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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

hey guyzz ...im new to this forum

nd this is my 1st attempt nd don't noe how far i will take it to but i really wanted to give it a shot

i noe i have posted it before but due to some problem i was not able to proceed it so i thought to write it once again so here is the prolouge

person-manu come meet my frnd giriraj ...nd his talented son mr.

no need for an introduction ...she replied before he completed his sentence

person-atleast greet him

okay ...omg uday how r u i have not meet u since ages ...u look so different ...omg ...if u want anything so plzzz DON'T TELL ME CAUSE IM LEAST INTRESTED TO TALK TO U . SHE SAID in sarcastic way

she went into her room closed the gates nd take a breathe of relief ...now he won't be able to be in yeah ...but he is still here he's dad's best frnds son nd its jst not working

why its not working ????? cause we are enemies frm ages ???? cmon manyata kab tak enemies bankar rehna hain ???? he said

she looked in the direction frm where the voice was coming nd DAMN

manyata's point of view (pov) shit bloody hell how can i forget in my house walls also have ears nd mere room mein toh itni badi window hain ...manu how the hell can u forget that

end of pov

manyata-wat r u doing here ??? i mean dont u noe kissi ke room ke bhahar khade hoke unki personal batey nhi sunni chahiye ????

uday-huh...personal ...don't worry ab personal nhi rahengi

manyata-wat u mean ????

nd before he could reply something der was a knock on her door

she opned nd saw her mother

yes mom

komal -manyata dad is calling u out come fast

manyata-yeah u go i'll jst be there

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komal-stop crying bacha its ur dad u'll have to listen to him nd watever he is saying is jst for ur own good

manyata-my own good wat is good for me in this relation ?????

uday-aunty if u don't mind can i talk to manyata alone please ???

komal nodded nd moved out

manyata-why why me...why they always do this to me ...i hate them like hell ...

uday-calm down manyata nd listen to me

manyata-no uday today i won't

uday-plzz manyata ...its bloody important ...manyata i noe u r broken by all the mess ...but i love my dad a lot nd don't want to loose him at any cost

manyata-wat rubbish ur talking about

uday-yeah manyata ...he close his eyes nd den speak my dad has blood cancer ...

manyata shocked-wat????????

uday-yes ...nd now ur decision can save someone's life nd he goes frm der

manyata-dam im ready for the relation ...

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uday held her tight frm her waist - pari u noe wat i want

manyata blushing-stop it uday ...leave me

uday-no today i won't spare u naaa ...

manyata-uday someone will come

uday-let them come

manyata-errg mom u need anything

uday leave manyata nd turn around nd see no one is there

he turns to see manyata nd see her rushing in her room

nd thinks ...pari i will definately get wat i want ...jst wait nd watch

manyata stops nd look back to see uday

he winks at her nd she smiles nd goes into her room

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so guyzz dat was the first promo

i noe dat many of u willl have confusion with the story but it all will be sorted

plzz cmmnt only den i'll be able to continue nd yeah if anyone wants pm den plzz mention it in ur cmmnts

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PROMO 3 PAGE 26https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104992423

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CHAPTER 12 - PAGE 29 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/106009974
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CHAPTER 14 - PAGE 34 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107677140

LOVE ANMOL

Edited by Honey-FLAB - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb plz.. continue asap and do pm me..

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

That was a nice one😊.interesting promo...update soon😛

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

intresting concept👍🏼
Title❤️ cont sion and do pm me

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Manyata Chopra- she is super hot super sexy successful actoress nd a fashionista she shows atitude towards the one she hates but is very sweet cute nd caring towards the one she loves she hates her mother nd father but is sometimes concerned about her big brother nd loves her small brother more than anything ...everyone calls her anu as her pet name

Uday Kapoor - stuning hot dashing succesful actor ...

girls dies jst to see his smile he is very rude arogant towards the world but is a lovable nd affectionate person to the one who r very very close to him ...

other characters ---->

brijraj chopra- manyata's father nd a succesfull industrialist nd a buisness tycoon

komal chopra-manyata's mother nd a cute person

vedant chopra- manyata's big brother nd again a buisness tycoon

giriraj kapoor-uday's father nd a successful director nd producer

unnati kapoor- uday's sister nd is in london doing her studies

other main characters will be introduced in the story in correct way nd correct time

LOVE ANMOL AKA ANU

Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

nice prologue.

nice cs.

i am ready for dis manveer journey.

try to continue soon dear

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Rashika

@zainab.udayveer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

wowowowowow very nice dear i loved this concept so much awsome story very nice annu

plz pm me whenever u update plz pm me

story name was awsome i loved this name

plz update fast n pm me nai tu scrap me but plz inform me nice story very well written awsome

update fast plz me eagerly waiting

prologue cs very nice

bubye

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

awsssmmm proloyge and charecterskecth continue soon
and pm me for sure anu

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

woa it is awesome
i loved the promo and cs
ok manyata hates uday
but is forced to marry coz giriraaj
has cancer she agrees
awnn poor giri
ok both are actor actress
very intresting update asap and do pm me

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago