LAST CHAP SS:The Dreamland Developed,But...He!!

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arnaushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

really nice one...you have portrayed his feeling very well...

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Annu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

nice one. 😊 interesting... waiting fr the 2 more updates. ❤️ loved it...

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1001415001
nice one. 😊 interesting... waiting fr the 2 more updates. ❤️ loved it...

are...this is finished my dear
u will find last 2 chap in index😊

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raapunzel...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

hi...read all chaprerzz in one go..

truly a different experience...
silence spoke volumess...
here words are less...
but his innner conflict n his emotionz can b easily understandable...

emporer himself hides frm everyone...
but his mind is bleeeding...
he neeedzzz solace...

nice one dear...
thanx fr d pm...

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prateek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

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This was unique concept or SS..i am big lover of historical epics,heroes..And chandragupta is my favorite one..I like the character sketch of both "guru and shisya".It was short but amazing story..

So moving on..

In begining i loved the convo of acharya and chandragupta about their dream to establish undivided india..I like all the lines of chandragupta...like a good student he was hiding his injury..But chanakya is broad intelligent..he can easily recongnized his pain..

Now,in part 2,loved the way chandragupta revealed his pain and aplogise to acharya for hiding his injury..He was overconfident..In short i love their convo..Well i loved this dialouge of acharya..well said:-

"Listen Chandragupt,it's not a fact of shame to confess that u r in pain. For this-u'll never be addressed as an immature or coward. Understand??"

Now in part 3,It was awesome part..the way u potrayed chandragupta emotion was amazingly perfect..It was like u give a definition of a true emperor through chandragupta inner feelings..No fact we addressed him as a greatest emperor of india..He was simply great..

And in equal,acharya chanakya was also great that he knew about his condition..I am so glad after reading such a great bond of "guru and shisya"..a teacher and student..And the way u narrate the whole SS was awesome..it makes me like i am watching CGM again..I really miss CGM..

I like the ending part..all the lines was supebb..So one of them is:-

When one becomes STAR
GALAXY is his only friend.
Companion-less STAR...searching for human being...
...worth his belief...
Emeralds of throne are wanted to be abhorred...
...but they're too heavy to take off...
Behind the stones...there's a throne of affection.

Perhaps this is the words of inner heart of all kings...GOD may rain them his incredible light of affection, love & care.

So at last,i really adore this historical SS,u'r work is awesome..and u'r writing talent is brilliant..Keep it up..and keep updating..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago