THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

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Jhuki jhuki si nazar, beqaraar hai ke nahin
Daba daba sa sahi, dil mein pyaar hai ke nahin

I've been humming this song throughout! Great choice, really! 😊
Glad you liked it.. Shika and I were talking with Zarin today how all of us were picking the same song for a future update😆 So hopefully, the music selection will not overlap since I have already picked out my songs.
To your note first: Do not rush this story at all. I'm sure, like me, every reader wants this story to continue for longer than even the twenty that you've planned.Thanks for the vote of confidence. Are you sure you can stand me for that long, driving you crazy?

The poem at the start and the stanza at the end was just awesome! I absolutely loved it! And thanks to her shayri, Naureen came into Maan's life. 😃

I told you who the muse was for Maan, so Naureen had to make a special appearance; good that Maan has a photographic memory else he would have to collide with Naureen everyday...😆
Maan's wish of being Dev - I don't know why but - touched me. It made me fall for him even more than I already have. I think it was the innocence of that wish that captured me. 😳

You probably don't know but apart from HR, it's SRK that I absolutely love! ❤️ To witness Maan's jealousy towards the harmless actor was hilarious to me. Especially when he innocently accepts that he can't like him because she does, and when he changes the course of his thoughts. 'I'm more into action films.' 😆

Professor Shetty is my favourite now too. And I don't like Ms. Iyer. 😆
Their walk was so... romantic - in a way.Glad you thought so..
One thing I really want to point out is the way their clothes symbolise them. She wearing white and standing out against the darkness is similar to the way she stands out for him amongst a sea of other people. Him wearing black and blending in with the surroundings, just like he feels he is just another person for her, a nobody in a sea of everybody.. I loved this symbolisation!
Glad you caught that. That's exactly how he feels about himself right now.
I think I'll thank Dev for his habit of background music. 😳
Me too!
Geet's softness of nature is so evident from the way she wordlessly tries to cover him with her umbrella. Adorable!

Maan thinking negative about her agreeing to walk with him is natural, I think. Especially when she quickly pulls her dupatta back. For him, it somewhat indicated her not really liking the closeness. I'll take it this way. She's shy.

The aankhon ki gustakhiyaan at the end were like cherry on top! Not their lips, but their eyes talk, and convey their inner feelings to the other. At the end of it all, I'm glad to have a happy, puddle-kicking Maan walking to his car! 😳
Me too! He was looking for a sign. I loved the change of tone in his voice when she was shocked at his tone to Ms. Iyer. Then Jhalli nodding to the ground...she is adorable to me..
Loved the chapter without so much as an ounce of a doubt! Thanks for updating! 🤗

PS: Have I ever told you I love that picture of Maan you put in there? Especially when he's dressed in black. 😳
I think it would be easier on me if you tell me which picture you don't like Mari 😆

Thanks for being here for me...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
so geet also feels smthng for him...th whole rainy scene was so beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute rainy secne loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome song selection... It's from past how Maan has gone with Geet in rain.. memories in rain...😳😉 Bechare Maan ka vapas ane chance bhi cheen liya us Hitler ne umbrella leke.😆Nice update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updates👏
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago



very beautifully written...

Naughty miss Iyer...crush on professor Shetty...and scolding young boys and girls not to have any friendship...

Maan is in love with Geet and Geet is also attracted towards him but can't say anything to each other because of hesitation...song was BEAUTIFUl and sinc with the scene...

thanx for pm...

Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this update
nice use of pictures
and he had a car even then he preferred to walk with her .. so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part dear😊
the way they talked through eyes were simply amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
all I can say is beautiful update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

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