said he ll make her fal in love wit him n wen he promised he ll do..
awesome os.. i loved it..

Ya, i wanted to show Swayam very much worried and at the same time Sharon a little more melted. Thanks that you liked this OS! :)

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Tanya sorry for commenting late sweetie, tu toh mera haal jaanti hi hai nah 😛 lazy hoon yaar kya karu, koyi solution nahi hai 😛

Acha mera bak bak zyaada hogai, coming to the update it was beautifully written...hayyyeee i so wished dat we would have got to see the same in the show... loved the way you showed Sharon getting impateint waiting for him, the love, the pain was beautifully described.

Sharon's and Simi's conversation was sweet, he entered her room through the window the whole seen was the same as shown in D3 but the diff was Sharon's POV which was amazingly penned down, The way u showed Sharon accepted her feelings was fab. and the mouth to mouth part was mind blowing.

At the end the confession was outstanding...loved the way you ended the OS...it was lovely, the last few lines were fanatbulous it gave a perfect ending to this beautifull OS.

She slept, it as the most peaceful sleep on her entire live. The most peaceful and lovely feeling was ringing within her now. She was alive again. She was breathing his breath in now and she wanted to breathe his breath till eternity. As eternity define them.

Good job babes, any work on Swaron written by you is a treat to read, loved this OS, it was super se upaarrr wala OS...luv ya ❤️

Awww... Thanks meri baby Simran! Missed your comment alot from past few days! 🤗
I though first that no one will like this OS but thanks for loving and commenting! :)

Originally posted by: MeeraSwaron

Tanya, that was refreshing and a very beautiful take on the actual track...did full justice to teh feelings of both and this is wishful scenario - so very much SwaRon 😳 u caught the pulse of SwaRon perfectly

Thanks for the wonderful comment dear! Luv u :)

Originally posted by: swaron09

First of all i am soo sorry for being late. exams coming :(

and yes coming back to the os

it was awesome, fab work actually dont have words to describe how much i liked it. I loved ure take on the current swaron track. i loved each and every moment in this OS from sharon thinking about swayam coming to meet her and then sharon - simmi convo wich was one of the best parts of the OS according to me. Swayam jumping and sharon getting hypered was taken from the show but what i loved there was ure way of writing sharons monologue. The mouth to mouth scene well was quiteee... unpredictable... yet i can call it romantic . and even the confession ☺️...

in all i just loved the OS and even the last lines of it

She slept, it as the most peaceful sleep on her entire live. The most peaceful and lovely feeling was ringing within her now. She was alive again. She was breathing his breath in now and she wanted to breathe his breath till eternity. As eternity define them.

Also get well soon fast

Thanks my rish! I am better now! ;)

Thanks for taking your time out and commenting! Lub u! :)