LET...THE...GAMES...BEGIN! (SS)

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Hey Guys! Okay so i have never ever written any OS or SS or FF on any forum, ever. But now I feel like I wanna start writing, so as you have probably guessed this is my first SS, so please dont criticize too hard. Anyways here it is!

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What does he think of himself? That stupid Tannu of his will not make him laugh. She won't make him get angry, and then make him laugh. She can't even make Tamatar laugh! And Tamatar loves to laugh! If Mr.Khan thinks that Tannu would be the best fit for his family, then he is Wrong! This I will prove'this will be my life MISSION!I will show MY Asad that it's not Tannu that he is attracted to, it is her attitude, which anyone can change. If this Tannu ki bacchii thinks that she can just come into this house and claim it as hers then she is highly mistaken. This is MY family, and this is MY Asad.

My Asad, the man that irritates my soul...

The man that makes me want to pull my hair out...

The man that makes me feel that if I was a Daffy Duck, then smoke would be coming out of my ears...

So why is it that when he looks at me I feel like the most beautiful girl in the world...

Why is it that when our fingers brush against each other, I feel like a 1000V shock went down my body...

Why is it that when he comes home late from work , I feel the need run into his arms and tell him how much I missed him...

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These questions had been running in my mind for the last month. Finally haarke I went to Phupi . Phupi has always been a mother figure for me . I have always gone to Phupi for help, but somehow I was scared this time to ask her for help because somewhere inside I knew the answer. When I lay the questions down for her I only saw a motherly smile and eyes filled with tears that looked like morning dew, threatening to fall out any second. You know how they say that your eyes are the window to your soul? Well I never really understood it and now I understand. Even with the tears I could read Phupi eyes, and I did not need her to say anything. And before I knew it I was hugging Phupi with all my might letting go of the world around me. Letting go of all my sorrow, all my worries through tears. I had no space for any of that.. I WAS IN LOVE!!! I looked up to the sound of Phupi's door opening, I couldn't see the face through my tear-filled eyes but I could make out the figure and I knew exactly who it was. Me and Phupi looked and each other and started to laugh, we laughed so much that that again tears started to come out of our eyes. A confused Asad took a step forward, but traced his steps and walked back out without saying a word.

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Precap: Now if only Tanveer will come for dinner. Asad and the whole family will get to see her chichorapan


Part 2 - Page 3

Part 3 - Page 5

Part 4 - Page 6 (Last)



Please do comment! I want to write more...I might even write more today itself if I have time

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Great start! Please update sooon! 😃
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Great start. Loved the concept. Continue soon
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realy nice plzz do update soon!!!
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nice

plz continue soon

and if u can plz do pm me

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allah miyan whats wrong with you?
why did u stopped over there
man this is too good!
please continue it soon yaar!!!!! *puppy face*
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Contine it dear its nice

Plz add me in pm list also
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hey nice start. plz add me to ur pm list for da next updates. looking orward to read wat Zoya does to claim her Man.
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Interesting concept :-) please pm me when you continue
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Hey!! I m so happy that you all loved it! honestly i was really nervous on whether it would turn out the be a public pleaser. Anyways so here is the second part! I hope you enjoy! And sorry for all the stupid mistakes i may have made.

So here I am sitting at the dinner table thinking, what the hell is wrong with Asad? Can he not see it? Or is he just to oblivious to the fact that Tanveer is trying to lure him into her jaal? But I wasn't falling for it, I knew what this lying two-face was up to. The pregnancy test had made it clear. Everything was crystal clear now. Tanveer doesn't love Asad she just wants to use him, she wants him to think that he is the father of her child. The child that is slowly growing in her, the child to which the father probably turned his back to. All my sympathy goes to the unborn child, unaware of his mother's shrewd ways.

As Tanveer walked to the dining table, I took a deep breath and focused on only putting my full proof plan into action. Now that I knew about Tanveer's actions, it was time that everyone else also found out.

"Hey Tanveer!" Always remember never to be too nice to the target, otherwise there are chances of suspicion.

"Salam Zoya. Kya aap ne khana banaya hai aaj?" Ugh that two-face. I could see the hatred drip from her words. Why couldn't anyone else notice it?

"Haan Tanveer, woh actually na maine socha ki, since you came tumne mere haath ka khana to try nahi kiya to is liye I made Papaya raisin bread ! Woah meri grandma ko cook karna bohot acha lagta tha and she taught me this recipe. Unki favourite thi." If you can play games with my Asad then, why can't I?

"Wow, Zoya! Smell to bohot achi aa rahi hai! You know Bhaijaan ko papaya bohot pasand hai! Aur especially jam ke saath!"

"Jam ke saath?! Sachi As...um Mr.Khan?" Wow Asad, you can be soo weird sometimes. But I still love you.😃 Before I started turning red I had to think something to say. "Waise this will be easier to eat with Jam kyun ki its already a bread! Kya main aap ke liye..I mean do you want Jam?"

"Koi baat nahi Zoya main Jammy ko Jam de deti hoon waise..."

"Nahi Tannu tum kyun takleef le rahi ho, Zoya hai na mere li...I mean Zoya will get it."

Hayi did Asad just almost say what I thought he would of? Kaash you would have finished your sentence. Immediately I turned to see Phuphi's reaction.

She looked just as surprised as I was! But I could see the happiness in her eyes.

"Ya Tanveer you sit and eat the bread!" Now where will you go two-face?

"Hum..woh..hume na thoda kam.."

"Tanveer beta pehle khana to khatam karlo, waise bhi Zoya ne kitne pyaar se banaya hai" Exactly. Eat or speak two-face. You now only have two options left and I really wish you would choose the second one.

Ring Ring

"Woh khala humara phone baj rahahe hum abhi ate hai."

"Theek hai." Ughhh it was such a full proof plan! How did everything go haywire? When I diverted my attention towards the dining table again, I realized that the bread was almost finished! Asad was gobbling down the bread like he hadn't eaten in months!

"Asad. Beta yeh kya kar rahe ho? Dheere dheere, Zoya aur banaye gi aagar aapko itni aachi lagi to."

"Waise bhaijaan, aapko itne maaze se khate maine kitne barso se nahi dekha. Kya baat hai! Itni aachi hai?" Sachi? Wow at least one good thing happened. I didn't know you would like it this much Asad, otherwise I would have made it months ago!

"Haan Najma theek keh rahi hai, tum aaise to sirf meri haath ki kheer khate the jab tum dus saal ke the." That's even better! Asad's inner child is coming out, which will make my job easier. Asad will be mine and only mine and I will fight for you, I will fight for us Asad. As Phuphi nudged me in the gut I turned into a red tomato and not wanting to embarrass myself any further I got up to go talk to two-face.

"Hey! Tanveer! Tumhari phone call finish ho gayi?"

"Bandh karo yeh natak! Mujhe sab pata hai ki tum kya karna chati ho." I slipped! Well at least now Tanveer is aware of what will happen to her.

"Me?! Aur natak? Kya baat kar rahi ho Tanveer? Main to natak nahi kar rahi. Ya, maybe you are though. I know all your secrets Tan..veer! Aur agar tumhe lagta hai ki tum aise hi meri family ko phasa sakti ho then you are wrong!"

"Family? Koun si family Zoya? You mean nothing to them! Aur tum to sirf do pal ki mehmaan ho is ghar mein!" This girl will not be teaching me how long I will stay, that will be my job.

"Well atleast mein mehmaan ka fars to nibha rahi hoon! Unki mehmaan navazi ka faida to nahi utha rahi! Unka bharosa to nahi tod rahi!" Do you have an answer to that Ms. Two-face?

"Hah, tumko lagta hain ki tum mujhse Asad cheen sakti ho, to tum bohot badi galti kar rahi ho! Kyun ki jo bhi Tanveer chahti hai usko milta hai!"

You and getting what you want? That seems pretty impossible, especially because now you are playing these games against me! And I will give you an amazing answer for all you dirty games! "Iss liye tumhe itne gannde khel, khel ne padte hain? Kyun ki the way I see it, jo tum chahti ho, uske milne se theek pehle woh chhin jata hai."

Her eyes diverted around the room avoiding eye contact with me, I could tell I had her in my control now. But I had to be sure of it before I got any other ideas.

"Kyun? Ab kya hua apni kartutein par sharam a rahi hai? Waise mere iPad mein ek amazing sa video hai tumhara! Tum dekh na chago gi?" That caught her attention and she shifted her eyes to the iPad.

As I opened the iPad I saw her anxiety rise as beads of sweat started to form on her forehead.

After showing the video the beads of sweat had become streams of sweat. And I could tell that her hands were becoming restless to snatch the iPad and delete the video.

"Sooo agar Asad ko pata lag gaya ki tumne house ko fire lagane ki koshish ki thi, then? Tab tera kya hoga kaaliya? Ye video to maine chupke se li thi jab tumhe laga tha ki main bahar gayi thi." The look on her face was priceless! Kaash I could take a picture and send to everyone I knew! But now that she has started the game I will end it!

"Lll...eekki..nn a.ap ne yeh..I mean aap ne kab? Kaise?" Stuttering just makes you look so much more worse two-face. I feel like I have just spotted a deer standing in front of a screeching car on a highway! PRICELESS!!

"Tum jab akeli thi tab maine window se dekha tha aur record kar diya tha. I knew ki tum ghar se bahar jaane ke liya koi to bahana use karogi, iss liye meri wajese! Tumhare paon main moch! Aacha plan tha na!" Now I have full confidence that Tanveer is in MY control! And without saying or hearing another word I walked out of her room, giving myself a metal applause. 👏👏 The bounce in my walk must have irritated two-face to the max, but I couldn't turn around to see it, because in front of me was a face full of sorrow! NO! No one was supposed to hear anything of what had happened between me and Tanveer, at least not until I opened everything to the whole family. But here before me stood the one person that maybe I loved even more than Asad.

Phuphi!



Okay so that was it! Hope you all liked it! And i promise to make the next one completely on ASYA, i just had to get some of the Tanveer stuff aside before i showed romance

Edited by sucker4arhiluv - 12 years ago

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