LAST CHAP SS:The Dreamland Developed,But...He!! - Page 9

Wow yaar..Awesome work👏
Really liked it...it was short n nice stories...
Well done n keep it up...

Yes, 1 2 and 3...Finally I've read it.🥳🥳
You've finished them so soon.😲 I haven't watched CGM till now, But i did have Heard a lot about this show, also from that I do know that it was a Epic.. Which won the hearts of History lovers.
You've written and described this Beautifully, At the Time reading this.. I shook my Head in Shock and Denial, I couldn't believe and I asked myself "Hows That Possible?". Yes, hows that Possible? You've brought down the Thinking, Thoughts, his Grief of Getting Defeated, His Respect and Questions for His Teacher that How did He knew about His Condition.. Brilliantly.👍🏼
I don't know, Should i say more to Describe your Writing...because You've totally written it Awesomely Yaar. Yeah! You have Got CGM's Thoughts, That too with a Perfection.
Now a big Sigh! Because, I Just got to know about This SS and after Reading it, it seems It was Completed.
But, I did Enjoyed Reading this a Lot.. I was a well Described script.😎
Seriously... You Really did a Brilliant Job, Hats off with Clappings.🥳👏

awesome ss

nice story..
Well written..emperors fear strength..

thnx for pm di...

A beautiful story.

I've always been fascinated with the Mauryans being the first empire of India.Tho We've been exposed more to 'Ashoka-The great' but I found Chandragupta Maurya equally great.The reason being His ability to eshtablish an empire when he didnt belong to a royal family.

And Chanaky,it would be really my stupidity if I try to say something in the great scholar,diplomat and teacher's honour.

But the perspect of King that u portrayed is very rarely understood by a commoner.If he is a true king than his life gets bound to his kingdom and ppl.He has to act like a father to his ppl and endure every pain.

The example of star that u gave at end is so very apt.Including the story I loved the last portion very much.



Thank u thank u thank u so much for the PM or I wud 've jst missed a marvellous piece of art.

very nice story

congrats for u ss dear
the story so far looks really interesting
do continue soon im waiting to read them