ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Hey... Anu...

The chappy was amazing...

Thoroghly enjoyed it..

Manveer dance was really romantic...

Ek dance ke sath doosra free...

Ohh.. Manyata ne yeh kya puch liya..

Ab agar use pata chal gaya ki Uday aaya tha..

Toh pata nahi kya hoga...

Aur agar precap Uday ne dekh liya...

Toh jal ke rakh ho jayega...

Update super soon...

And thanx for the PM..

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

hey guyzz im glad that u liked the previous chapter

and thanxx for all the lovely comments ...

so guyzzz here is small promo of the next chapter ---

PROMO LAT LAG GAYI

omg uday i missed u so so so much !!!!😳! a girl said hugging uday tightly

only then manyata enters the hall ...and look at them

what the hell ??? what is she doing ...infact who is she ???? she was thinking and her face was turning red😡

and just to add flavour in her emotions...😲

the girl kisses uday on cheeks...😳😆

now its beyond the limits...how dare she kissed him ??? 😡she is gone.....manyata starts taking steps towards them only then enters the great ABHINAV KUNDRA...

hey manyata !!!😊 he said ...

manyata turned towards the gates....

god this man is truly ossum...he always come on perfect time ...😃now u wait and watch mr. udayveer kapoor...😈bohot chipak rahe the na iss chipku se ...she thought and gave an evil smile ...

i missed u too my doll...its so nice to meet u after so much time shreya ...

uday said breaking the hug listening to abhi's voice...

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so guyzz this was the promo...hope u like it

and its an imp note - i'll won't be active on forums from now onwards till 28th september

plzz don't stop sending me pms for ff's and ss's i'll read and comment at them later

and guyzz im giving u the pic of shreya and abhinav ...

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love ANMOL

Edited by anu1299 - 12 years ago

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Hey di
How u? 😊
Amazing promo
👏
Loved it
Wow, Manyata jeolous,
Thanks for the pm
Plz try to come back soon 👏 ⭐️ 😆

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

aweosme promo anu so manyata seems to be jealous and im sure even uday will get jealous... thanks for the pm

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

hey! anu😊
awesome promo dear, loved it
do update soon
& also try to come back soon anu
i will be waiting

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

awum yar you always rocking i know i know i m so so so much late but yar hope my best sweet buddy forgive maine sab ki stories par abhi comment kya han and sabse bada comment mara yaha ho hope so tu mujhe forgive karde..😭

chal yar mujhe maaf kar phale warna mai ro ro ro kar marjaogi or pphir tujhe jail jana padega or tujhe jail jana padega tu mera kya hoga is duniya mai akaile koun mujhe sahara dega😭

mai tu jeete jee...mai tu jeete jee yar sorry kya bolo smajh nai araha han yaad aya mai tu jeete jee pagal hojaogi hehehe aisa hi dialoge kaam chala le please sorry na meri jaan😭

ab gussa thook bhi du itna bhi kya gussa mujhe pata han mai hamesha garbar karti ho koi kaam theek nai karti and ziyada tod par late hojati ho par yar tu to sab janti han na😉😉😉

and tujhe tu ya bhi pata han mujhe kitna tezz bhukar han i m stuck in high fever or upar se blah blah blah !!! kya batao ab chod ya sab bas tu maaf karde mujhe mai buhot khush hojaogi itni khsuh jiski koi had nai😆

mai dance karogi bhangara dalogi band baja barat bajaogi movie dekhaogi ayesh karaogi tujhe apne sath neywork lejaogi or sid ko buhot rulaogi ab tu maaf karde meri pagal jaaanu😳

or tere updates dediya tune itne mera ek comment nai aya na sorry sorry sorry sorry i hold my and ur tears hehehehhe i mean ears hehehehhe please pushpa maan ja naa ab mujhe kahne par majhboor kardiya tune no more tears pushpa😛

hehehhe buhot lamba lucture hogaya na ab kya karu dekh tujh jaise kuti kamini ko manane ke liya ya sab bhi karna parta han ab kya kare jaisi bhi han akhir han tu meri hi jigari dost na mera heart ka ek hisaa😃

kiya karsakte han ab khair jane do oyeee ab chal update par ati ya kya horaha han bachi tum bigad gayi ho aj kaal bade romantic update derahi ho ager sid ko pata chala tu wo kya sochega bolega meri gf ko sharam nai ati jo itna kisi or ke barema sochti hayee hayeee poor sid😭

sid don't hum dono ise mill kar marega jhoota timatar aloo piyar yaha tak ke murgi bhi waise jo bhi romance han buhot acha kya baat han oyee hoyee uday tu latoo hogaya han humari manyata par😉😉

uday manyata ki chemistry awsum or woh dance kya baat han rapchik rapchandus maza agaya yar kya likhti han tu tere tu bandbuu dar hath chumlu😆

yar maza agaya sach mai and tere banner woh tu awsum tha mujhe buhot ache lage and tere song jo tune add kya update mai woh bhi buhot acha tha ek tu cheenai express ka😃

kashmir and kanyakuwmari hehhe awsum mai tu has has ke path mai dard hogaya ab kya batao tu funny or romantic dono ek sath horahi han and den 👏

jo tune song diya uske baad direct romantic mera one of fav song rabta hayee mai marjawa maza agaya kya song han mujhe tu tere update se love shove hogaya han😊

kya bolo yar tune mujhe speechless kardiya or tera promo woh bhi kamaal ka tha tu likhti hi kamaal han kyuke tu be misaal han tu likhti han kisi or par par tujhe chati sirf mai ho hehhe😆

dekh teri dosti ne mujhe shaheer bhi bana diya ab update de jaldi itne bade comment ke liya mere liya meri shaheri ke liya manveer ke liya tere reader likers commenters ke liya sid ke liya or mere or sirf mere liya jaldi update de na pls😡

itna wait nai karaya kar buhot gussa ata han dil karta han tere murder kardo teke ek or murder film realease kardaku tera murder karke bdw jaldi update de😊

mujhe ab or wait nai hoga mai or intezar katayi nai karsakti or ab manveer romance diyo ziyada or wo chain wala scene bhi awsum tha and ab full on romance chaya mujhe😳

but phale update de buhot din hogaya han mujhe pata han tere paper han isliya no gali warna gaaliya hi galiya but mujhe pata han abhi tere pass ziyada kaam nai mom dad han nai tu jaldi update likh or de dusre kaam mat kar abhi😉

so please ab kaal update chaya mujhe it's that clear chal ab update likh jaldi warna tere murder mere hathon hi hoga...

and new promo was awsum jealousing start who is she kamini kissing and hugging and me slapping her stupid girl bloody bitch use dur kar ise bol uday only her brother nothing else😡😡😡

mai uday sirf manyata se share karti or kisi se bhi nai understand anu so please ise bol yaha iski dal nai galegi ulte pua hi yaha se nikal jaya warna iska khoon kardugi😡😡😡😡😡

and abhi bhi agaya chalo jealousing parrt start teri life mai bhi or is story mai bhi nycc babes good going maza ayega ab lakin ziyada dur mat karna manveer ko romance bhi karwana😛😛😛

and manveer scene ziyada karwana smaji gayi na ab bas itna hi or bore nai karugi but please manveer romance scence ziyada or update not chota chota please update fast fast and long long buhot long okay and jaldi active ho please kamini miss you🤗
love you buddy
muah
sorry again
hope tujhe comment acha lage
or na bhi lage tab bhi chalega
par jhoote muh tareef mat karna
take care
cyaaa soon
muah update fast
louv you jaaan😳😳

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hey di hey
How u? 😊 ossum
Amazing promo thanxx alot
👏
Loved it 😳
Wow, Manyata jeolous, she will be more
Thanks for the pm it was my duty
Plz try to come back soon 👏 ⭐️ 😆 sure today is the day of update