ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey anu the update was very nice
now uday will taste his own medicine
i must say manyata is very smart in ur ss
liked this jelous uday
and the dream part was very shocking
the precap is worth waiting
thanks for pm
pls pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read all part together . Its awsm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. Love it. Looks like manyata's plan worked. Thanks for pm. Conti soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

😲 😆😆😆 Uday is jealousss!!!😛😆😆

Aww!😳 Such a sweet update,loved it!!👏🤗
Do update soon!! I mean it otherwise i'll murder you!!!😆😆😈


hey...glad that u liked it so much...
ya i'll update today in 10mins. or so...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update anu
loved it loads!

thanxx glad that u liked it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angleroops

hey anu the update was very nice

now uday will taste his own medicine
i must say manyata is very smart in ur ss
liked this jelous uday
and the dream part was very shocking
the precap is worth waiting
thanks for pm
pls pls update soon

'HEY THANXX ALOT...
ya she IS very smart in this ss...
ya even i love this jealous uday...
ya i know it was shocking...
i hope the next part will worth ur wait...
aww...that was my duty...
ya i'll be updating in 10 mins or so...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

just read all part together . Its awsm


thanxx alot...
gald that u liked t...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Superb update. Love it. Looks like manyata's plan worked. Thanks for pm. Conti soon.


thanx...
glad that u liked it...
yep manyata's plan worked out well...
aww that was my duty...
ya i'll continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guyss im back with the next part of LAT LAG GAYI

so here goes

CHAPTER 12..

Recap -->manyata thought...wow abhi ur the best ...itni achi timing ha tumahri...and she was smiling thinking this when uday came and took phone frm her hands and suddenly his face fell pale thinking that manyata was smiling looking at abhi's name...he jst disconnected the phone in anger and went from there without saying a word and manyata was confused...
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anger was building inside uday thinking that how can manyata be in relationship with abhi when she knows that she is uday's fianc...
he just left manyata's house in anger and didn't even noticed when brijraj called him out...
there manyata was in her room just so confused...
ye uday ko kya hua ? I mean itni late mujhe milne aya aur fir bina kuch bole chale gaya?
call karu kya usse ek bar to check what happened to him all of a sudden ? manyata said to herself...
but she droped the idea immediately she thought
samajhta kya hai yeh uday apne aap ko...kitne rudely voh chale gaya bina kuch bole...
she looked at her reflection in mirror and thought...
usne toh mujhe iss hot and happening night dress mei notice bhi nhi kiya...agar iski jagah koi aur hota aur mujhe aise dekh leta toh that person would have been fainted...aur usne kuch bola bhi nhi...im looking so hot yar...she took a deep breath and went to her bed...
there uday came and sat inside his car...and thought...
I think I was a bit too rude to manyata...i should've talked to her nicely and sorted out things...and her night dress...it was looking so HAWT...agar meri jagah koi aur hota toh he would have fainted for sure...she was looking so hot and happening...but mera ego...kuch toh karna padega...he thought and kept his head on steering wheel...

next day was busy for all manyata uday and abhi...
uday and abhi were shooting for their respective films where as manyata was busy shooting for commercial ads...
all of them wanted to finish their work soon and wanted to be free till evening...
there was a happening party in the city...and all famous ppl were invited...
...all manyata wanted was to look the best in the party...
as she knew that uday will be present over there...
there uday made plan to enter the party HANDS IN HANDS with SHREYA -_- >.<
in evening every one was getting ready...
uday as usual looked hot and happening as ever...in this


and abhi was wearing this...


while manyata looked dreamy wearing this...


and Shreya was wearing this...


manyta reached the venue first...getting her pics clicked all media members were going crazy asking her about her short hot dress ...in meantime abhi reached there and saw manyata...they both looked at each other and gave heart warming smiles to each other...abhi went where manyta was standing and they gave each other frndly hug...
while media was going crazy for clicking their pics ...
abhi forward his arm to manyata and she holded it...and together posed for the camera...
now it's the time for the entry of uday and Shreya...
both entered Shreya holding uday's arm...
and both came where manyata nd abhi were standing...
manyata's attention drifted towards uday and Shreya...she saw Shreya holding onto uday's arm...
come lets go ...abhi said to manyata ...
and they both went inside ...with abhi's hand on manyata's are back...
and once again uday was fuming in anger...
inside in party...
everyone was enjoying...
manyata and abhi were already on dance floor...enjoying dancing with each other with abhi's hand on manyata's waist and manyata's hand around abhi's neck...
while uday was busy meeting different directors and recommending Shreya for any upcoming film...
after dancing a lot manyta nd abhi came for having some drink...
2 taquela...manyata ordered...
while she saw Shreya was crossing their path...
so manyta said sarcastically..."OH ISN'T IT THE SAME DRESS I WORE IN ONE OF MY ADVERTISEMENT ? ...WELL I MUST SAY U LOOK GOOD IN THE DRESS...TRYING TO BE ME...BUT THERE'S ONE AND ONLY MANYATA IN BOLLYWOOD AND NO ONE CAN BE ME...I KNOW IM A FASHION ICON...BUT DON'T JUST SIMPLY COPY MY DRESSES...OR ELSE U WON'T BE GETTING ANY MOVIE OFFERS...CAUSE NO ONE WANT FAKE MANYATA ...EVERY ONE WANT ORIGINAL MANYATA...AND THAT'S ME..."
by this time Shreya was having tears in her eyes...and uday was just fuming in anger ...
firstly thinking how closely abhi and manyata were dancing and secondly manyata passed some lame comments on his best frnd...but somehow he contolled his anger cause he didn't wanted to spoil the mood of the party...
while abhi and manyta just hi-fived each other...took their drinks and went away frm there...
the whole time uday was drinking looking at ABHIMAN (abhi and manyta)
while many a times manyta use to share eyelocks with uday but use to break it instantly...
shreya was busy making more and more frnds so that she could get one chance in Bollywood...
party lasted for longer it was 3 in the morning ...everyone was leaving...
by this time all media members were gone...
manyata was standing near abhi's car as they decided to go on a drive cause they were in no mood of going back home...while abhi was busy talking to some directors discussing about some new scripts...
on the other hand uday was going towards his car...when he saw manyata's shadow ...
someone came frm back and back hugged her...she instantly came out of some thoughts...
she jst pushed that person and turned around ...she was about to shout when that guy covered her mouth
she was fighting hard to get out of the tight grip but was not able to get out...
slowly that guy started moving more and more close to her...tears started forming in her eyes...he was trying to kiss her...she was turning her face left and right so that he is not able to kiss her...that guy removed his hands from her mouth and holded her frm her neck and said...
agar chilane ki koshish kari to mar dalunga...
kya chahte ho tum ? kyu kar rhe ho ye sab ? huh ? manyata said in low voice crying...
vaisa hi karo jaisa mai keh rha hun...that guy moved his fingers on her face very sensually...and was going down towards her neck line when someone pushed him aside and punched him hard in his face and then in his stomach...
how dare u come near her... he shouted at the guy...
while manyta just went and hugged him...
thank god tum aa gaye...thank u uday...thank u for saving me from this jerk...thanks a ton...she was hugging him with full her body pressed angaist his body...
she was hugging him cause she was hell scared ...while he hugged her back...
he could feel his shirt getting wet due to her tears...
to console her he patted her back...his hands running from top to bottom on her bare back...and he said...
shhh...don't cry im here with u...calm down...and tell me how all this happened...
breaking the hug slowly and looking into uday's eyes with moist eyes she says...
I ...i was jst...jst standing over here...thinking about how rudely ur behaving with me...and u didn't even said a word to me tonight and suddenly this guy came from nowhere and tried to touch me...she said in a broken voice totally unaware what she just said that she was thinking about uday...smirk appeared on uday's face...
while manyata continued...uday he was all over me...he tired to kiss me...he tried to touch me...she said tears were flowing continuously...
uday was fully drunk as he was drinking the whole night but when he heard this anger was building inside and he was fully in senses and looked at that man who was lying on the road after getting punches from uday...
uday went and holded that man's collar and started beating him ...
abhi and Shreya came there where manyata and uday were present...
manyata was saying uday to leave that guy ...but uday didn't listen a word and was beating him till the time that the man fell unconscious...
abhi came and asked manyata what happened and manyta narrated the whole story to abhi...after listenin to the whole matter...abhi just cupped manyata's face and asked her gently : are u ok now? Kash mai tumhe aise akele nahi chodta...I so sorry manyata...
manyata brushed away the tears and said with a small dry smile : im fine now...and tumhari koi galti nhi hai...don't be sorry...
while uday was not happy when abhi touched manyata...
abhi turned towards uday and said : thanzz a lot dude...agar tu nhi hota toh naa jane manyata ka kya hota...
uday didn't said a word but just looked towards manyata...and she looked towards him and smiled...
come let's leave...we'r getting late...abhi said to manyata...
by now manyata was not in a mood to go on a drive she was about to say something when uday said...: abhi...ur not going anywhere...manyata com I'll drop u at home...
abhi : nahi uday iski koi zaroorat nhi hai...mai aur manyata long drive par jar he hai...
by listening this uday's anger knew no bounds...
and said in an irritating tone : why the hell u don't understand...manyata is not going anywhere...come manyata sit in the car I'll drop u...
uday came and holded manyta's hand and was about to take her with him but abhi holded his handed and jerked it from manyata's hand and said : uday ur drunk...calm down...
uday : even ur drunk...so don't make fake excuses...i know whats going on between u and manyata...but jst leave her...
abhi : yeah im drunk but ur over drunk...and waise bhi manyata came here with me and will leave with me only...
uday: she is not leaving with u...u understand ? I doubt u...u won't be able to care of her...
abhi : what the hell...
uday: just now what happened I can't trust u anymore...tumahri vajah se manyata ke sath kya hone wala tha ...i can't leave her with u...
abhi : and I can't leave her with U...just look at u...ur drunk...
uday :
abhi I can take care of her well...
abhi : uday just leave her and let her come with me...
now uday's anger knew no bounds and he shouted...can't u understand that I can take care of my fianc well...u need not think about her safety...and u better stay away from her...he said holding mayata's hand and made her sit in his car and left...
leaving behind confused abhi and Shreya...
the drive to manyata's house was silent...
manyata was not able to understand what just happened...
uday shouting on abhi...uday never cared about her so much and all of a sudden so much of care and affection for her why ? she was struggling with her thoughts...
and on the other hand abhi was confused what just uday said to him ...he never knew that uday is manyata's fianc...
and there Shreya who witnessed the whole drama was sulking in anger that how come uday never told her about the relation he shares with manyata...
abhi looked at Shreya and said : its late...come I'll drop u ...
she agreed and went with him to her house...
manyata came out of her thoughts when car stopped outside her house...
she looked at uday who was pretending as if he desn't care about manyata and looked straight in his direction...
manyata (very politely and cutely ) - uday ?
uday (acting as If he is least interested in listening..) - what ?
manyata- andar nhi aaoge ?
uday- look at the time its almost morning it'll not look good If I come to ur house this late...
manyata-its nothing like that uday...u can come to my house whenever u want to...no one can stop u ...and u know why ?
uday - why ? (still not looking in manyata's direction)
manyata- cause ur my fianc...I know I haven't accepted u by now...but remember ur my frnd now...and my frnds can come to meet me any time...
bye...she said and goes out of the car...uday looked towards manyata who was going inside he quickly came out nd shouted - MANYATA...
manyata turned towards him...- kya ?
uday - come here...
she confusingly went towards him...- kya hua?
uday - im sorry...
manyata not getting why he is saying this asked - sorry kyu uday ?...
uday - I know I've hurted u a lot...that day when Shreya passed lame comments to u I laughed with her...yesterday night I was a bit too rude too u...and even tonight I didn't said a word to u...
manyata smiled a bit and said - its fine uday...im happy that u atleast realised ur mistake...uday gave her a sweet smile and she reciprocates ...
ok bye uday...
as she turned to leave uday held her hand and made her face him...- manyata mujhe tumse kuch bat karni hai...
manyata- han bolo...
uday- look manyata its final that we have to get married for our parents and we can't change this decision now...and we'll have to make out relation a bit stronger...afterall we will get married and we can't be fighting all our life...so why don't we do something to make our relation better...
manyata- I agree with u uday...but what to do ..?
uday- owkay...so I have an idea...we both after finishing our work daily will call each other in night and tell what we did the whole day...and we'll not keep and secrets from each other so is it a deal ?
manyata - ya im confortable with it ...so it's a deal...
uday - so dea ko seal karne ke liye ek kiss toh banti hai...
manyata's eyes got widen...- huh ?
uday - aree shant ho jao...I was just joking...ok bye now...
manyata- bye...
uday - aree ruko...waise manna padega...bohot hot aur sexy lag rhi ho iss dress mei...
manyata just smiled and said thanxx...uday mera ghar jane ka bilkul bhi man nhi ho rha ...lets go somewhere else ?
uday - hmmm...to h kaha jana chahti hai aap at this point of time ? uday said crossing his arms across his chest and raising his eyebrows...
manyata- kahi bhi ...par ghar nhi...pls...na...pls...
uday - acha ok...come sit ...he said this and opens the gate of his car for manyata and she sits inside and uday comes and sit on driver's seat and started the car and left...
it was half an journey uday stopped at place ...manyata came out of her car and looked around it was the outer skirts of the city ...
uday - so liked this place?
manyata- like? I love this place uday...
uday went and sat on the bonnet of his car and asked manyata to sit beside him...
she came and sat beside him...
manyata- uday...thank u once again for saving me from that jerk...
uday- waise manyta awho was that guy ? I didn't recognised him...
manyata - I don't know uday...even I've never seen him before...must be any fan...
uday nodded in agreement...
manyata- uday tumhe kaise pata chala ki I was in danger?
uday narrated the story that he was coming towards his car when he saw manyata's shadow and saw someone came and back hugged her...he was confused so he come a bit near to get a better view that he saw him kissing her and pushed him aside and he beated him up...
manyata looked at uday and bite her lower lip she was having tears in her eyes thinking that if uday didn't have come there what would have happened to her uday noticed this and was getting a bit uncomfortable but he turned his face to the other side...
when suddenly manyata said WOW...
uday looked towards manyata and then in the direction where manyata was looking...
even he was amused to see the view infront of him...
looking at SUNRISE gives pleasure to everyone...
then he looked at his watch it was 5.30 a.m
uday - manyata its 5.30 and they needto leave now...as they haven't slept the whole night...and also if any media person captured them together it will become the news headline of every newspaper...so they left...
at 6 am they reached manyata's house before getting out she turned towards uday and said- I'll talk to u in night...
he smiled and she went out ...he looked at her till she disappeared...
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precap - manveer alone in manyata's house...
all servants on holiday...
manyata- aahhh...umm...no...its paining...shit...ahh...


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Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind blowing update yaar love love it

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