ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

heyy it sueprbbb,and speicaly dat mrning scene!!!!!!!😉😉 then party rmntic scenes!!!!!!!😊😊



thanxx alot ...glad that u liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey annu finaly u r back
i really missed u
nw pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

hey annu finaly u r back

i really missed u
nw pls update soon


aww finally there is someone who misses me 😳
yeah...and definately will be updating in 15 mins or so 😃😉
love anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
heya guys wassup ?
im so happy with the response im getting
thanxx to all those who read and apreciate my work 😳😃
and finally im updating almost after a month 😆
its too good to be back again 😉




precap- uday if im not wrong tum subha mere ghar aye the na ???
ahh nhi toh main toh shooting pe tha !!! uday said to avoid that question
lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hain ??? jo bat tumne subha ki thi vahi bat toh tum abhi bhi kar rhe ho !!!
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areee hadd hain ...hum kyu jhoot bolenge..?? hum sachi mein shooting pe the..
uday said
kya pta mujhe hi lag rha tha ki uday yaha tha ...yeh mujhse jhoot kyu bolega ? manyta thought acha yeh sab choddo...aur mujhe yeh necklace toh pehnayo😳
kya bat hain miss han nhi toh ...ek chain kya gift kardi aap toh itni romantic ho gayi 😆
manyata just looked at the floor and said without making any eyecontact
ji nhi aisi koi bat nhi hain ...main romantic nhi ho rhi...meine toh isiliye kaha tha kyuki tumne meri chain thodi thi aur ab tum hi hume chain pehnaoge
uday just gave his usual smirk
okiess if u insist me to...
he held manyata's shoulders and turned her around...
manyta was just looking at the floor
slowly he back hugged her...
yeh halkat kar kya rha hain ? manyata thought
slowly he holds manyata's hand and took the chain from her hands
and left her from his tight grip...
slowly he places the chain on manyata's neck
and slowly kisses on her earlobe
she just closes her eyes
slowly moving towards her neck he places small peks
she was getting ghoosebumps...
suddenly light was on
both of them got out of their intimate moment and looked around
giri and brij came to them and said
you both were just ossum
your chemistry is just so good
brij said
sahi kaha brij...
giri approved brij

soon the party was over
manyata was in her room
standing infront of the mirror
just remembering all the moments she spent with uday...
omg u r so cute uday 😉..wait did i just said he is cute ??? stop thinking about uday manyata ...and she went to her bed


on the other side uday was sitting on his bed
miss han nhi toh kuch bat toh hain aap mein ...baki ladkiyo ki tarah nhi hain aap...har ladki marti hain mujhe pe par aap mein kuch bat toh hain...
par fikar mat kijiye ek din aap bhi mere charm se bach nhi paogi ...


in morning
giri unnati and uday went to brij's house ...
everyone had dinner
manyata and uday were stealing glances ...
everyone noticed this and smiled ...
after breakfast
giri brij and vijay went for a meeting
unnati and komal went for shopping ...
leaving manveer all alone in the house
manyata and uday both thought to have a talk
manyata was about to say something but
a voice came from back
UDAYYY...
SHE CAME RUNNING AND SAID
omg uday i missed u so so so much !!!!😳! a girl said hugging uday tightly
manyata was just looking at them with confusion...
what the hell ??? what is she doing ...infact who is she ???? she was thinking and her face was turning red😡
and just to add flavour in her emotions...😲
the girl kisses uday on cheeks...😳😆
now its beyond the limits...how dare she kissed him ??? 😡she is gone.....manyata starts taking steps towards them only then enters the great ABHINAV KUNDRA...
hey manyata !!!😊 he said ...
manyata turned towards the gates....
god this man is truly ossum...he always come on perfect time ...😃now u wait and watch mr. udayveer kapoor...😈bohot chipak rahe the na iss chipku se ...she thought and gave an evil smile ...
i missed u too my doll...its so nice to meet u after so much time shreya ...
uday said breaking the hug listening to abhi's voice...
manyata ran and hugged abhi
abhi finally you are here...
uday was just giving them a deadly look...
aapne bulaya aur hum chale aye...abhi said in most dramatic way ever
by the way shreya aap yaha kaise ayi ?? i mean aapko kisne bataya ki hum yaha hain ...uday said a little loudly to grab manyata's attention
arree main tumhare ghar gayi thi na toh watchman ne bataya ki tum manyata ke ghar gaye ho...toh maine usse yaha ka address likh walia ...aur yaha aa gayi shreya said ...
address le liya in the sense ?? i mean don't u even know manyata chopra's address huh ?? manyata said with atitude
sorry to dissappoint you darling but seriously i didn't knew manyata chopra's address...shreya said just to make manyata super mad at her
bloody chepo the creapo... manyata thought no worries baby i hope ab toh pta chal hi gaya ho ga ...but manna padega ki aapko manyata chopra ka address nhi pta...
kyu zaroori hain ki mujhe tumhara THE manyata chopra ka address pta ho ??
han zaroori hain...
uday and abhi just looking at two girls just ready for WWE fighting
shant lady bheem shant...uday said to manyata to make her calm down
lolss lady bheem...omg uday what a name u gave to this ms.atitude..shreya said with a smirk
uday tum bhi mera mazak uda rhe ho ?? i thought ki tum badal gaye ho ...lekin nhi tum layak hi nhi ho meri frndship ke ...never ever talk to me...hate u
i'll never see ur face again in my life manyata thought her eyes have already became moist ...
uday noticed this and signalled shreya to be quiet
who was just laughing
while manyata just ran from there to her room and locked it ...
uday yeh kya kiya tune ?? abhi said
maine kya kiya ?? maine toh bas situation sambhalne ki koshish ki thi ...said uday
aise sambhali tune situation ?? ab baith ja iss bhootni ke sath and make fun of manyata...u'll never come to know who is the real manyata cause no onwards she will not be talking to u ...abhi said
and how do u know this ?? uday asked abhi
i know this cause she is my best frnd and i know her very nicely ...shreya was just looking at abhi ...who just said her bhootni😆😆

PRECAP - shreya and uday in a resturant
and there enters abhi and manyata ...

sorry for any gramitical and spelling mistakes ...

love anmol ❤️
Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
thanks for the pm
sorry my like button not working
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear hows you??? 😊
well the chappy was s000000 awsum yar... i really loved it man 👏 👏 👏...good job, keep it up.

the manveer necklace scene was beyond everything...so0o0o romantic and dreamy awww i enjoyed reading it...but then i also meet a jealous manyata...that shreya, just wanna kill her. I hope manveer ki fight khatam hojai...😭 😭 😭.

u wrote every part nicely...thanks for the p.m...🤗and yeah do continue so0o0on ... you have updated after a very long time. 😭
Edited by mimi.maik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
oye this is not done!!
ek toh itne din bad update diya who bhi chota!
plzz next time bada aur jaldi dena!
vese dis update was mind blowing
update really soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai, awesome part.. Loved Manyata said 'you are so cute ,Uday'. Who is this shreya? Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!
hows u?😊
& sorry for the late reply, as i was busy in my seminar
well, awesome chappy dear
i just loved it
manveer's scene was superb
please do update next chappy soon
btwn thanks for the pm

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