LAST CHAP SS:The Dreamland Developed,But...He!!

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Hello, friends-

This is a short story from me. Yes...it's a real short story. It'll not going to turn a FF though beginning as a SS. Please read it...it'll not pester you for long time, hardly contain 3 updates.

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Rumpu😊
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part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 3
last part - page 5
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Character Sketch

Chandragupt-

As a soldier:


As Emperor:




Acharya Chanakya-








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Part- 1

The shy guy & The ocean Of Dream


Tomorrow would be the most important day in Chandragupt's life. That moment-that very moment for which he'd being trained by Acharya Chanakya since 12 yrs was now present in front of him.

"I must be successful. I must. There is no another chance if I embrace the defeat...but a little inconvenience...!!"

After a while

"Acharya, did u call me?"-Chanakya turned to Chandragupt-"yes. Are u fully prepared?? Any physical or mental disadvantage?? Tell me freely Chandragupt.

Chandragupt was truly surprised. Acharya had gussed quite right!!
...but will it be correct to tell him about that??...no,it's his dream to establish UNDIVIDED INDIA & tomorrow's journey will be the 1st step for materializing his dream.

"No Acharya. Nothing is here. I'm absolutely fine."-Chanakya's eyes flashed with smile to his reply. Could he read his thought??

Chandragupt returned his gym-his unique gym with a very few weapons under a tree. He thought that he would easily overcome a little physical wound.


Actually in the morning while performing physical exercise with swords, Chandragupt had received a minor(??) wound in his right arm...but now the arm was paining badly. So, he's a bit disturbed.

TOMORROW MORNING

A brand new morning. Chandragupt got ready with all his might to attack Dhanand at the colourful moment of Basant utsav. But the arm was giving a little trouble...he tried his best to avoid it, but again & again failed.
Now he's feeling quite shame to himself. A minor wound! Just due to a minor wound he got weak!! Disciple of Acharya Chanakya didn't have a minimum power to bear with a simple pain & concentrate to his target!!! How's that possible???

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Posted: 12 years ago
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well congo for ur ss...start was really nice...
continue soon...n thanx for the pm... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good CS and Nice part rumpu👏👏...Continue soon😊
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ridzzi, sugandha & anu-🤗🤗🤗 fr comments.

yeah...m continuing soon...😳

2 more upd are left.😊...it's a vry vry short story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting chpt😊 continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful Concept...The First Chapter Was Awesome !! Waiting For The Next One !!!!!
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Dekho main tapak gai :-P Owesome Concept n Nice Star, Do Continue Soon :-)
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Very nice start rumpu...finally read it.vry good suspense also...go onn... :) :)

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