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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti
Shree, I didnt write much last evening, Champion League football finals and slumber party @home.

Ill write today. Both updates will be up tomorrow pucca.

Gita pe haath rakh kar kasam khao, Gabbar! Both updates. Tomorrow! Bas!

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

K sorry for the late comments was travelling and got to this only now..

Sorry...😊

K a big round of applause for redeeming Khushi the way you did in the last 3 updates..

Me who was so annoyed with her till about 3 chapter back is coming around to liking her just goes to show what an incredible writer you are for making this unbelievable thought few updates back believable...

Let me give naniji a big hug for nudging Arnav's conscience a little to think that he might be taking khushi for granted...

And now let me give you a big hug for giving Arnav a HAIRCUT...What a pretty picture he must have made...

And continue to hug you for recreating a magical holi once more...Hai this one just took my breath away. You wrote it so well it was like seeing a play..😃

And the 3 magical words right at the end...uff me in dream world and dying to read the next update...

Great update as usual kripa and thank you for taking out the time inspite of your crazy schedule...

Liza

P.S: Now that this is done let me go and attack parinay ka dhaaga...😊

Edited by kondhili - 13 years ago

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Phew, at last read all the chapters, sachhi I didn't want to skim read.
REALLY that was an UNBELIVABLE surprise with the recreation of the holi. What a confession, I hope arnav won't back off because here I think arnav is sober and Bhang free not like the selective amnesia Wala arnav who selectively forget about nimbu paani.

So next chapter arnav will be in full teasing mode and kushi will be in full blushing mode. Me liking the tinking, and may be tinking in the pink font (somebody pull me out of gutter)

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ipkrocks21

@ipkrocks21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Very nice story and good approch on a new subject!! quite fresh

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Finally...so happy to c that the much awaited confession from Arnav's side finally came...Have to thank Nani for that talk of hers with her grandson that finally had got our Arnav into thinking...I'm so excited now to c how this goes but along with the excitement I get reminded of the opening prologue of this story & it makes me dread as to what drove Khushi to that point from where the story began.