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Posted: 12 years ago
sorri am late again :(
cool nupur didnt fall ...mayank was there😳
waiting for next part
thanx for the pm 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

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ohhh wow it was nice update
so she is not a girlfriend of mayank thank god
ohhh so she is plan to hurt nupur but she failed so bad na

thanks for pm me and sorry for late

love u always deary

deepa


Thanks sis
love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

very nice.

Hmm...so Dia is chipku.
Thnx for update nd PM.


Thanks but its RHEA and not DIA 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

sorri am late again :(

cool nupur didnt fall ...mayank was there😳
waiting for next part
thanx for the pm😛


Its ok dear..thanx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..
Finally got time to read...
Very nice story...
I love college and office stories and you have combined them so I am enjoying it more...
I am waiting to know what had happened in past...
Sorry for late comment...was busy with work...
Thanksss for all your PM's
Keep Updating

P.S. I may reply only on weekends so please don't mind...you are doing good job...keep it up!!!!!
Edited by pinky_5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_5

<font color="#ff0066">Hey..</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">Finally got time to read...</font>
<font color="#ff0066">Very nice story...</font>
<font color="#ff0066">I love college and office stories and you have combined them so I am enjoying it more...</font>
<font color="#ff0066">I am waiting to know what had happened in past...</font>
<font color="#ff0066">Sorry for late comment...was busy with work...</font>
<font color="#ff0066">Thanksss for all your PM's</font>
<font color="#ff0066">Keep Updating</font>
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</font>
<font color="#ff0066">P.S. I may reply only on weekends so please don't mind...you are doing good job...keep it up!!!!!</font>

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Thanks a lot dear..i m glad u likd it..no dear there is nthng to mind its cool
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u all do comment..m waitng for ur lovely comments..
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE 12
RED=FLASHBACK

Nupur was just at the edge of falling when to her rescue Mayank came and savd her. She had fallen in his arms instead of falling on the floor.

Rhea who was sitting with a smile on her face had lost it. She stood up and started looking at them in irritation.


Nupur was still in his arms in a comfortable position she had no objection in staying like that neither did Mayank have. She was looking at him innocently and Mayank was looking at those big lovely eyes and with his gaze being stronger she also drowned in those eyes.

Rhea who was standing there was feeling like killing Nupur. Moreover, Mayank and she had never had such moments although they were childhood friends and Rhea expected more of such stuffs to happen but Mayank never took her that way she was just a sweet childhood friend with whom he liked flirting at times. There was no doubt that Mayank loved her. He loved her more than anything in this world. He could bring down the stars for her she knew it. He could never say no to her. If she would tell him that our hair's colour is blue and not black he would have believed.


Mayank only had one true friend and that was Rhea. He just expected friendly love from her and not the love she did. Mayank was completely unaware of Rhea's feeling while the whole college knew about her feelings and intentions.

Rhea had become furious seeing all that happening.
Nupur in Mayank's arm and on addition to that , sharing an eye lock.
She moved towards them. At first she changed her terribly defeated expressions and then approached them.


"Guys "
She said faking a smile.


But there was no response they were still lost in each other. Now she had become even more furious.


"Mayank"
She shouted loudly.


Mayank and Nupur who were lost in each other panicked on hearing her voice but Mayank slowly made her stand and removed his hands from her waist and stood at a distance.
They both were in an extremely awkward situation as all eyes were on them.

Just to make herself feel better Nupur spoke


"Thank you Mayank. If you wouldn't have saved me I would have hurt myself badly. Some people need to be slapped for littering."
She said angrily.


"It's ok Nupur. I saved you na? Hopefully I will do so in future also."
He said while smiling.


Hearing him say such kind words Nupur also smiled. They were so busy in each other that dint pay attention to Rhea's expression.


Rhea was standing there almost burning in the fire of jealousy.


"Di."
Gunjan spoke from the back.


Nupur immediately turned around.


"Hi Gunjan."
Nupur said while smiling.


"Di please come with me."
She said while holding her hand.


"What's wrong Gunjan?"


"Nothing di I am very hungry."


Nupur just smiled and turned around


"Bye Mayank bye Rhea."
saying this she left from there.


Mayank just kept looking at her till she sat on the table.


"Mayank you seem to have forgotten me."
Rhea said to grab his attention.


"Oh come on sweeti no way and why do you think so?"
He asked while moving close to her and placing his hand around her waist just to give support though she was in a very comfortable position.
As soon as Mayank placed his hand around her, Rhea started having goose bumps and she forget about Nupur who had taken away all her peace in just a single day.


Mayank on the other hand knew how he could just make her feel normal.


"Mayank lets sit please."


"Yes ofcourse."


Just then sound started coming from the speakers placed in the entire college for the principal to announce for a meeting.


"Good morning everyone .Students and teachers are kindly requested to come to the auditorium at 10:00."


Mayank glanced at his watch it was 9:55 already so he informed Rhea and they moved towards the auditorium.

HOPE YOU LIKE IT.DO LEAVE UR COMMENTS M WAITING 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
loved it..
awesome...
Mayur eyelock...

was just incredible
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update :-) continue soon :-)

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