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Bhatakti_atma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ratibob007

I loved all parts.

I have read it in one go.
I loved the story & the concept.
Please do update soon.


THANX A LOT DEAR😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE:

Guys i want to know ur view on something.

I am in 10th now so i really need to work hard and writing will be a problem after sometime..
So i wanted to ask something.
can u all bare with updates after a long time like once in three or four weeks?or would you all like small updates that you may get once a week ?

plz i need ur opinion ...plz tell me...plzzz its important for me as a writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE 14

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Soon the music was stopped and they both stood there.

"Rhea you seem to lose coordination.

Hey you please can you come here?"

Ms.Aaha pointed towards Nupur and asked her to come out.


Nupur was surprised as she never thought that she would be called out.
She nervously went out and stood besides Mayank.


"Yes mam."
Nupur said nervously.


"Rhea just step aside. And Mayank and youuu..?"
Since Ms.Aaha dint know her name she stressed on the word you.


"Nupur."
She immediately told her name.


"Ok Nupur I want you two to dance together right now."


"But mam.."
Nupur interrupted.


"No if and no but."


"Mam actually."
Mayank too spoke in between.


"Mayank please you really don't seem comfortable and that's the reason you and Rhea cant coordinate may be you are very close friends and this closeness in dance made you uncomfortable. And it's quite natural but I know you are very talented and we need you to dance so please now no if and no but. Put on the music please."


Nupur at the moment was confused in all this and the start of music shook her from her place in that state only
Mayank held her hand and brought her close in such a way that she collapsed with his chest which made her look in his eyes. Mayank blinked his eyes to make her feel better but
Nupur was just too nervous to understand anything so she again lowered her gaze.

The music started and it was time for some action.

Jogi Nach Le

Rang Rach De

Jogi Nach Le

Rang Rach De

Mayank kept his hand on Nupur's waist which made Nupur close her eyes because she could feel shivers running down her spine. Nupur then slowly kept her hand on his shoulder and then they started with their moves.

Lehraake Balkhaake

Tu Duniya Bhulaake Naach

Mayank and Nupur were slowly getting comfortable with everyone enjoying with the flow of the dance except for one person , Rhea. She was fuming with anger. Her anger could easily be seen in her eyes. She must have never thought that anyone like Nupur would come in her life and destroy her fields that she had been preparing since childhood. Obviously she would not give up easily but as of now she could not think of anything except Mayank touching Nupur and actually enjoying the dance with her.

Dhun Koi Gun Gunaale

Gaane Tu Gaake Naach

And this was the level when comfortableness was completely gained between the two. They had a charming smile on their faces along with a charming performance .

Ranginiyon Mein Kho Ja

Pike Pilaake Naach

Madbhare Naino Se Tu

Naina Milaake Naach

The duo were completely lost in the performance and brought the best out of them.

Uff Teri Ada

I Like The Way You Move

Uff Tera Badan

I Like To See You Groove

Uff Teri Nazar

It Says I Wanna Dance With You

With the end of the song , the mesmerizing performance of the duo also came to an end.


Mayank and Nupur danced so well that everyone clapped for them except for Rhea.


Nupur was herself stunned that she danced so well. She had never done a couple performance before with a guy but had always tried it with Gunjan after watching it on TV and that's the reason she could coordinate well with him an she was quite happy with what she did.

"Excellent guys. What a performance! I don't know why this team wasn't made before . Ok that's not a problem I will make the following changes."

MS. Aaha said with all the joy she had gained after watching the performance.

Rhea thought that it was an excellent chance to interrupt and tell MS.Aaha that Nupur is a new student and it's against the rules for new comers to do the performance. So without wasting any time she spoke

" But mam.."

MS.Aaha cut her I between

"Yes Rhea I know this would be wrong on your side so I'll find you another partner."

"Mam I am saying that Nupur is a new comer and it's against the rules for her to perform."

"Is it? Nupur is a new comer. Why you people dint tell me about it before?"

MS.Aaha said in a state of shock.

"Mam we tried telling you but you dint listen to us."

Nupur said defending them.

"Ok so nothing can be done about it now. Principal will not allow this and I am really sad about it. But nevertheless Nupur I have some other work for you. You have to take care of their performance. You will be responsible for their mistakes mind you and I'll make sure you get time for your own performance and you don't have to worry about any backstage work. Ok?

"

Rhea was happy before but again she was disappointed that all the time when they would be practicing with Nupur would be there . she hated it. Nupur's presence made her feel suffocated. She had to do something for sure and she was surely going to give time to the thought this was all that she had in her mind.

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HOPE YOU LIKE IT😃

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PLEASE SEE THE NOTE ABOVE AND DO REPLY ITS IMPORTANT😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yashfeen it was totally gorgeous update...grrt work
Omgg mayur were so magical asusual

Ok..now coming to ur note
Omgg u r in 10 th u must absolutely concentrate on ur studies first ...😲
We can wait for ur updates dear...but ur studies are more imp😊
From my side...m ok for update in three to four weeks
All the best for ur studiesšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww i twas such a beautiful update dear
awesome
loved it so much

study is more imp- u should concentrate on study HUN
i want small update per week- and longer one whenever u'll get free frm ur study..
regular update will help readers to keep interest in this story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i thot- mayur will take part
but it dint happen

feel a bit sad

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww... how I wish mn cud Dance in d finals as well!
No probs dear! U cont d story whenvr u get tym!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update dear
abt late updates i cant say much noww cause mein khud aj kal bht late hoon...

so i think it will b better even if small yet wkly atleast
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt
cont soon
your studies are more important..so we can wait for ur updates dear...best of luck ..god bless you dear
thanks for the pm

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