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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVE IT
SURELY TUMHARE STORY KI MUJHE LAT LAG GAYI
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99

LOVE IT

SURELY TUMHARE STORY KI MUJHE LAT LAG GAYI


awww thnkq so much azwa
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

awesome anu loved the promo so much glad that manyata wore the dress that uday chose so happy and the dance between them was so lovely really cant wait for the update now... i liked the last bit that uday said... please update soon and thanks for the pm


thnk u so much di and ya i'll update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari

awesome promo, loved it
eagerly waiting to read
do update soon


thnqq and ya i'll be updating soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di hey
How u? 😊 ossum blossom
Wow di thnqq
Amazing, superb promo thnxxx
I'm also with Ayesha di,
I want a big, big chapter cool i'll give a big update now
Promo left me speechless awww
Love every scene ⭐️ thnxxx
Especially where Uday put the chain around Manyata's neck
Too cute di 👏 thnku so much
Really excited n eager to read next chapter 😃
Plz update soon ya i'll update soon
N thanks for the pm

its ok
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome promo
dance scene so cute
can't wait for the update
update soon
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HEY GUYZZ FINALLY GOT TIME TO POST ...WAS LITLE BUSY THESE DAYS
AND MAYBE I'LL GIVE 3-4 UPDATES AND THEN WILL UPDATE IN OCTOBER
SO HERE GOES


precap - komal - aree koi bat nhi dekhiye na kitne dino bad dono itne khush hain ...brij - manyata ..vijay taiyar ho jayiye giri un aur uv ate hi honge ...
m while running only says - kyu ...engagement toh sham mein hain na
brij - han lekin voh log sham tak yahi rahenge aur yaha hi taiyar honge function ke liye ...
m - ane toh do uss halkat vede yede ko kal rat mera favourite chain tod di thi na aaj usse hi todd dungi han nhi toh ...
and then she rans out in garden ...and vb after her
vb- m bhai ruko ...
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present
manyata and vb was running in garden
vb shout - m bhai ruko aur nhi bhaga jaa rha
m - bhag vijay bhag teri hone wali biwi ki kasam tujhe bhag
she says in most dramatic way ever
only then giriraj along with uday and unnati entered
they all were thrilled to see both of them (manyata and vijay) in this state both of them were in their night wears and were running like they have gone insane ...
just then manyata goes near the swimming pool
and was running around the pool
vijay - manyata bhai bas karo plzzz he started begging manyata
he stoped and sat on his knees as he was tired after the running session
just then manyata very quitely came and stood behind vb
he was sitting very near to pool so manyata just pushed vb with full power and ^^****BAM****^^
now vijay was in swimming pool he was getting very mad on manyata
while giri unnati and uday were standing at a distance from them and were enjoying the scene before them
vb - thats not fair manyata bhai aap ko pta hain hume swimming nhi ati save me im gonna die
m - aww so sweet vijay bhai ...log kehte hain
"YEH ISHQ NHI ASAN BAS ITNA SAMAJH LIJIYE EK AAG KAR DARIYA HAIN AUR DOOB KE JANA HAIN ...AUR YAHA AAPNE TOH PYAR KI NAYI DEFINATION HI LIKH DALI
YEH ISHQ NHI ASAN BAS ITNA SAMAJH LIJIYE EK SWIMMING POOL HAIN AUR DOOB KE JANA HAIN " haye vijay bhai itna love shuv !!!!
vb - aree ishq toh tab karunga na jab zinda rahunga bachao mujhe bachao mujhe ...he starts shouting like hell
just then giri come their with his kids - bas bhi karo manyata kitna pareshan karogi bechare bache ko !!!!
vb thought - bacha ??? bechara ??? mera sasur mujhe bechara bacha samajh ta hain ??? kuch toh karna hi padega ...I TELL U
manyata turns towards giri - uncle mujhe toh bas yahi thode se din mil rahe hain vb ko pareshan karne ke liye varna bad mein toh unnati di aa hijayengi inhe pareshan karne ke liye
this was a limit for vijay and then he suddenly holded manyata's feet from back and and pulls her into swimming pool too
manyata shouts - what the f**k ...
while uday covers his eyes cause hi know what will happen with vijay now
vb - ab bolo kya hua manyata bhai bohot bechara bechara kar rhi thi na!!!
m with a smirk and sought of coolness - no worries vijay bhai mujhe swimming ati hain unlike u !!! so bubye vijay bhai and she holds the handle to come out...but vb holds her from waist - nhi manyata bhai mujhe akele chodd ke mat jao plss ...
just then brij and komal also come there listening to manyata and vijay's shouts
brij - yeh kya bachon wali harkate kar hre ho ...kab samaj ayega aapko ki aap bade ho gya hain ??? kitni bar samjhaya hain ki thodi si tameez se pesh aya karo lekin nahi aap dono ko toh vahi karna hain jo aapki marzi hain !!! he says with anger ...ab bas karo manyata aur vijay abhi ke abhi bahar niklo pool se
they both gulped down in nervousness
and just in a min they both were out
brij - chalo vijay andar
and brij leaves from there and komal follows him
giri - vijay beta aap theek toh hain na ???
vb - ji uncle and he looks at unnati and waves his hands and say - hi unnati ...like a child
unnati also reciprocates waving her hands - hii vijay
vb- chalo andar chalte hain ??? un - hmm
and giri , un and vb also go leaving behind manveer
manyata looked at uday and uday too looked at her but soon manyata rolled her eyes uday came near her
hi manyata
m - watever
uv - abhi tak gussa ho ???
m - tumhe kya lagta hain ?? folding her hands before her chest
uv takes a step forward - mujhe lagta hain ...again takes a step forward now manyata and uv were standing very close
manyata was looking every possible way but not at uday and uday was looking nowhere but at manayata
he came more close and holded manyata by waist at this moment manyata gulped down in nervousness she was feeling weak at her knees
but she still holded on to her anger
they were very close to each other just manyata's arm which were folded were blocking their way to merge them together completely
and uday thought to ignore the question and change the topic - mujhe lagata hain ki jab tum wet hoti ho toh aur bhi zyada hot aur sexy lagti ho
manyata's jaw drop down at this comment and looks at uv and the hands which were folded till now were resting on uday's chest and from the other hand manyata cluched her dress tighly
uv - yah !! finally i got the oppurtunity to say - APNA MUH BAND KARLO WARNA MAKHI GHUS JAYEGI
manyata come back to her senses and closes her mouth and rolles away her eyes
uv - hmmm...so kaha the hum ?? han abhi tak naraz hona mujhse ???
m - han ...bohot naraz hun main pta hain voh locket mere dad ne mujhe mere 16th birthday par gift kiya tha ...aur tab se lekar ab tak maine usse kabhi nhi utara aur tumne usse ek hi bar mein todd diya ???
and rolles her eyes away
uv smirked and tuck behind the strands of hair which were coming on manyata's face while manyata closes her eyes more tightly and clutches uday's shirt
uday lookes down at her hand through which she was holding him
again he smirked - manyata i have an ossum idea in my mind ...let us drop this dushmani and lets be frnds ...wat say ?????
manyata slowly opens her eyes and looked towards him
just then to spoil the beautiful moment manyata's phone ranged
manyata looked at her phone and say - important call hain i need to answer
and uday leaves her with a small smile
and manyata answered the phone she was talking on phone which back at uday's front just then uday's phone also beeped
he picked up - yes
prson - kam ho gaya sir aapko sham tak mil jayea
uv - theek hain sham 8 baje tak mujhe chahiye ...bye and he cut off the phone he turns around only to see manyata still talking suddenly uday ran inside the house and say - dad choti chalo jaldi yah se
with restlessness
brij - areey kya hua uday beta ??
uday says something to brij and they both shared a evil smile
and brij - vijay don't say anything to manyata ..is that ok ??
v- ji dad hum clothes change karke ate hain
while uday unnati and giri carefully stepped out in garden and went and hid behing a tree
manyata ranged up the phone and turned around to talk with uday but he was not there she looked here and there but didn't found him
must be inside she thought
she walked inside the house only to find brij and komal in hall
m- dad uday kaha hain ???
brij creasing his eyebrows - beta uday ??? hume kya pata kaha hain voh?? apne ghar pe hi hoga na voh toh !!!
m bit confused - huh ghar pe ?? par abhi toh yaha pe tha na !!
brij- kya bat kar rhi ho manyata uday kab aya yaha ??? aur aap itni subha subha bahar kya kar rhi thi ???
m - dad !!!! she said in shock
aapko pta toh hain ki main aur vijay bhai bahar pool mein thee aap bhi toh vaha aye the aur giri uncle unnati uday aur mom bhi toh vahi the na ??
brij - beta lagta hain aap subha subha sapna dekh rhi hain ...pehli bat vijay toh abhi tak apne room mein hain duusri bat ki hum aur komal jab se uthe hain tab se bahar garden mein nhi gaye aur teesri bat uday aur giri yaha nhi aye
kon nhi aya brijraj ?? a voice came from back
all turned just to find giri standing with unnati
m was searching for uday
brij - kuch nhi giri manyata ek sapna dekh rhi thi
m - par dad main sach keh rhi hoon
while all were trying to hold back their laughter
brij - uday nhi aya giri while his eyes were fixed on manyata to see her reacction
yes she wanted her answer so was looking at giri with hopefull eyes
giri - nhi brij uday ko thora kam tha toh voh sham mein hi ayega ...
manyata's eyes fell and she fell all pale
yeh kya ho rha hain ??? was i actually dreaming ...dreaming about UDAY ??? manyata stop thinking about uday ...he is not here infact he WAS not here and u were think about him !!!! manyata thought and made her way to her room
the day went quite quickly ..manyata thinking about the day
thinking about UDAY !
there uday was at his shoot for the film
but rather he was thinking about manyata about her body which when he touched her it made him feel wierd ...he just want to finish all the work to go and talk manyata about the feeling which he was having and thinking about the engagement party he was so thrilled and relieved that soon manyata will propose him for "LETS BE FRNDS ATLEAST"
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finally the time came both were standing infront of mirrors
looking at themselves ...
manyata u have to look the best ...and u don't have anyother option when u r in THIS dress now manyata whispered to herself
i wish manyata u would have chose the dress which i slected but no regrets as u will look heavenly in any dress he thought
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everyone were in the hall
uday made his way in hall in most SEXY way ever ...
he went and took blessing from everyone
finally the groom also arrived
uday went and stood near him - so vijay banna excited ??
actually nervous vijay said in restlessness tone
his heart was really running very fast his heartbeats can be heard
but now we can hear 2 heartbeats
2 dashing male of the night standing next to each other waiting for their ladies ...
manyata jaldi aao na i want to talk to u now ...uday thought
just then lights went off and a spotlight was there on stairs
there came the women of the night
no one can resist to move their eyes from them ...
and at last abhinav came to join the party
he was lost at manyata's beauty but then he realises somthing was different
everyone was mesmerised by manyata's beauty it will be right to say that manyata was looking more beautiful than unnati but 2 guyzz were seriously shocked ...and looked at each other
at last abhi walked to uday and asked - yeh manyata ne kya pehna hua hain ???
uv with smirk - clothes !!!
and he goes from there
he went and stood beside unnati
but from the corner of his eyes was looking at manyata and so did manyata ...
they went near stage where vijay was standing ...
manyata was standing near vijay and uday beside unnati
just then jay came and hugged manyata - jiji ur looking so ossum ek dum princess ki tarah !!!!
m - thnxx and ur also looking veru beautifull
jay - it was just a try to look like u !!! and hugs vijay and unnati together - congo vijay bhai and unnati bhabhi im so so so happy for u guyzzz
and finally goes to uday - hey uday
uday with a smile - hey jay ...let me tell u ur looking so fabulous
while manyata thought - jay tak ko compliment de diya lekin mujhe bhul gaya !!!! aur voh bhi tab jab maine yeh dress pehni hain ??? hadd hain yar uday ...
and goes from there and just then abhi came - manyata hey !!!
manyata - hiee abhi ..wats up dude ??? woah let me confess ur looking so HOT and DASHING yar she said loud enough for uday to hear
abhi - thnxx and not to forget u !! ur looking no less than an angel...
m - thnk q so much
and makes her way from there
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uday and manyata both were talking to different guests but were not leting go any moment to steal a glance at each other...
both wanted to talk to each other despirately but were not going forward cause of the ego problem
but then both got the gut god knows for where ??
both were coming at each other looking in their eyes but manyata was stoped by a lady
manyata started talking to that lady but uday was in no mood to delay their conversation so he came there where manyata and that lady was standing and holded manyata's hand and interwindes his finger with hers while manyata lookes at him in shock ...
udaay - excuse us plss
and took manyata from there to a corner
manyata yeh kya pehna hain tumne ?? finally uday spoke after silence and eyecontacts of almost 5 mins
manyata with a smirk - kyu achi nhi lag rhi ??
uday - mane aisa toh nahi kaha ...tumhe nhi pta ki tum kitni ...kitni sundar lag rhi ho ...mere pass koi words nhi hain tumhe describe karne ke liye ...just then he realised what he had said ...i mean meri choose ki hui dress thi na isiliye acha toh lagna hi tha !!!!! he said to avoid and change the topic
han nhi toh !!!! mujhe nhi pata tha ki tumhari choice itni achi ho sakti hain manyata said !!!
finally u complimented me !!! manyata thought
uv - par ek bat mujhe samajh nhi ayi maine toh tumhe uss sales man ko abhi wali dress handover karte hue dekha tha lekin fir yeh dress tumne kab li ??
m - ofoo tum bhi na jab maine abhi ki dress handover ki thi usse pehle meine tumhari dress pack karne ke liye keh di thi !!!!
uv - oh mujhe laga ki tumne abhi ki choice slect ki !!!!!!! he said in a serious tone this time !!!!
m - pta hain kya ?? hum dono ek dusre ko kabhi nahi samajh sakte ...humari thinking na ek dum different hain ...jaise do states ke log alag hote hain waise hum bhi bohot alag hain !!! samajh lo ki tum KASHMIR HO AUR MAIN KANYAKUMARI
and he leaves a uday behind and goes in the main hall
acha bachu kanyakumari tum aur main kashmir ??? chahe yeh 2 states ek dum opposite ho lekin jo boundary kashmir se shuru hoti hain voh kanyakumari par hi end hoti hain !!!! HAN NHI TOH udaythought a gave a smirk

only then lights again went off
and a song starts !!!
and a spotlight came on a dashing guy
manyata smirked

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here the chapter 8 ends
phew this time i can't write more

precap - MANVEER HOT DANCE

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and i swear there's a lot more ahead more interesting and romantic

LOVE UR ANMOL AKA ANU
Edited by anu1299 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
thanks for updating
it was awesome
loved the entire chapter
hahaha manyata sayeri
and then uday and manyata scene
finally abhi mouth shut
do update next chappy asap
can't wait
thanks for the pm
hugs
ani
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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