heyy all sweeet ppl this is my first os in india forams, plz read this jst for asya's sake..i know i can't write...plz send me buddy request if u want me to pm u as it will be easy for me when updated
so well like others bt i can't help this as asya now has become my life..if my story makes u feel bad or weired plz feel free to tell me,any kind of criticism is allowed i dnt mind at all...plz do read with patience & let me know how boring it was haha
so here we go ❤️
AsYa Os : Promise to love you
Asad & Zoya met in the bus for the first time,that day zoya was in jeans with top as usual and she was looking very beautiful and off course so sexy. as a result some boys were teasing him using dirty talks & were abt to touch zoya's body & said how much will be the cost for just 1 hour..zoya was too afraid that she even did not notice their face as yet..after sometime one of the evil boys touched zoya's hip & pushed asad towards her so that all the blames go to him...🥱
zoya were abt to raise her hand to slap him hard bt she was stucked to see such handsome hunk,she was at a loss thinking how can such a person do this kind of cheap things when he's such goodlooking & seems like that he will be from a good family,if he wishes any girl can fall for him..so did she..
bt it would not last too long..she insulted him infront of all that was unexpected,even showed her shoes to hit him 😒
asad could not help bt to protest bcz he could not resist his temptation anymore..he looked like jst a lion with angry look...
he confronted her saying girls who wears revealing cloths should deserve that,if she's desplaying her clevages like this its quite natural for boys to respond like this as she's calling them to go intimate by herself😲
she is only one who's at fault, he also added that girls like her is a bad influence for socicty who has no character & for their own foolishness they even fall victim & get raped 😡
actually he did not say such harsh word bt he was so angry that he could not control 🤔
tears were flowing from zoya's eyes,😭
she got really shocked that could not even utter any single word
then one of the passengers said that asad & zoya were having huge misunderstandings as he witnessed the whole situation & took asad's side saying its not him who tried to touch her & also pointed the direction where the goons i mean that evil boys were standing & were having fun that they did not get caught 😡
then the goons were asking to get zoya & asad's forgiveness & swear that they would never do this in life ever as asad was getting too furius 😊
after sometime zoya came to asad & felt sorry for what she did with him
as she misbehaved with a innocent person who could never even imagine such things in dream..
asad looked too pale because he never expected whom he said such words abt her character could be so shy & could say sorry to him so nicely yet
on the way some robbers attacted on the bus & took all the valuable things that were with them 😕
they got down from the bus (asad & zoya) together...they were seraching for a house where they could pass the night bcz they cnt go back to bhopal now...they find a cottage ...abruptly it started raining so heavily & so they got wet..asad was looking so hot bcz of wet clothes got trasparent & zoya could not take her eyes off him
on the other side asad was trying not to look at zoya bcz he knew he could not control himself if he would jst look at zoya like this
zoya was in fear if something happened with them such as used to happen in movies/serials as she could not even refuse if he ever wished
both was in love at the first sight ❤️
suddenly zoya started having cough bcz of wet cloth..she should have changed till now bt she did not hav any...bt later she found a saree & got happy 😃 bt how could she change when asad was in the same cottage..she got so much shy & were trembling with fear if asad got intimate with her seems like she wanted haha😛
she asked asad to go outside as she wanted to change
asad went outside bt he saw zoya changing secretly a ltl bit,bt then closed his eyes as he came into senses what he was actually thinking😳
after sometime he entered there as zoya changed already and asad put on the fire to warm themselves..asad jst got surprised to see such beauty in zoya as she was in saree that too with sleeveless blouse
meanwhile zoya started to scream as she saw a cokroach approaching & hugged asad getting no alternative it lasted 20 minutes such a passionate hug where she felt safe...even asad did not realise when he kissed her to comfort her(mitwa moment)...then he broke it when he came into senses..however they did not feel guilty what they did bcz it was pure ❤️
then they felt so sleepy that they slept in each others arm none noticed that
in the morning they left for bhopal & when they were almost about to reach
there they said good bye to both and say sorry also
when he returned home he jst imagined as if zoya is around him as he started to miss her as there was something special feeling😊
dilshad moma & najma found asad weird as he was not like this before ever
they teased him saying if he's in love & with whom
that night in asad's home a guest came & she was zoya 😃
najma wanted to take her to her room bt zoya said she could do it herself,bt she went in the wrong direction i mean she went to asad's room & she got asleep wearing a lovely nighty 😆
asad had his bath then went to sleep & he found zoya in the bad bt thought it was mayb his imagination or dream as it could not be true na...so he went to bed bt zoya was in deep sleep that she thought asad to be the pillow aww i know it sounds weired 😲
then asad got to know that something is wrong,he wanted to get up from the bed bt zoya did not let him 😆
asad put the lamp on & see his zoya..both were so surprised & zoya pinched her if she is not dreaming..it was reality..😛
zoya teased him saying if he's mad as he's here so late,she also added that she knew he's falling for her & going crazy to meet her bt she was not going to...lol❤️
asad gave a angry look & further added ya he was not only falling for her bt also wanted to marry her as he can't wait na lol❤️
they had an eyelock (mitwa)
when it broke zoya started to sing zara zara touch me touch me touch me oo zara zara kiss me kiss me ooo ooo ooow lol❤️
asad wanted to teach her a lesson & also make her crazy showing his romantic side 😃
so he was approaching like he was going to touch her and kiss her as she was saying lol
she closed her eyes bcz who wants to miss such opportunity na hehe
then asad walked away making her feel embaraced as what she was actually expecting him to do😡
asad teased her saying that she wanted it so early so it was she who was falling not him 😆
they had again eyelock when it was the time to have breakfast,today zoya have made breakfast for all bt unfortunately she added suger instead of salt so u can guess na how it would be tasted like aw😕
asad did not know that who made it so after tasting the food he said that it was too good as dilshad moma asked him abt...then zoya was blushing that asad liked her dishes,when dilshad said it was zoya's then asad said the truth abt the taste,even asad scolded her & she made her face 🥱
asad & zoya's fight got started from now...
najma was fond of wearing jeans bt she never got the chance to put on bcz of his brother as he was over protective towards her & its natural bcz he was so caring when it comes to najma & his ammi😃
so zoya took a jeans for najma assuring his bro would not get to know as only when he's not home najma would wear it bt they did not notice that asad was back then,at that moment najma asked zoya if she looked sexy in that dress 😊
zoya said that she looked too much sexy n hot and what would happen to boys if they saw you in this attire
najma said bhaijan would kill me as he does not like jeans
zoya said that its jst bcz ur bhaijan loses his control when girls wear such dress n look sexy...haha😆
they both started to smile loudly
but it made asad angry as she's spoiling his baby sis najma who was never like this and never disobey him
asad told najma to excuse him with zoya for a minute and najma went
then asad scolded zoya for all this,he also added that she might hav a prb in character bt why she wanted to affect it on najma,najma did not harm her so why!! asad also grabed her & leaned against him asking for answer..zoya was afraid then & said him to hear her first,she also asked him to make her free as it really hurted...asad let her go
zoya said to asad that najma was not wrong at her point of view as she was not wearing it only in home that too when asad was not even home,whats the prb in it,mayb bcz u are so narrow minded as asad judged ppl by their attire only not with mind
asad said that he did not want najma to get bad influence jst bcoz of her,till then she never talked against him or did anything that he did not like
how could just a guest like zoya can change that,asad was very angry so he told zoya whatever was in his mind & even ask her to leave as he did not want to see her face again as he had become fed up for her & life became like hell 😲
bt he did not mean that ..bt bcz of this ego he could not even say sorry to stop her from leaving
zoya said to him that she would definately leave his house where girls are not given any respect & they treated such badly..even they got insulted without having any guilt,bt she protested also saying that why asad everytime indicates that she had no character jst bcz she wears western
& where were all this when he kissed zoya then he did not think even once na..seems like he was decent!!
asad got the biggest shock as he could not even deny the fact what happened between them that night
zoya informed dilshad abt her leaving bt dilshad did not want to let her go like this as she used to treat her like her own girl najma
dilshad was trying to make her understand...then she said that you wanted to go jst because asad asked you,it means u cant confront him,his word affected u a lot na,whom ppl love & care the most ,their word hurts them a lot
zoya said that she was not going anywhere for his jahapana six pack as she loved phupi & najma a lottt
the next day dilshad & najma had to attend a function,there were asya only in the house they were alone,dilshad told asad to take care of zoya
after they were gone,asad was trying to talkwith zoya bt zoya was showing attitude & she didn't want to talk to him bcz of yesterday
he asked zoya to have dinner with him bcz she did not hav proper food since morning as she avoided asad & were not ready to obey him
she got fainted for not having food so asad got worried,he made her lay in bed & went to call doctor bt zoya hold his hand & asked him why he was too rude toward zoya & suddenly why he was so concerened abt her health
asad just ignored her bcz he could not have the guts to face the truth
then zoya asked him if anything happened to her why would it make any difference to him
she didnt stop for a second so asad kissed her so badly that she could not move there was lack of oxygen..so he freed her ❤️
zoya asked him why he would do that as she needed explanation,she asked him to confess if theres something bcz its killing her
asad said no,it was not real feeling,it happened accidently & said that there was aleady someone in his life so how could he mean that he loved zoya
bt it was lie,asad only loved zoya bt was afraid to lose her as he thought he might end up giving her only pain & would deceive & leave her bcz he was janab rashid ahmed khan's son,he had his blood so he could not be different 😭
zoya was no where to be seen actually, she left asad's home getting shocked bt it was night so some goons were after her ,trying to touch her & also was misbehaving bt then asad came for her rescue when they tried to force her asad was abt to kill all the goons,the goons said who was he nd why he wanted to save him,who was she to her
then asad said she's my wife nd u can't even touch her hair if u do i will break ur all parts of the body
then the goons apologised n vanished,
asad kissed nd hugged zoya and took her in his arms to go home😃
mitwa in bg
she asked him why he told him that she was his wife,huge lie!
then asad said that it was fake jst to save u
then zoya had tears in eyes as she started to love him bt asad did not
asad told her to sleep bt zoya did not listen him...she was watching a movie that contained some embracing scene,she knew asad were beside her bt yet she did not need to change the channel ,asad asked her why she was watching such scenes if she has any shame left that too with a man lonely in a room
she said that why he did not leave if he did not like as she would see what she wanted & said''it would not affect u since u dnt hav anything for me''
&'' if it had any affect on me why do u care even i can do it if i want too as its my life & i will have it with my boyfriend u can do it with ur girlfriend too ,who has objection''
asad was in anger so he corrected her word saying that he had objection & they could both do that when they would get married being husband wife
''so u hav to wait for ur husband asad, zoya'' said asad
zoya got blushing
bt zoya said that she likes romantic guy not statue like him who only scolds
asad asked her if she wanted to see his romantic side & said that he might make her got pregnant lol😆
then asad kissed her lips whole 15 minutes so passionately then ever...
her lips turned too much read aww😃
then zoya pushed him away bcz it was enough as they had to keep something for future na😃
asad gave her a doll that contained his recorded i love u 😳
zoya was too happy & she started dancing😆
she made a chocolate blackforest cake for asad & arranged a romantic candle light dinner for them 😃
asad played the song zara si dill mein de jagah tu zara sa apna le bana
& they both danced that was too hot to handle
& they also went intimate as they had lovemaking together
i dnt need to tell how it would be u can guess ❤️
actually asad had mistakely taken a glass of drinks so he had no sense what he was doing & zoya did not refuse as she loved him so much & also trused him more than anyone as they would never leave each other
in the morning they were in the same bed bt zoya had to take a bath to change cloths u know why,so zoya came back to their room after taking bath bt asad asked her what she was doing here in the room
she asked why he was asking when he knows well what happened yesterday & from that day she would live in the same room❤️
bt asad was really confused as he could not remember their lovemaking as he was drunk,he asked zoya again to know more abt this,he asked zoya why her cloths were in his bed & how come they could share the same room
zoya asked him why he was joking,she told him abt the lovemaking that was feeling like hevean & she said that he had proved how much he loved her deeply
zoya asked him to talk with his ammi abt their relationship bt asad say's that mayb its bcz he was drunk and asked her why she didnt refuse to do such thing before marriage as how he would discuss that with her mother that they commited such sins
the next day dilshad & najma came back..bt asya looked tensed then ever,asad was frustrated bcz he's dying to commit such sins,he's guilty to all,asad did not eat anything bcz of tension
zoya asked what the matter was actually that was killing him inside as she never saw him in this state before,asad asked her to leave him alone
zoya said that she would not go leaving him in this state,she is also responsible for this bt asad pushed her away & she was hurt...najma saw all the things
zoya was crying then najma consoled her as she knew the whole matter abt them...najma hugged her saying that zoya should not worry as her bhaijan loves her bhabi so much & so he hurts her a lot bcz he cares for u a lot
najma said '' bhaijan thinks if he marries u he will end up hurting u like my father did with ammi & he will also leave you in the time when u need him & he is not ready to take such huge responsibility now & he thinks he has commited sins doing this to u''
she also assured zoya that everything would get fine,ammi would understand it & all the problems would get sort out soon
after some days zoya fainted & started vomiting that sounds weired bt asad knew what it was & why
zoya was pregnant & asad was the father..she was too weak & asad was not there to take care of her..dilshad called the doctor & ask the reason behind the fainting..doctor congrats her saying she's going to be mother😃
dilshad did not know how to react how can a girl like zoya can do such thing even before marriage its a sin to have this before marriage
zoya was crying,asad entered zoya's room & said that they did not have any future so why she should keep the baby...why does'nt she abort the baby it was jst an accident as he did'nt do it intentionally
he also said that ammi will never accept this what we did,she would get hurt again & he could not see her in pain,he told her to leave as soon as possible & told her that he would give her everything she wanted,
she said she jst wanted him,nothing else
how could asad do this with his own baby
then zoya decided to leave,but then she was so lost that she did not notice the stairs...so she fell down n got hurt & had miscarriage,she was crying so hard bcz she lost everything bt asad wanted it na that their baby never comes in world nd it became true!
she was in hospital,dilshad n najma felt sorry for zoya
asad was in tears bcz now he realised his mistake as his words came true it was their sign of love that got lost forever now they can't get united bcz allah would not forgive him what he said nd did to zoya,now zoya was broken he does not talk,eat anything as she always thinks abt the baby that what was their baby's mistake..As asad would leave her,bt that baby would be with her!!she would not be so alone in life...it was the biggest shock
& zoya started to hate asad nd so she left him & she used to visit yatimkhana to takecare of the childreen over there as it made her remember her baby nd she used to get some peace being with them
& on the other hand asad tried to harm himself so many times bcz he was regretting then how wrong he was & how did he hurt her everytime remembering how much she lover him & was always with him when he was in pain she always supported..he wanted to get zoya back in life & wanted to give her all the happiness,love & a nice family that will subside the pain
so he was in search of zoya,bt once he saw his zoya with a baby girl(2yrs) that made him surprised..& also one of zoya's friend zarine was there..actually the baby girl was one of the girl of yatimkhana
bt asad did not know,he wanted to know the fact...bt zoya didnt give him the answer bcz she knew asad would get her back so its better if he goes away having any misunderstanding...mayb she thought they were not meant to be together & she was misfit for asad so she could not make him happy rather then making him sad all the time so its better to stay away
asad called zarine through phone,zoya told her earlier that she should tell him that she(zoya) got remarried & it was her child,she was happy & he (asad) also should forget all this & start life anew
i know it was sad at the last bt i promise that i will have happy ending...i will update soon if i get response from you guys so plz let me know how was it...good,bad,weired,boring?? criticism is allowed, plz like & comment for asya <3
plz plz let me know
i will continue then
stay well ..takecare :)
Edited by angelnazira - 12 years ago
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