ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: huma12.
Awsssmmm update

thnk u so much

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: princessSonia
Awesome update...👏

Loved it...
Thnks 4 d pm..

N thnks fr continuing d work...

thnk u ...

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: preya_radev
Awesome Anu loved this part tje shopping and cinema scene was awesome and glad h drives to continue this ff... Also the last scene where vijay bhai is running after manyata is lovely and te precap is really interesting update soon and thanks for the pm

let me be honest i got this idea from ur ff FOREVER AND ALWAYS lol

ya i'll try to update soon

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: mimi.maik
Thank u sooo much for updating yar...I was soo sad when u said u r disconnecting it but now I m sooo happy...I really loved this nok jhonk of uday and manyata...Awww they slept while watching movie...soo lovely...do continue soon and thanks for the p.m...love u.

sorry yar i said that i'll discontinue ...anyways thank you so much ya i'll continue soon love u too

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Hey very nice update... Thanks for continuing, update next one soon n thanks for d pm

thnk u so much ya i'll update soon

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: pia.raha
woww film ka part was so romnticc!!!!!! manyata geting goosebumps,feeling nervous,hayeee!!!! 😊😊 then dat chain part was also soo cute,bt uday ne tod di,

thnk u so much im glad that u liked it ...yep chain wala part was very cute

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz
i love you 2 finally u continue dear i pm my all firends ok n loveed ur update dear tahnk you 4 continue i really liked it update awsome u r sach a awsome writter plss manveer part thora ziyada n update long wala n han romance manveer ahem ahem lovely update u r the awsome we love you dear update really soon i can't wait more sorry 4 the late comment but really loved it u r the amazing writter buhot good buhot khoob likha maza agaya mujhe it's amazing update uday omg mardala manyata so much cute both my fav n i loioved ur ss n it's name lat lag gayi it's my fav song n ur it's my fav balke mujhe ab is ff se pyar hogaya han yaqeen manu yar bas ab mere liya jaldi se update dedu na me waiting we loved ur story so much u know na now pls update na ab hum or wait nai karsakte thank you 4 the pm n plss pm me always wen u update hope u liked my comment

ps-plss continue this ff

ayesha i luv u luv u luv u loads dear ...im so glad that u liked this part ...nd ya wait for next update its full of romance and manveer scenes ...nd thank u so so much for sending the links and ya ...thnk u so much for such a big comment ...love u yarrr

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Hi di, how u?

So sorry for replying so late, internet problems

I'm so glad that I read chapter 6 n 7 now

They were amazing

Loved it a lot

Loved his plan to make Manyata eat

Looks like he caught a bug called jeolousy

Lol

Loved how they both fell off to sleep in the cinema

N woke upfinding themselves in each others arms(soo cute)

Thanks for the pm

Plz update soon

Very eager to know more

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

hey guyzz how r u all ??

i know im litle late for the chapter 8 but im little busy these days so will try to post on friday or saturday...

well im giving u the promo

everyone was present in hall waiting for the girl of the night unnati

SUDDENLY LIGHTS WENT OFF AND A FLASHLIGHT WAS SPOTTED ON STAIRS

THERE CAME TWO QUEENS OF THE EVENING

UNNATI AND MANYATA

everyone was awstruck looking at them

but two were atturly shocked and looked at each other

abhi - uday yeh manyata ne kya pehna hua hain ???

uday with a smirk - clothes

abhi - par yeh voh dress nhi hain jo maine select ki thi

without answering abhi...uday went close to manyata and pulled her in a corner

m - kya kar rhe ho uday ...in a bit irritating tone

uv was just looking at her ...manyata yeh tumne kya pehna hua hain ?? he muttered after silence and eyecontacts of 5 mins

manyata smiles and say - kyu achi nhi lag rhi ???

uv - par uss din toh tumne voh dress select ki thi joh abhi ko pasand thi ...

m - hum dono ek dusre ko kabhi nhi samajh sakte ...jaise doo states ke log ...humari thinking ekdum opposite hain jaise kashmir tum aur main kanyakumari ???? and goes from there

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arrey manyata aur uday tum dono bhi jao and dance ...said brij

par dad abhi toh itna dance kiya hain ...manyata said

brij ka matlab go and dance on romantic song not retro songs ..giri said

uday forwards his hand and manyata put her hand in his

both go to dance floor

manyata was looking here and there avoiding uday's gaze

while his gaze were fixed on her

he pulled her closer which makes her look into his eyes her hands were now resting on his chest ...and he slowly brushing his hands through her soft skin holds her bare waist

only then song starts

RAABTA FROM MOVIE AGENT VINOD

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

THEY BOTH WERE DANCING SLOWLY LOOKING IN EACH OTHER EYES

SLOWLY AND SLOWLY THEY WERE MINIMIZING THE DISTANCE BETWEEN THEM

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

TO BREAK THE AWKWARDNESS FINALLY UDAY SPOKE

ABHI TAK NARAZ HO CHAIN KI VAJAH SE ?? SORRY NA YAR GALTI SE TOOT GAYI THI

M - MERI SABSE FAVOURITE CHAIN THI VOH JO TUMNE TODD DI ...

UDAY SLIGHTLY TURNED HER SO NOW HER BACK WAS FACING HIM

SLOWLY BACK HUGGING HER HE WAS DANCING

hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri saubat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

SLOWLY HE REMOVES HIS HANDS FROM HER WAIST AND SHE FEELS SOMTHING ON HER NECK SHE TOUCHED HER NECK ...IT WAS A CHAIN

M - OMG ...UDAY ITS FOR ME !!!!! ??? SHE ASK IN EXCITEMENT

UV - NHI JAY KE LIYE !!!!! OBVIOUSLY TUMHARE LIYE HAIN MANYATA !!!!

M - PAR ACHANAK SE MERE LIYE ???

UV - 2 REASONS HAIN - 1ST MAINE TUMHARI CHAIN TODD DI THI TOH YEH NAYI CHAIN

2ND ..HUM DONO JALD HI SHADI KAR LENGE LEKING SHADI AUR PYAR SE PEHLE DOSTI HONI BHI TOH ZAROORI HAIN ...SO GIVING THIS AS A GIFT MORE AS A SUGGESTION ...DUSHMANI MEIN KYA RAKHA HAIN ?? DOSTI KARKE DEKHTE HAIN ???

MANYATA WAS JUST SPEECHLESS

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

SO GUYZZ THIS WAS THE PROMO ..HOPE U LIKE IT

GIVE BACK UR SUGGESTIONS PLZZ AND SORRY FOR ANY GRAMITIC MISTAKE ...

LOVE ANMOL

Edited by anu1299 - 12 years ago

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

hello meri jaan..
howz you ?? mr.s
kya baat han meri jaan ya kya kari ho tum
kyu itne shock derahi ho mujhe...??
ya kya update tha par buhot chota tha
i want to big big bigest chappy??
and ya kya tha promo??
ya tu buhot buhot buhot buhot chotu update tha
bdw wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow
jita wow wow wow kahu kaam han is story ke liya
first story name hamesha se mera fav han
mere fav song ka name han wow wow wo
mujhe tu teri lat lag lag gayi zamane chaya lat ya galat lag gayi mujhe tu teri lag gayi...
mujhe tu anu ki lat lag gai
anu sach brilliant job maza agaya u rock yara
wow uday awsome attitude
abhi i hate him like helll
i want to kill him kamina saaala
kutta abhi bitch dumbo kamina han or rahega
wow manveer scene was awsome
manveer talking omg amazing lovely wo wow
wat a dance but where is romances??
chain scene was amazing awsum lovely
gri and bri so cute dono se dance karwaya
wow my day my charm awsm
finally mere prince ne dushmani khatam kardi
or princess ko speechless bana hi diya akhir
akhir mera prince jo han
amazing last part was awsum lovely
amaizng update sooon kaal do pls
i can't wait more and more
please update update update
fast fast update dedu madam anmol
warna maar kahaogi
han nai tu...jaldi update
wid manveer full scence
and romance and longest update
smaji gayi na tu jaldi update do please
love love love love love you...!!!

urs.
sweety
ayesha

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago

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