THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 93

Originally posted by: fatema_007

i see ur pm and i go into this 😃 mode
i read ur update and i go into this mode..
every single bit of this story is sooo magical...it makes me feel like the time my mother read Cinderalla story to me ..
😳

I see your reply and go 🤗🥳

Originally posted by: palindrome

Hello ji...🤗

I did not want to be late in giving my comment this time but I got late once again..Anyways..

You were not late Palin... Mere chuhe jaise dil ka fault hai yeh...Have always been a nervous person in creative things...

You always ask for reader's opinion on your music selection...I have loved all the songs you have used in all the chapters but this one is my most favorite...

This gazal was introduced to me by my bestie in "remixed" form with loads of beats..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I5wIcUjYfho

Lyrics of this song took my heart instantly and believe me I kept on listening it continuously for two days..Then I searched for its original version..Jagjit Singh ji's soothing voice increased my liking for the song ten folds..and finally I became deewani of the song,when I saw this vm...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sL_hd9RYz_I[/YOUTUBE]

Watching maaneet with such wonderful lyrics and music acted like a catalyst to my "poetry nerves" and I wrote this ...

I had not seen the VM before but I absolutely loved it.

I did not want the chapter and their feelings to be overshadowed by acting so I did not put the YT link from "Arth" either opting to only let Jagjit Singh's voice flow over his feelings. To be honest I was not sure how the music would work out with a college going crowd but I am glad for such music lovers here. They have almost always loved all the songs. For me the outline and song selection was done together so each chapter will try to convey an emotion through music.

I try to look in her eager eyes

which she has veiled by her lashes...

Just to get the glimpse of emotions

that she is trying to suppress,but her traitorous heartbeat confesses...!!!

Jhuki jhuki si nazar bekrar hai ke nahi...

daba daba sa sahi,dil me pyar hai ke nahi...

My soul yearns and my heart burns

to synchronize its beats with hers...

so i could count hers and let her count mine..

"how much i need her" my each skipped beat deciphers!!!!!

Tu apne dil ki jawan dhadkano ko gin ke bata

meri tarah teri dil bekrar hai ke nahi...

I close my lids, just to let that dream

nestle my heart and eyes...

where i live that moment,when she will become forever mine

in canopy of flowers and moonlit skies!!!!!!!!!

Vo pal ke jisme mohabbat jawan hoti hai..

us ek pal ka tujhe intezzar hai k nahi...

Avi dead and gone to heaven. You wrote poetry for me. I am totally overwhelmed. Rushes to Palin to give zor ki jhappi.
👏👏

Thank you so much avi for adding this "song" to this update..Maaneet under umbrella+this song+ Rain= Perfection of romance..😃

Today,I got another glimpse of Avi-ism ..

It must be providence that you are wearing white, not that I would ever lose you even in the darkest of nights, Geet. I am in contrast, wearing black and like the night surrounding us, I blend into the environment around you. Do you even see me, I wonder?

"Do you even see me,I wonder??" pinched my heart slightly..Amazing avi....

He is a shy teenager boy who has just lost his mother, the one person who he can open up to. Now the journey where she becomes important in his life and how he becomes MSK from Maan. I am nervous yet excited in this attempt.

Kudos to maan's classmate naureen for wonderful shair-s..I was little conscious to post my stupid poem after reading her magical urdu words but then I could not stop myself...😛😆

Thankfully Maan has a photographic memory else Naureen would be bumping him every day!😆

Over all..This is my faovrit-est chapter till now in The locket..with my favorite song,favorite couple and favorite Suri..Only SRK can make a "geek" look this cute..I hated his "Raj" wala avatar in this movie..🤢He was best as surie..😃

I love Suri. A 1 hai ji... That was the part they were laughing about... the biryani after the golgappas. Same pinch on the Raj part, except the Punjab Power lighting up your life "I love you" sign on the hilltop that he did.

Waiting eagerly for next chapter..😊

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

very beautifully written...

Naughty miss Iyer...crush on professor Shetty...and scolding young boys and girls not to have any friendship...

Maan is in love with Geet and Geet is also attracted towards him but can't say anything to each other because of hesitation...song was BEAUTIFUl and sinc with the scene...

thanx for pm...

That was just beautiful Avi….starting to ending….the whole thing was like a poem.

Off course it started with some amazing lines by Naureen….but to me not only those lines but the whole update was like a song.

Such a mundane setting but yet so romantic. Silence which speaks volume and shyness which expresses feelings. The whole update was just full of one emotion – unsaid and yearned love.

Kuch aise utha apni nazar ko

Ki mere dil ko thandak mil jaye

Kuch aisa jhuka apni nazar ko

Ki mere dil ko dhadkan mil jaye

Jeene ki wajah bana liya hai tujhko

Ai kash ki teri nazar se meri nazar mil jaye

Your update inspires to just feel, get lost in it's aura and write….I have not been able to write any romantic lines for some time now. Mainly because my FF seems to be going thru such a phase. Today I wish to write something romantic after reading this update.

Aah….Just beautiful….

Originally posted by: ritzy09

That was just beautiful Avi'.starting to ending'.the whole thing was like a poem.

Off course it started with some amazing lines by Naureen'.but to me not only those lines but the whole update was like a song.

Such a mundane setting but yet so romantic. Silence which speaks volume and shyness which expresses feelings. The whole update was just full of one emotion ' unsaid and yearned love.

Kuch aise utha apni nazar ko

Ki mere dil ko thandak mil jaye

Kuch aisa jhuka apni nazar ko

Ki mere dil ko dhadkan mil jaye

Jeene ki wajah bana liya hai tujhko

Ai kash ki teri nazar se meri nazar mil jaye

Your update inspires to just feel, get lost in it's aura and write'.I have not been able to write any romantic lines for some time now. Mainly because my FF seems to be going thru such a phase. Today I wish to write something romantic after reading this update.

Aah'.Just beautiful'.

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I am speechless. And I mean it