ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
will be waiting annu
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Originally posted by: roopali15

will be waiting annu


sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
SO HEYA GUYZZZ
WASSUP.?? I KNOW IM LITLE LATE FOR THE UPDATE BUT WHAT TO DO MY EXAMS ARE JUST AROUND THE CORNER SO BUSY WITH THE PREPRATIONS
SO ENOUGH OF MY BAK BAK




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PRECAP - acha bachu kanyakumari tum aur main kashmir ??? chahe yeh 2 states ek dum opposite ho lekin jo boundary kashmir se shuru hoti hain voh kanyakumari par hi end hoti hain !!!! HAN NHI TOH udaythought a gave a smirk

only then lights again went off
and a song starts !!!
and a spotlight came on a dashing guy
manyata smirked

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a spotlight came on a dashing guy
suddenly that guy turns ...
on the ocassion of engagement of my dearest elder sis..i would like to perform a litle bit of talent i have ...no guyzz i will not say any dailoge or show any of my films but i will show the talent which every actor must have...i an here to perform a DANCE ...


haila 😲 yeh dance karega ??? agar yeh dance karega toh mere bhai ki engagement toh flop ho jayegi ...dance ka "D" toh janta nhi hain aya bada dance karne wala han nhi toh ...kuch karna padega isse dance karne se rokna padega ...par kaise ??? ummm han jaise hi he will start dancing i will also join him in dance so that log isse nhi mujhe dekhe ...han i'll do it ...MANYATA THOUGHT ...
while uday continued with his speech
so before i would start my dance i would like to call upon the stage the beautiful the wonderful and most talented dancer in bollywood
MS. MANYATA CHOPRA ...
and the other second one spotlight was being flashed on manyata

han ?? am i seeing a dream or something ??? yeh halkat veda aaj mujhse itne pyar se kaise bat kar rha hain ??? anyways acha hi hua isne mujhe khud bula liya...manyata thought and went on the stage
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SONG- KASHMIR TU MAIN KANYAKUMARI
FROM MOVIE - CHENNAI EXPRESS

here is the link do play before reading further !!!!!!

Chipak-chapak ke chalti hain
Kabhi kabhi do raahein
uday starts dancing
Jude-jude kuch aise ki laga ho jaise gum
manyata comes from back and does a step and winks at uday
Double-double hoti thi jo kabhi-kabhi taqleefein
uday does a step
Kisi ke sang mein chalne se hui half se kum
manyata does her step
Ho tera-mera, mera-tera
Tera-mera, mera-tera qissa atrangi
Kabhi-kabhi chalti hai
Kabhi-kabhi rukti kahani bedhangi

both start dancing together
Kashmir main tu Kanyakumari
North-South ki kat gayi dekho doori hi saari
Kashmir tu main kanyakumari
Fifty-fifty har situation mein hissedari

both are dancing together and enjoying
manyata holds uday's collar
Ek taraf to jhagda hai
and then give uday a side hug on the following line
saath phir bhi tagda hai
Do kadam chalte hain to lagta hai aath hain
manyata dances on the above line
and uday come from behind
Do tarah ke flavour firstly uday pulls up his collars and then pulls manyata's cheek
sau tarah ke tevar and then he hit manyata on her hips through his hips :p lol
Dar-badar firtein hain ji phir bhi apni thaath hai
Kabhi-kabhi chale seedhe, kabhi mud jaayein
Kabhi-kabhi kahin tootein, kahin jud jaayein
Hum sham-sahar ke
Chaaron pahar ke
Mood mein dhal jaayein
again they start dancing together
Kashmir main, tu Kanyakumari
Uttar ne dakshin ko aflatoon aankh maari
Kashmir tu, main Kanyakumari
Tel bechne jaaye toh phir yeh duniya saari
Hey hey...

uday turns and twistes manyata and then she was about to fall on ground
but uday holds her from waist ...

manyata's eyes were tightly closed ...and uday was just staring at her blankly she realises that she is safe...
she slowly opens her eyes
both were looking at each other
suddenly all other starts claping and uday makes manyata stand on her feets
unnati comes there and hugs both of them together - omg...my cuty pies
u know what u both so freaking ossum together ...
manyata and uday looked at each other
unnati breaks the hug only to find manveer's intense eyecontact
ahem ahem guyzz ur in a public place i guess so apna yeh so called romance bad mein karna ...unnati taunts manveer
manveer soon regains their senses
come lets go...unnati says and goes from their
and without speaking a word manyata also leaves ...
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brij - my god ...u both kids look so good together
uday looked at manyata who was looking here and there
uday - thanxx uncle brij,
giri - brij bohot ho gayi batey ab chalo rings exchange bhi toh karni hain !!!
brij - han giri i think its almost the time ...
they both goes to the satge
brij - thank u all for joining us and making this day special for unnati and vijay ...so now there is ring exchanging ceremony ...manyata beta plzz can u bring unnati's ring over here
manyata came up to the stage with the ring
on the other side a girl or maybe any cousin of unnati came with a ring for vijay
soon both vijay and unnati exchanged the rings

suddenly jay enters the venue
omg guyzz u didn't even waited for me ??? itni jaldi thi engagement ki ?? yar hadd hoti hain ???
brij - beta hum kya karte mahurat nikla jaa rha tha aur yeh bhi nhi pta tha ki aap kab ayengi ...
koi bat nhi chachu ab main aa gayi hu na ab dekho main iss party ko kaise rocking banati hun ...jay said omg manyata di ur just looking stunning ...waise yeh voh dress joh uday ne slect ki thi ???
first of all thanxx alot and ya yeh vahi dress hain jo uday ne slect ki thi and second kaha thi tu ??? han ??? manyata said
ehh di ek urgent operation tha so went there ...jai answered
oh! so how was ur operation?? manyata asked
i tried a lot di but that guy is not alive anymore ...jai said
oh! im sorry ...anyways cheer up lets have fun its vb's engagement yar udhar dekh vijay bhai ko omg he is blushing like a bride and look at unnati she is so relaxed and calmed ...aisa lag rha hain ki ladka unnati hain aur ladki vijay !!!! manyata tried to change the topic
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so finally its here ...uday thought
sorry sir thoda late ho gaya ...a person who was standing beside uday said
koi bat nhi thanxx uday said
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jay is standing on the stage
hey guyzz as u all know today is engagement of my dearest vijay bhai and i want to see how much chemestry is there between the new couple so how about having a couple dance ??? so lets not tarry and all the couples get on the dance floors
everyone was on the dance floor with their partners
except manveer , jay , abhi ,brij and giri
uday finally thought to ask manyata for a dance so he starts going towards manyata
while manyata was talking to jay
uday - hey ladies ...
manyata and jay turned towards uday
jay - hey uday ...i must say ur choice is fab...just look at di yar she is looking so stunning ...
while manyata just blushed ...
uday looked at manyata - maine toh pehle hi kaha tha she will look very beautiful in this dress
now manyata's cheek were so red that we can't conclude tomatoes are more red or her cheeks ...lol
at the same time brij and giri came there
arrey manyata aur uday tum dono bhi jao and have a dance ...said brij
par dad abhi toh itna dance kiya hain ...manyata said
brij ka matlab go and dance on romantic song not retro songs ..giri said
uday forwards his hand and manyata put her hand in his
both go to dance floor
manyata was looking here and there avoiding uday's gaze
while his gaze were fixed on her
he pulled her closer which makes her look into his eyes her hands were now resting on his chest ...and he slowly brushing his hands through her soft skin holds her bare waist
only then song starts

RAABTA FROM MOVIE AGENT VINOD
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

THEY BOTH WERE DANCING SLOWLY LOOKING IN EACH OTHER EYES
SLOWLY AND SLOWLY THEY WERE MINIMIZING THE DISTANCE BETWEEN THEM
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

TO BREAK THE AWKWARDNESS FINALLY UDAY SPOKE
ABHI TAK NARAZ HO CHAIN KI VAJAH SE ?? SORRY NA YAR GALTI SE TOOT GAYI THI
M - MERI SABSE FAVOURITE CHAIN THI VOH JO TUMNE TODD DI ...
UDAY SLIGHTLY TURNED HER SO NOW HER BACK WAS FACING HIM
SLOWLY BACK HUGGING HER HE WAS DANCING

hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri saubat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta


SLOWLY HE REMOVES HIS HANDS FROM HER WAIST AND SHE FEELS SOMTHING ON HER NECK SHE TOUCHED HER NECK ...IT WAS A CHAIN
M - OMG ...UDAY ITS FOR ME !!!!! ??? SHE ASK IN EXCITEMENT
UV - NHI JAY KE LIYE !!!!! OBVIOUSLY MERI MS. HAN NHI TOH KE LIYE HAIN !!!
M - PAR ACHANAK SE MERE LIYE ???
UV - 2 REASONS HAIN - 1ST MAINE TUMHARI CHAIN TODD DI THI TOH YEH NAYI CHAIN
2ND ..HUM DONO JALD HI SHADI KAR LENGE LEKING SHADI AUR PYAR SE PEHLE DOSTI HONI BHI TOH ZAROORI HAIN ...SO GIVING THIS AS A GIFT MORE AS A SUGGESTION ...DUSHMANI MEIN KYA RAKHA HAIN ?? DOSTI KARKE DEKHTE HAIN ???
MANYATA WAS JUST SPEECHLESS

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye


uday if im not wrong tum subha mere ghar aye the na ???
ahh nhi toh main toh shooting pe tha !!! uday said to avoid that question
lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hain ??? jo bat tumne subha ki thi vahi bat toh tum abhi bhi kar rhe ho !!!
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so here i end 9th chapter !!!!
thanxx alot guyzz for ur support i hope u like it and i didn't wasted ur time plzz ignore any spelling or gramatic mistakes

precap - abhi even im getting bored chalo na aaj kahi bahar chalte hain ...manyata said
abhi -sure par aapko jana kaha hain ??
kahin bhi ...umm lets go for dinner ???

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LOTS OF LOVE
ANMOL AKA ANU







Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey annu
how are you?
well yess i am the first to comment
the update is awesome
the ss is just so romantic
loved the dance
specially the romantic dance
they both are falling for each other i feel
awn so manyata completely agreed with the marriage
now i can't wait longer
please get them married past
and the way he gifted her the chain
was mind blowing
do update more often
as i am growing fond of this story
hugss
anni
Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey anu the updae was fab
i luv their dance
wow gift her chain
promo is intresting
luving manveer moments

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my!
yeh abhi bar bar bich mein ajata hai!
so finally ab Hume manveer ki asal chemistry milegi with jealousy!
awesome!!
as usual Anu great!
update soon
and yeah best of luck fr exam!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it was awesome anu, i loved d choice of songs... Hey i wanna see manveer getting married soon n i think next update will b either lil spicy( bcoz of jealous uday) or may be a lil sad due to some MU, waiting for d next update eagerly... Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!
awesome update dear, loved it
loved the dance btwn manveer
u have also written it beautifully
& in precap is interesting
please do updae soon
as i'm eagerly waiting for it




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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey di
How u? 😊
Wow di, amazing, superb, fantastic update 👏 👍🏼
Loved it ❤️ ⭐️
Aww, soo cute
Loved how Uday gifted her the necklace
N the way they danced
Wow, already geting into intense eyelocks, lol
Y doesn't Uday want to tell her that he was there in the morning
Promo is kind of scary, don't know y but I feel something big might just happen
Very excited n eager to read next chapter
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃
Edited by humairaa1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the late reply Anu...coming to the update then it was mind blowing really loved it Especialy the first dance of manveer I can actually imagine them doing steps on that song lol and the second dance which was romantic was really lovely... Love the precap please update soon and thanks for the pm
Edited by preya_radev - 11 years ago

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