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The electronic screen displayed the number 9. A woman in her early 20s who was wearing a pale yellow kurti teamed with blue leggings looked at the small card in her hands one last time. 'This is it,' she told herself. Then she calmly got up from her seat and walked towards Dr. Manisha Roy's room, her steps assured and her look falsely defiant.

The woman entered the room after knocking the door a couple of times. Dr. Roy was a woman in her mid 40s. She wore a neatly starched Bengal cotton saree. On her nose rested a pair of glasses, the ones with a black frame, which gave her a old school look. She didn't spare the woman in front of much of a glance and asked her to sit down.

She opened a new patient file on her computer. The hospital had implemented a new patient data recording system after a few important patient files went missing last year.. The CEO Avinav Reddy spent nearly 1.5 crores on a new software system. When asked by the board as to why such a big investment was required, he replied 'Instead of keeping the hospital open to any potential lawsuit in the future rising out of any missing patient files, thereby losing crores of Rupees over years, it makes sense to invest in an expensive but efficient software system.' Dr. Roy was impressed with the young man's farsightedness.

Dr Roy finally spared a look at the pale and tired looking girl and immediately turned back to her screen. She was already running late for her next appointment, pleasantries be damned. She had to wind up all her appointments before the weekend, before she could take her much awaited holiday with her family.

She began filling in the details of the patient sitting in front of her and decided to find more about her while doing so.

'What's your name,' Dr. Roy asked. 'Kushi Gupta,' the woman replied. 'Kushi, I'm going to as you a few details before I find out more about your appointment. I need to file these details. Is that okay?' Kushi nodded.

'Age?' '24 years and 2 months old,' Kushi remarked after making a mental calculation
'Title?' Kushi hesitated a little before replying 'Miss'
'Address?' 'No 24, Vasant Kunj Apts, Aurangazeb's Road, Delhi- 11', Kushi replied.

After filling in other mundane details, she finally turned her chair towards the girl in front of her and brought her glasses back so that they would rest on her eyes. 'So Kushi, how can I help you today,' Dr. Roy asked.

Kushi started nervously fiddling with the hem of her kurti. Dr Roy could see that Kushil was shivering a little. At that very moment, she knew why Kushi had come to consult her. In the 20 years of her professional experience she wasn't new to such nervousness displayed by some of her 1st time patients.

Kushi finally decided this had to be said, she had to get this out of the way. She could no longer delay the inevitable.

She took a deep breath and said 'I need an abortion.'



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Thank you dear readers for your continuous support and encouragement. Also a big Thanks for your patience and understanding, I know I suck at giving regular updates, but trust me I'm doing the best I can, at the moment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread update soon
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Congo on the new thread dear.. :)
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Cong! and waiting

I dont know where to start! I feel sorry for Khushi! But I really dont understand her confidence about Arnav and that he will change his mind about marriage some day! She has high hopes and thats not good. So she didn't think that being in relationship with Arnav includes sex as well? Iam not saying that all men and all the relationship ask for that part but here we are talikng about Arnav! Did she miss that information about him?
I love Payal! She knows what she wants in her life and very confidence about that and whatever she told Khushi was right! Khushi wanting to wait to talk to Arnav was not a good idea. I know she is scared but delay will make things worse.
Everyone warning her because they know how Arnav is and Khushi seems to miss the point that people who are warning her because they care.
Arnav is understanding and wants to do his best for this relationship because he like Khushi. Hope he will change his mind about marriage for Khushi's sake.
Happy for NK! He seems like a practical guy.

I also asked my husband the same question which Khushi asked Arnav! " who is your girlfriend me or the BB"? And the answer I got was " my BB is not my girlfriend but my first wife and you better get used it"! I still got married to him, can you believe it 😆
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Congratulations on the new thread!
Loved the new banner as well!😃
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As Payal has observed, Khushi has definitely changed (or I would say developed is the right word over here) a lot and has grown from the shy girl who first stepped into the office of AR.

I find it hard to believe that Khushi completely overlooked the physical aspect of her relationship with Arnav; that he is considerate of her discomfiture is favorable for her but it would be impractical of her to be confident enough to will him to marriage this soon.

I can't seem to get enough of the way you've portrayed Payal; every time Khushi needs an ear, she's there. To add to that she also gives sound advice on each occasion.

A different past for Arnav as against the ones we've already seen many times yet it was so poignant...you delineated Arnav's guilt and anguish beautifully.

Another cliffhanger...I'm not getting piqued by this because I've already started to expect cliffhangers at the end of each chapter😆...continue soon!
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Congratulations on the new thread!! And now waiting eagerly for the story!

And don't thank us, we thank you for story time...Write when you can, your readers are right here waiting for you!


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