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Smriti

@serialjunkie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Finally caught up with the story.

And suffice it to say, you are a maestro at this. The simple, lazy pace is like hot chocolate on a late saturday afternoon with spikes of Cointreau when the two kiss.

The fear of commitment, the ideology of marriage as a dying institution with yay and nay sayers on both end would be interesting. After many years of marriage, both my husband and I reached a conclusion - marriage is a piece of paper that does not define a relationship. when your feelings are true for each other, a legality does not matter and if you are not sure, the legality will not stop you from breaking each other's heart. This steady erosion of belief in marriage as an institution is in no way a reflection of my life, on the contrary, its the affirmation that i would have chosen to spend my life with this man, even without a piece of paper legalizing it. Hope that explains it a bit better.

The only time i think the institution makes sense is when children are involved. so now you know where i stand on the situation - squarely with Arnav, preferably in his hot shower with him.

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Babuni21

@Babuni21

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

I absolutely love love love this FF. You truly have created a FF where Arnav and Khushi are believable human beings. I think in the show I used to get annoyed how they would portray Arnav as a god's gift to the human race, but in your FF he has emotions, laughs and is not cold hearted. Please continue to update and add me to the PM list.

Also do you have an index of your other works?

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barunxoxo

@barunxoxo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Read last 4 chapters at a time. What a leap! There is now such a change in their relationship on the personal front. I just love the simplicity in your words. It all sounds so real.

I love the way you described their kiss. It was sweet and sensual at the same time it was realistic. I like that. I feel a bit bad for NK but oh well, we all knew it was coming. :P But I also find strength in his character cause he forgave Khushi once he was in the right state of mind.

Everything is beautifully written as usual. You deserved the spotlight. Congrats. :)

Also I have seen the link you posted beneath the chapter and voiced my opinion on it. I hope it is a success.

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Okay so I thoroughly hated Nkay for being the big mouth in someone's occasion; finding your gf kissing another man, not cool, but shouting at her in front of every body, not cool either.
Payal- THE BEST.
And Anjlai-- if that's you NB ji, then here's a hug. 🤗

Talk at this weekend. Crossing my fingers already!

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Vikasg

@Vikasg

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Just read all the chapters in one go..loved it. Simply loved it. I am a new member and have not read a lot of ffs so far. But I loved the way you have sketched your characters..they retain the basic essence of Arnav and Khushi but they are still different..more realistic and believable..I guess. And I simply loved Payal. Khushi's confusion is very understandable given her upbringing and her background. I hope as the story progresses she and Arnav can continue to communicate.

Looking forward to how this story unfolds. Again an amazing story so far..👏

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Basanti,

Where is my update Basanti??

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Beautiful and soothing update!

Actually as i read the FF, i feel this story is like a river. It keeps flowing with its tiny yet consistent waves and every time i read a chapter, it gives me a feeling that the river is flowing towards its obvious destination, which is not as soomth as its course, rather very rough and deep!

Because, then, immediately i am reminded of the excerpt ... khushi at the doctor's chamber for abortion; it breaks my heart into pieces..

I love this story so much.. the characters are so perfect, as they should be in reality. Arnav and khushi are so much meant for each other , but their ideologies differ. You can't blame any one of them yet you would feel bad for them. Good that you described their backgrounds and values in so much details. That made me not to be judgmental about them and understand and respect them the way they are.

Yet I cannot but assume that, in the whole process, the sufferings and losses are going to be in khushi's side at the end!

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

so we can have one today EDITED

i actually was expecting something like that from this date

khushi can't compromise her believes she is a girl of morals

n values on the other hand arnav's believes r absolutely different

it was emotional at some points looking forward how they cope up with all that

really loved it

congrats ur ff select as ff of the week

u deserve it

Edited by aayt - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Res

Edited:

Wonderful update!! The date might've been a disaster but it was wonderfully penned down. The way you captured the emotions they both were going through was bang on.

I loved seeing the after effects of the date with Khushi crying her heart out and Arnav turning to his sister for solace.

But I have to say my favorite part was in the car, when Arnav is talking to her and she just kisses him! That was just so full of emotion and love. It just made me cry and want to say "One of you please change your mind!" 😭

LOVED IT!!

Congratulations on being in the SPOTLIGHT!!! You deserve it my friend, this story just keeps getting better chapter after chapter. 👏

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago