MG FF Possessive Lover note/pt 6 pg 78 4th december - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
part 1
nice start...
is that Geet?
Maan is very jovial here...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superbbb prologue...
Update was lovelyyy..
Hhaayyeee...Maan is ssoo cheerful & naughty..
Meer loves her Chhoti a lot..
& i think her Chhoti is none other than our sweetheart Geet..
Awww..the girl is scared as she doesn't knlw anyone there .
Eagerrly waiting for nxt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Chinni lovely start 😊
is this girl geet 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Geet hongi wo ladki.
Nyc start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb
awesome update
liked a lot dear
very well written
continue soon
waiting for next
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update may be today or tomorrow...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls update soon...

waiting...

i think 1 hour is over...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Meera came outside hurriedly as yash told about the girl, she guessed who she might be. As expected she is her choti, meer is so happy to see her after 2 long years. Choti lifted her head when she sensed someone is standing in front of her. The next second choti hugged meer tight and smiled. Meer chuckled and hugged her dear sister. Choti totally forgot that she was crying before, meeting some stranger.

Meer broke the hug, cupped her face. she wiped the tears and asked "How is my choti?"She just smiled slightly and asked "When did you come? No one told me you are coming"complained choti. "Sorry, I wanted to surprise you" told meer smiling at her. Choti smiled widely and kissed meer's cheek. Just then other girl entered the gate with some bag in her hand.

"Oyyy geet" called that girl. Choti turned the other side to see who is calling her and her smile vanished seeing that girl. "I told you to see how many are there and come, what are you doing here till now" asked that girl rudely. Geet lowered her head feeling scared."Pari, wo meer di'" tried geet to say something but stopped to get an angry glare from pari.

"Meera di, how are you? I brought breakfast for everyone" told pari ever so sweetly, she turned towards geet "Tu ghar ja, bohot kaam pada hai" told pari. Geet nodded and was about to go from there, but meer stopped her holding her hand and told "My choti wont go anywhere. And we don't need any breakfast. I know how to make it so pari better you get lost from here" told meer harshly and turned back to go from there. "but di maa is waiting for geet" told pari and she is trying very hard to control her anger as she is insulted in front of geet.

Meer turned back at once and told "You go and do house hold work, from now onwards choti will stay with me" "Maa told me to accompany you" told pari. "Enough pari, no more arguments. I told get out" told meer angrily and took geet inside. Meer's friends are hell shocked to see her new character, she was never ever this angry on anyone and her way of talking so rudely is the way too much for them.

Geet is still scared and is thinking to go back home as her chachi is waiting for her. if she don't go in time then don't know what will she do today. Even a small mistake from geet, then she has to starve for entire day. For her chachi, geet is just a burden to the house, her daughter and son are princess and prince. Geet's chachi envies geet as she is more beautiful than her daughter and never allows to go out as all will praise her beauty. Only geet's daarji supports her as he loves geet a lot and his elder son and daughter-in-law are life to their house, which he lost them when geet is just 2 years old. And her chachaji is just a puppet, he does whatever his wife says.

Daarji called meer and asked her to take with them to city as geet's chachi want to marry off geet with a person who is triple of her age and has a daughter. Daarji tried to stop her but nothing worked and his health became worst thinking about geet and her future. Meer only needed daarji's word, she is always ready to take geet with her. she want to give geet a happy life which she deserves and which she is craving from her childhood.

Though geet is one year elder to pari, but they both are in same class. Geet is a intelligent girl and pari is as worst as in studies. Geet does home work of pari, if she doesn't do then her chachi will surely kill her. Geet don't have any friend in her school, she just goes with pari and comes with pari. Geet knows nothing about the outer world, her life revolves around all the sufferings and scolding from her so called family. And she even don't know how to behave with strangers or new people, as its an order from her chachi that she shouldn't talk with anyone. But meer is the only one with whom she has freedom and talks nothing to anything. Meer always supports geet in all ways but cant do much as she is in hoshiyarpur.

There are 2 souls who are shocked to see geet there, that too with meer. They are none other than maan and dev. They are not only shocked to see geet but also happy that way meer talked with pari. "Bro am I dreaming?" asked maan looking at the retreating figure of meer and geet. Dev pinched maan on his hand. "Ouch.." shouted maan and looked at dev. "I think you are not dreaming" joked dev. Maan smiled at him widely and hugged him."Bro dude we are seeing her again. Wowww' Kiddo" shouted maan not able to control his excitement.

Here meer took geet into the hall and made her sit on the couch. "Meer di, I will go please or else chachi will beat me" told geet in the verge of crying. "Choti, you are not going anywhere. Tum mere saath delhi aarahi ho" told meer calmly as geet is already scared. Geet's eyes widened in shock. "Noo" shouted geet. "Why?" asked meer. "Daarji will be alone" told geet sadly. "Geet, daarji only told me to take you with me. Ok ok we will talk about it later, first we will have breakfast" told meer changing the topic. "But you have sent the breakfast back" told geet sadly. "Tumne banaya" asked meer. Geet nodded for a yes. "Koi baat nahi, I have already prepared come" told meer and called her friends too. Meer took geet towards dining hall and made her sit.

Geet settled and saw meer's friends except maan and geet, she smiled nervously at them and don't know what and how to talk. Next second there is a black coffee in front of geet, she saw and made a yucky face. She remembered the first time she tasted this coffee.

"Chiii" exclaimed geet made a yucky face. Maan and dev who expected the same reaction from geet are laughing like hell which made geet to look up and she is hell surprised and shocked to see her savior here, that too in front of her. "Awww my kiddo, how are you?"asked maan while dev smiled at her, geet's smile widened and her eyes too became wide.


Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
lovely update...

woh kehthe hai sabr ka phal meetha hota hai..that's the case with me now..😉

maan and geet know each other...a very big treat..

now eagr to know how they know each other...and meera gonna take geet with her to delhi...woh then more maneet moments..☺️

and now party time...me first for first time...yipee😃😃

oops forgot to mention...thanks for the pm..
Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
liked it
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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