ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyzz thnk u for ur lovely cmmnts im so happy
anyways im updating the 2nd chappy hope u all like it

precap- ok dad hum mom aur vijay bhai se milke ate hain manyata said and excused her frm der
she saw someone nd hugged her frm back
mom she said excitedly
komal turned around - mera bacha kaise ho aap ?
manyata - im fine ma aap batao hitler ke sath thik ho na ??
komal - anu ?? koi apne dad ko hitler kehta hain ??
manyata - acha ok watever i'll go nd get fresh
komal - ok
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manyata goes to her room nd locks the room nd sit on her bed
god ye kya kar rhe ho mere sath bunny kya kar rha hain ???
she thinks nd say - usne kaha tha ki kisi reason ki vajah se voh aya hain kya reason ho sakta hain ??? ho sakta hain voh hamesha ki tarah mujhe pareshan karna chahta ho ?? vaise bhi usse kya lena dena mera han nhi toh

suddenly a voice comes - believe me jab tumhe reason pta chalega tab tumhara lena dena sirf mujhse hoga HAN NHI TOH
she is shocked nd thinks gate was closed??? nd looks in the direction frm where the voice was coming
(manyata's room has a big window through which house's lobby can be seen )
shit how can i forget this bloddy window she thinks

manyata - wat u mean ??
udayveer- u'll come to know very fast
manyata - jab pata chalega tab chalega abhi tum yaha se jao she says in a angry voice
udayveer - shant lady bheem shant take it easy before he could complete he was cut off by manyata
manyata - easy ??? easy toh tab hoga jab tum yaha se jaoge ...so will u plzz leave now ???
udayveer - cool
nd goes frm der
god i hate dat guy

flashback -
itni khatarnak eyes itne milky milky tumhare cheeks itne rosy lips he said moving his finger all over her face
shut up nd leave me now she shouts
calm down baby calm down main toh bas itna hi keh rha tha ki tumhari jaisi ladki ko junior actoress nhi balki lead actoress hona chahiye he says holding her tightly from waist
huh ???? tum kon hote ho mujhe yeh batane wale ki main lead actoress hun ya supporting actoress ??? casting director ??? she says
na hum toh keh rhe the ki hum apko iss industry mein bahot achi actoress bna sakte hain he says in a firm tone
acha ?? she asks
han ...bas ek rat humare before he could say he got a slap on his face he was shocked
apni tameez mein reh kar bat karo samjhe ??? ullu ka patha she says nd tries to go frm der but she was pulled back
itni himmat mujhe thappar mara tumne ??? huh ??? samajhti kya ho tum apne aap ko kahi ki hoor pari ho ??? iss thapar ka badla to hum lekar hi rahe ge he said in irritating and angry voice
jab badla loge tab dekhlenge she sid in a firm tone she pushes him in full power nd goes frm der
flashback ends

god is he taking the revenge ??? maine uss din usse thappar mara tha voh kahi mujhse badla toh nhi le rha ??? nhi mishri kya soch rhi hain tere ghar mein aa gaya toh kya badla le rha hain tujhse ???? ahh leave this topic manyata thinks nd goes to washroom to have a shower

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komal - manyata beta aaj hum sab dinner ke liye ja rhe hain aap chalengi na
manyata - ma aap janti ho na agar mein chali gayi toh vaha koi hume dinner nhi karne dega sab autograph aur pics click karne meinhi puri rat khatam kar denge
komal - tabhi toh hum apke dad ke hotel ja rhe hain in full privacy

( brijraj and giriraj are buisness tycoon nd big industrialist so they have der own chain of hospitals , hotels , restaunts , shcools colleges hospitals etc )
manyata - acha theek hain ma

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it was 8 pm nd every one was ready but manyata was still in her room
she is a leading actoress in bollywood she have to look sizzling
she came out wearing a very very mini dress nd open curls in her hairs nd wearing a high heels
she came down in style every one was looking at her but udayveer was busy in his phone but suddenly he turned nd saw manyata coming down he was awstruk for a moment
she is so sexy he thought his mouth open in a O shape manyata came near him nd say mouth band karlo makhi ghus jayegi
nd giggles nd goes frm der
udayveer regains his senses nd leaves too

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everyone was in restraunt
every one was chit chating
manyata was talking to komal udayveer talking to vijay brijraj talking to giriraj
brijraj - giri yaar yeh unnati abhi tak nhi ayi
giriraj humari bat hui hain unse voh bas ati hi hongi
udayveer - dad di aa rhihain apne mujhe bata bhi nhi
( in story unnati and vijay are elder tha manyata and udayveer )
kyuki mein apko surprise karna chahti thi a voice came and everyone turns nd der was standing unnati
di shouts udayveer nd goes nd hug her di i missed u so much
i missed u too bacha unnati speaks hugging him
maybe he is arrogant but still he have feelings manyata thinks
unnati comes nd wishes everyone
giriraj - brij i think its the time to make the announcement
brijraj - yeah
giriraj - i have to make an announcement
everyone looks at him
brijraj - we both are best frnds buisness partners so we were thinking why not become relatives ???
every one confused
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precap- manyata - bhai aap khush ho na
vijay - manu dad humare liye acha hi sochenge
udayveer - di are u ok
unnati - ofcourse bacha dad will always think good for me
thats it for the update i hope u like it it was not so big but still i don't want the announcement to be out so soon
actually might u noe it but still

love anu



Edited by anu1299 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awesome
loved it dear
awn uday evesdropping
ok now got the reason
but the rflashback
omg what will happen now
loved manyata avatar
hahahha this is normally uday dialogue
ok the promo is superb
thanks for the pm
continue asap
ps again first to comment😃
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awsssmmm update anu
love it
unnati and vijay are elders
unnati say uday bachaaa hehehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
nice update anu

guess unati is elder to uday

interesting promo.

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant anu both chapters were superly Awsum ... Loved the whole concept to the core...plz do continue soon and thanks for the p.m...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
that was really awesome!!!
well m a bit confused but I guess...
as u go on updating...
my doubts will be solved!!!
beautifully written dear!!!!
update soon...
do continue
and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Awesum update.. 👍🏼

Loved it...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Omg, awesome update
Love it 👏
Bit confused 😕
Flashback was amazzing ⭐️
Wow, manyata slapped uday.
Really excited to know what the announment is 😃
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Hey... anu...
I read all the parts in one go...
They were really nice...
Update soon...
And pls do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnk u so much guyzz for ur cmmnts
Next update will be on wednesday
Edited by anu1299 - 12 years ago

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