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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

I was so happy when I saw you had updated. ... awesome update. ... I love how Arnav and Khushi are comfortable around each other n how Arnav is so protective about Khushi. ... will eagerly wait for the next update. ...

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

waiting for this long night to never end please cont soon😊

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Knocked out by a migraine today, it will be up tomorrow pucca.

Oops, Well migraine is something I share with you. I just dread it.
Pl take care. Update can come later.

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

A fantastic part just loved it :D

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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

First of all, Khushi's dress was so pretty!
Arnav in a tuxedo...!!? 😳

Your writing is so smooth and when I read, it gives me the feeling of water. (Weird comparison but I do feel that way! 😳)

Both Arnav and Khushi are attracted to each other. They are so attuned to each other..:-)

Will you reveal what gift is Khushi giving to Arnav in the next chapter?

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Gr8 update...

Waiting for next part eagerly...

Pls update soon

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Did I see it right? I got over 200 likes for the last chapter. Woohoo!

Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me. I read each and every comment of yours, sometimes even a few times.

Im touched, I really am.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

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I liked the way Arnav tried to analyse Khushi's conduct around him.

So the gift was a pen; the detailing and the thought behind it is enough for us to know how much Khushi is into Arnav. 😳

And the first word he wrote with the pen gifted by Khushi was her name! That piece of writing was so symbolic and sweet.

The dance! Oh yeah the dance; the whole description of it- your words, the characters swaying on your words and the ambience that you had established was just surreal.

To Arnav that was possibly one of the most intense but poignant moments he had shared with a woman.

Need we say more!😉

That the dance was followed by a night walk only heightened my expectations to the inevitable.

And the kiss! The blow by blow account of the kiss was so gorgeously sketched that it was difficult to not be benumbed by it.

You wanted a feedback to the description of the kiss; well here it is: You couldn't have delineated the kiss in a better way; everything was good...the play of words, the response of the individuals portrayed through your writing, the recital was almost poetic; just awesome!👏 There's one regret however; I wish the chapter hadn't ended so soon!😳

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

me
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OMG! NB, Just finished this with a heady feeling.
I am unfit for ny sane comment at the moment!!

Loved the first kiss...:) You left me yearning for next update!!!!!

Edited by shree10 - 12 years ago