New chapter already?! Wow
UNres..
Ah so glad you only wanted to post the first part! I was panicking if I stole your second res. This res business is continually nerve-wrecking, yet as thrilling as things get around heer?
This was such a beautiful update, really well written. I dont know what it is about sadness, but it usually tends to bring out the best in writers! Or maybe I am just sadistic that way...or because sadness oozes with so much more Love.
The way this part began with khushi coming to terms with what just happened with arnav. So well put, and a realistic progression throughout it all. First the intense sadness, the guilt, the prayers..and obviously the realisation which is always there..I love him more than my life!
I loved when akash consoled khushi. I am liking his integrity, maturity even more..he could actually take over ASR. Payal is also up there with her support. I liked that no one really questions presence. New found respect for your Nani too. Her using the word pray to the god you believe in, rather than generalising any particular one..this is such a well-sealed package of more mature and modern times.
Anjali is a whole another case, the helicopter mother like TG has taught me. The sad part is, there are so many of those around..and well they dont know how to channel their affections, and need to be taught. Just like Anjali here.
Thank your for keeping the medical drama realistic. I wanted them to kiss and make up too, par J scoffed..and quickly I surrendered to her medical genius.
I really enjoyed khushi praying..and her thoughts.
To the finale. Perfect. Is this the way they realise nothing else truly matters? Their so called beliefs..their identity..their clashes..? There is something about a vulnerable arnav, that makes me sadder than him having suffered such a massive accident! I love the positivity and conviction that is khushi...long road to recovery, but as long as they are together?
Hitashi
Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago
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