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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww!!! That was perfect! And can't wait for Tanveer confrontation! Its gonna be epicc!!! Please PM me for next updatee :))) Thank youuu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful confession :-) loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just came across this ss and let me tell u it is amazing,i absolutely love it.
I love how zoya trap tanveer perfect. i can't wait fotr the confrontation with the family.
Please continue soon and pm me when you do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awww i loved it!! Please add me to your pm list!!

The confession was adorable & haha i love Dilshad blackmailing Zoya!! It was really cute.
Thank you xx [<3]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So here is Part 4! I know its really late, but i was caught up in too much homework so i wrote it as soon as i could hope you will like it!

Precap: AsYa confessed, and Phuphi found out that Tanveer is a two-face

"Asad! Aapko bhi? Dimples? Aapne kabhi baataya nahi?"

"Haan woh. Main sirf special people ke samne aise hasta hoon, aur tum to special se bhi special ho."

And I was pulled in again for another sensuous kiss but we stopped abruptly as we heard the door open, and in walking in a smiling mother.

I pulled away as fast as I could, this was embrassassing! And I could tell that Asad was probably even more embarrassed than me. And as I turned my head to look at him my guess was confirmed. Asad had turned into a tomato! Never had I even thought to see the day Asad Ahmed Khan blush! So why not mark this event and make it even more special for him.

"Dekha Phuphi. Maine apna wadaa to nibhaya hain. Issi baat pe ek sher araz hai!

Khatta hota hain lemon, sweet hoti hai barfi

Khatta hota hain lemon, sweet hoti hai barfi

Jab Zoya commitment kardeti hain to woh apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti

Shukriya, Shukriya."

I turned around to see a giggiling Asad.

"Wah kya baat hain Zoya, Asad ko hassadiya!" said Phuphi trying to hide her own laughter.

"Ammi, woh Tannu ko bahar janna tha to maine chode ke aata hoon," Asad said trying to divert the topic from him. But he hadn't realized that as soon as he had said her name Phuphi's smile had died instantly and was now replaced by a frown.

"Kya hua Ammi? Aap.."

"Kuch nayi who…" She said a little too fast, revoking some suspicion.

"Nayi baatayien Ammi kya baat hai?" Asad persuaded. But Phuphi didn't do anything except turn to me for help and at this moment I would not be able to help her, because I could not lie to Asad anymore. HE had to find out the truth sooner or later. So why not now.

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After explaining the plan to Asad and Phuphi I decided to put it in action. Asad had not agreed to it, he still believed that I was under some wrong impression. I knew that if I had tried to convince him he may have agreed, but I wanted to show him everything with proof. And it wasn't even just about Asad believing, it was about two-face knowing what would happen to her if she played with my family. If she wanted to play with fire she'd better be ready to get burnt!

As I walked into the living room I saw her room door open and decided to start my plan.

"Tannu! Tannu!" I screamed as I bounced around the room.

In a split second she was in front of me "Kya hua!" She screamed, trying to show m authority.

"Guess what Tannu!" I said this time grabbing her hands and twirling around. She halted and dug her nails into the back of my hands and yanked my hands off. You will pay for this two-face!

"Tannu! Aaaj main bahut khush hoon! Pata hain kyun?" I went on not waiting for a response "Aaj, Aaj! Asad nay propose kiya! Asad ne mera haath manga hai nikah ke liya! Can you believe it! Tumhari dua kam aagayi Tannu! Mujhe khushi wapaas milgayi!" I could control my laughter, her face had so many colours in the last minute that I couldn't even tell if she was human anymore! Her face was whiter than Ayaan makeup when he had become a bhoot! Seeing her face change colour I could tell that she would not sit quietly, her brain must already be making plan to kill ne or deport me.

"Kya!!!...Asad ne kya kiya?" I opened my mouth to answer but wasn't given a chance to get the words out "Nayi aaisa nahi ho sakta! Asad toh sirf humare shohar bansakte hain! Tum to misfit ho. Main perfect fit hoon is ghar ke liye! Who aisa nahi kar sakte. Ab main Razia ka mouth kaise bandh karoungi! Kaise use karoungi Asad ko!" I could really hear what two-face was saying but I could tell she was definitely hatching some plan and cursing me at the same time.

Before I could get my dialogue out Asad entered the scene.

"Nahi Zoya aap ne theek se sunna nahi main to sirf practice kar raha tha actually to mujhe tanveer se propose kar na tha. Tanveer" he said as he walked towards her "kya..aap ..hu.mse nikah.."

"Yes! Haan, haan!" Before Asad could even finish his sentence she had accepted.

"Par, par, Asad aapne toh mujhe.."

"Actually…" Ring Ring "Hello? Yes this is Asad Ahmed Khan. What?! Kya?! Kya aap toh pata bhi hain ki aap kya kehrahe ho?" As the phone ended Asad fell on the couch.

"Jammy kya hua?"

"Meri sab kamayi pani mein doub gayi, galti say kisi ne aag laga di. Meri sari factory jaal ke rakh ho chuki hain" Wow! Asad was a born actor!

"Kya? Par..yeah…kaise?"

"Pata nai Tannu par tum mera saath doogi na? Shayad humko ik small apartment main shift hona pade but tum…"

"Matlab? Sub chala gaya? Toh phir nikah kyun karein? Hunara matlab agar nikah karenge to aap par ziyada bouj ban jayenge hum. Shayad hume wait karna chahiya, you know? Jab tak aap ko ek aacha sa ghar na ho" And the hyena fell intot eh trap head first!

"Par Tannu tum ho na? Hum sub kuc…"

"Kya matlab main ho? Mera karobaar itna bada nahi! Aur nikah aise ladke se hota hai jisse ghar dene ki aukat ho. Aur tum?"

"Tumhare karobaar to jaal nahi gaya tha?"

"haha, wahi par toh tum haar gaye Ja-mmy. Waise toh…" And before she had gotten another word out a hand came flying and hit her cheeks with such force that she had almost lost her balance.

"Phuphi? Aap? Woh maine.." And in came another one , but this time it was a stronger one than the first. This one had thrown two-face to the ground, and left nasty finger prints on her face.

I hadn't seen who had slapped her the second time but I guessed it was probably Asad. But when I looked up I saw an infuriated Tamatar looking at Two- face with utmost disgust. I didn't have to look in a mirror to see who my expression was because I could tell it was the same as Phuphi and Asad's. We were shocked to the core! Tamatar? The sweet, innocent Tamatar? Who knew she had so much hatred bottled up!

"Finally! Main yeh tabse kar na chati thi jabse tum ne iss ghar me kadam rakha tha! Bachpan se tum mere aur bhai ke beech mein anna chati thi! Paar sukar hai bhai ka ke unone tum ko ane nahi diya! Aur jabse tum aayi ho maine dekha hain kit um Zoya aur bhai ke beech main aana chati ho, stupid pile-on! Itna pyaar diya hai Ammi ne tumhe aur tum! Agh!" She stopped and I though she start to cry, I thought I had seen something sparkle in her eyes and had taken it for tears. But they weren't, they were just her eyes sparkling with glory!

"Maine dekha hai ki tumne kaise Zoya aur Bhai ko bhadkaya hai! Aur issi liye maine tumhare int ka jawab boulder se diya hai! Iss waje se Zoya aur Bhai closer aati thin a ki door jaisi ki tum chati thi! Aur hain ek aur baat, jaise Zoya ne aapko woh gas leak karte dekha tha, waise hi maine bhi dekha tha! Woh kam wali bait hi na? Meri jasoos thi! Aur jo main kehti woh, woh karti." This time it wasn't just two-face who was confused all of us were. We had a lot of questions of Najma, she had known all along? She had tried to bring us together?

"Aur ek aur baat I hope ki tumhe jail main jakar itna hi gussa aaye jitni khushi ho rahi hai mujhe abhi. Police officer!" Najma called and in walked a man in a Police uniform, ready to perform his duty.

"Ms. Tanveer you are under arrest for attempt to murder."

"Officer? Maine to kuch…" tanveer pleed trying to stop the police from hand cuffing her

"Aap apna defence court main pesh kar sakti hain, yahan nahi…"

After the whole Tanveer fiasco had completed me, Asad and Phuphi ran over to Najma and hugged her all at the same time.

"Najma beta..aap.."

"Main theek hoon Ammi par.." she said rolling her 'r' and looking at her Bhaijaan

"Hain, hain karta hoon." And with that he walked over to me. It looked like a god was walking over to me. Even after the whole incident he looked good, although I could see the tiredness in his face.

No!No! He was getting down on one knee! No! Asad!

"Zoya. Mujhe pata hain ki maine bahut waqt laga diya aapni dil ki baat kehne main. Par kyun ki dil ki baat keh di hai to kya Miss. Zoya Farooqui, aap Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan banna chahe gi? Kya aap ko aapke Jahapanah six pack ke saath pori zindagi manzoor hai?"

I tried to open my mouth but no words came out. Why did he have to have such an effect on me! I couldn't say anything so held his shoulders and helped him to stand up. As soon as he stood start I pulled him in for a rib crunching hug to state my approval, but I had one more thing to do.

"Isse pehle ki main kuch kahoun, apne angel se toh puchlo, woh angel jo humme ek karne mein jaan lagarahi thi."I finshed and went over to Najma.

"Kya aapko yeh proposal manzoor hain Tamatar?"

"Actually na proposal thoda kacha tha, nayi Am.."

"Nahi! Kitna acha tha Tamatar!" I spoke too soon revealing a little too much.

"Hahahahahha" the two ladies laughed as the pushed me into Asad's arms. And surprisingly he had caught me and I had fit ever so perfectly into his strong and secure arms.

As I hugged him he move towards my ear and whispered

"Zoya ka Asad aur Asad ki Zoya."

Hope you all liked it!! Please, please comment! And don't forget to press that beautiful button which had the letters L-I-K-E on it ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Awww perfect! Loved this SS! Amazing! Last chapter ...Najma being the hero of the story just made it even more spectacular! The big slap ...I felt jealous!!! I wanted to do it xD LOOL Loved it!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Hey dear fab updatr

Freakingfabulious

Specially najma

Lovr the confession
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
hey dis was beautiful. just loved it. najma did a great job. I loved the AsYa moment in the room n den Asad's confession was simply the best. it sounds so nice to the ears "Asad ki Zoya, Zoya ka Asad."
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
ROFL never knew Asad was good that good in acting :P nice ending

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