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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I will finish work in another hour, then the update will be up.

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

M tink M Res rite now nd go bak 2 writin ma own updex

Heers 2 Arnowji's speedy recovery, deer!👍🏼

TFS

RES

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shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
M tink M Res rite now nd go bak 2 writin ma own updex

Heers 2 Arnowji's speedy recovery, deer!👍🏼

TFS

RES

Yes Me too asked Koosie to keep vrat for Arnowji's speedy recovery 😆 apart frm awl the lau n care ..

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: shree10

Yes Me too asked Koosie to keep vrat for Arnowji's speedy recovery 😆 apart frm awl the lau n care ..

Nd DAN

Chasing Karva Chauth DUN.👏

TFS

RES(ting) lyk Arnowji

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: shree10

Yes Me too asked Koosie to keep vrat for <font color="#cc00cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Arnowji's speedy recovery😆 apart frm awl the lau n care ..</font>

But arnowji has not married koosie ... There's a hole in the bucket dear Eliza .. How to keep a vrat for almost Suhaag .. Who refuses to be Suhaag

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Res for commentwa.

Back laterz too.

Edit:

I just loved everything about this chapter.

The gradual exploration of each other's feelings during his recovery, the unstinting support of his family, that query by Nani...everything was just perfect.

And then you made me LOL with that reference to a haircut after two months!!

Followed by Holi Ve!!

Thank you so much for giving us this new and improved version of the Holi sequence, you managed to keep it believable, yet romantic in it's own way!

I like how you gave us an insight into Arnav's feelings for Khushi, especially the gradual progress as he realizes just how selfless her love is.

And Khushi has progressed to a point where Arnav is all she cares about, and commitment issues have been pushed to the back burner for now.

And finally, I love you dammit for the I love you!

P.S: Well deserved dedication, frnz. M tink she's awesum, ya?

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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LooneyLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Hum bhi RES!!!

M hop doctor Saheba give green signal..den pregnention dun?

UNRES

BAHAHAHAHA M fiddle wif my eyes heer deerz! Is dis 4real? M dead *thud*

Also this is as auspicious a moment as any to announce the opening of "Basanti's Sanki Phankis", a phan club. For further information contact Expel.

Now to the update..so much fiddling, so much bhang. M lau'in it! Just like Arnav, ya? I faraq'd this light hearted, dhak dhak inducing update. I really didn't expect a dive into such a bootiful SKD here! Par what makes it even more precious is the realistic progression towards it. And basically what stood out to me was they realise True Love trumps everything!

Its been a pleasure to see kushi grow the way she has..especially after the last breakup. She is no super human, and you realise that in the first scene. I am usually not a big phan of self-less, all-giving khushis because its based on always having to feel grateful/self-confidence issues perhaps? But in this instance I really appreciate it for it stems from their love (at the risk of sounding super cheesy!). Then there is also the teasing, the running away, the special dancing, the bhaaang!, the provocateur aspect of her. I can understand why Arnav's butterflies plateaued!

Now to Arnav, ummm..is this the same guy from the first few chapters? I see no semblance to his old-self. It must be hard to write your arnav in love, yet you seem to do it just right, with a pinch of humour and cheese. I love how you slowly culminated all the subtle changes and gave us the much-awaited "I love you" (albiet without the dammit!). M lau ur istyle yaara! We still dont know what the future holds, from his perspective. Yet I couldn't care less kyunki bura na mano holi hai!!

Special Shout out to Nani! What a woman..I love her character here. Bas.

Luna

ps. Thank you for the dedication and the update, even with all the busy-ness that is your life =)

Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago