Kriyaansh ss 1st luv Neva..to be 4getten..updated - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Deepsha, wonderful SS, I like it! (: All the very best for your exams! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb it is
sorry m really very late
but m hell busy with exam
ek din baad exam hey and still bohat work
hey to chotu sa comment kiya
superb update tha
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

wow superb it is
sorry m really very late
but m hell busy with exam
ek din baad exam hey and still bohat work
hey to chotu sa comment kiya
superb update tha


It's kk..u dnt need to be sry..😛
Nd All the best 4 ur exams..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Deepsha, wonderful SS, I like it! (: All the very best for your exams! :D


Thanx a lot😊
M glad u liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Thnx for d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MOON_ARSHA

Nice update.
Thnx for d pm.


thnqzz dear...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Holla..Guyzz..me back wid my update..after dos..crappy..internals..😊
Soo here I go...

PART-6

Kriya moved towards d gang..rey too followed her..nd all went to canteen..Seated wid der respective girls..including taa...

Vic:guys letz order something bohot bhuk lagi hai..
All bet der heads..

Nil:dude tujhe bhuk kab nahi lagta..

Bh:haa canteen mei aate hi bhuk chaalu hojata hai iska(he said in his style)

Rin:(confused)but Vicky ghadi thodi na hai ki chalu hojayega..

All:shut up rinni..😡

Ne:(filmy tone)Sab log mere babu ke peeche kyu padh rahe ho
(she said lookin at Vicky)

Bh:ye phir shuru hogayi

Varun interrupted..n said..

Va:umm neha I think instead of dancer u should have become an actress...😉

All mouths wide opened..at dis..N started laughing..n rofling on d floor..literally...

Va(confused)y r u guys laughing?

Sh:(laughing hard) coz varun neha already actress hai.. I mean Bollywood queen..hai..so banne ki kya zarurat hai..

Va:ohh

All were having gala time..teasing..laughing..Eating..wen swayam interupted..n spoke..

Sw:guys let's go to my home..v ll hav dinner der only..

Ta:haa aur Khana mein banaungi..(she said with her disguise smile..)😡

Vic:dinner..cool..den chelo guys letz go...he said grinning like mad..

All moved out..kriya n tani were left..kriya was abt to go wen tani said..

Ta:kriya ek min mein bhi aari hu..
(she said moved towards her)
Nd..both wer walked out..tani was trying her best to speak to kriya..

Ta:umm kriya aap kabhi swayam bhai ke ghar Gaye..(she asked with her evil smile..)

Kr:nahi kyu?she asked confused

Something fishy struck in tani's mind..(asusual...uske mind mein kuch na kuch crappy things chalthi rahte hai..) nd she started..her bakqwas..

Ta:aise hi puch rahi thi..Vaise aap ko bata hai mein aur Rey ne wahi confess kiya..unhone khud aye mere ghar pe aur meri room mein aakar..

She was cut by kriya..who couldn't listen all dis..nonsense..n was trying to control her tears..

Kr:I think Hume chalna chahiye...she said nd about to move..

Ta:ruko..naa..chalte hai..aur rey ne window se mere room mein aaye..aur...nd..again she was cut by kriya..

Kr:all r waiting fr us..so lets go..(she said stepping forward)

Ta:haa chelo..
Ta(mind talk):yesss..meine kriya ko Sab kuch bata diya..ab chahkar bhi kuch nai ho sakta hai or na hi mil sakte hai dono...she said wid a smirk..

Both reached parking lot..wer gang was waiting fr both of dem..

Sw:where were u both?he asked..

Kr:vo swayam tani kuch keh rahi thi so late hogaya..she said weakly..
Rey was confused..wat would tani had talked to kriya..

Sh:kk..now let's make a move guys..she said..

Whole gang headed towards swayam's home..n soon reached..der..

all settled comfortably on d couch..

(sitting arrangement was like..swaron together beside dem variya..n vishaka..beside varun viha..n after dem taa...nd beside dem Bharat simmi rinni nd nil..wer sitting..hope u got..)

Vic:yaar guys..kuch khelte hai..

Nil:yeah dude u r rite..let's play..

Vish:wt abt truth or dare

Sh:yeah gud idea..

Kr:guys mujhe nai khelna..u ppl play..
She said looking down..

Va:why..?r u ok..?he kept his hand on her..

Rey saw tat..n got irritated..to see dem dis close..

Sh:Tum theek tho ho na..(she asked concerned..)

Kr(fake smile): am absolutely fine..guys..

Sharon was not satisfied..She kept her hand on kriya's shoulder asking her is everything alright..
Kriya smiled..nd assured her..tat she is ok..Sharon too smiled...

Sw:common kriya u hav to play..nw

All:yeah..

Va:Guyz letz just drop dis game..he said..

All:awww

Nil:kriya u r great..kya magic kiya VARUN par tumne..

She smiled..

Ta:I ll bring snacks for all..Nd she moved to kitchen..by hearing..snacks.. Word vicky also ran behind her..nd neha too followed him..

Sw:guys let's watch movie..wts say..?

All:YAAYY..

Nil:but which film dude?

Sh:James bond sky fall..she said excitedly..

Sim:yaa rite..Sharon..

Nil:arey no yaar it's soo boring..

Girls(in unison)NIL...dey said glaring at him..he got scared...

Sw:okk girls..James bond it is..

Sh:(blushing)thnx swayam..

Sw:ur wish is my command mam..!!
He said cutely lookin..at her..
She blushed..More.nd. started der eyelock..with pehla nasha..bg tune..😛

Viha n tani entered..n der eyelock was broken by vicky..

Vic:majnu swayam is back...!!
Swaron blushed😳

Boys started singing 'pehla Nasha pehla kumar naya pyaar hai naya intzaaar...kar lunga kya apna haal tu hi bata...'at d last line..dey wer eyeing at sharon..n singing..

Sharon cheeks became all pink pink...

Sw:stop it guys...bohot hogaya..he said trying to control his million dollar smile.nd
has gone to put on d tv..

Tani served snacks fr all..n sat beside Rey..

Soon the movie started..It's an action film so everyone wer deeply indulged into it..(that's I tooK James Bond movie..:)

Rey was just glancing at kriya..all d while nd she was in her own thoughts..

what all tani had said to her in canteen abt der confession..tears wer making der way out..bt she composed herself...tat it's nt d correct place to pour her heart out...

Den suddenly she realized tat her dress got wet..So came back frm her thoughts..

Sh:am sry kriya vo actually swayam asked me to pass juice so glass slipped frm my hand..
She said wiping her dress..

Kr:it's ok.. Sweetu..dnt worry mein abhi wipe karke aati hu..
Swayam washroom?she asked questioning him..

He directed hey way to tani room n she left...Rey saw tat..n he too followed her..as everyone was totally involved..in d movie..even tani..So she didn't notice him going..infact no one..

(ps: i knw u guys must be angry coz I choose tani's room fr KR confrontation bt..remember..?taa...confession was also happened der only rite..?so I just thought d things to be in dis way..plz spare wid me..hope u guys got wat am trying to say..)

Here kriya in bedroom,entered n saw tani's pic..n thought it would be her room..She went to washroom n wiped her strains..came out..n saw Rey coming to bedroom

Kr:Rey aap yaha..kya kar rahe ho?
She said in her asusual hyper mode..
He immediately closed d door frm behind..n moved towards her..

Kr:Rey y did u close d door..
She said n moved towards door..bt Rey caught her wrist frm behind..(after Radha kaise na jale pose Wala)

She was numb..by his sudden action..

Kr:leave my hand..she said angrily
He left her hand n turned towards her..

Re:BAATCUTTER...d only word he could utter..
After hearing dis word..after 1 long year..gave her heart soothing..

Re:baatcutter please once listen to me..(he said inching forward..)

Kr:(angrily)wt should I listen Rey..tell me..kya sunu mein..ur great love story..She said in a go..

Rey's heart skipped a beat hearing dis frm kriya..

Re:kr..kriya..I can..explain..
He said stammering..nd held her shoulders frm both sides..

Kriya just took aback..he was stunned..why she is behaving so weird..

Kr:bolo kya kehne chahte ho..(she said looking down)

Re:kriya mein bas ye Kehna chahta Hun..that tani aur mere beech...he was cut by her...

Kr:(glaring at him) mr.reyaansh singhania..u don't need to say anything..or explain to me..coz Apke girlfriend tani ne mujhe Sab kuch bata diya..hai..(she said all dis in a go..)

Rey felt numb..he couldn't understand wt she was talking about..

Re:kriya what r u saying..tani ne tume kya bataya..(he said calmy trying to comfort her..)

Kr:(shouting)that u both hav confessed..here..in dis room..only..(she said pointing d room..)
Ps:it was nt audible to d gang..

He went numb..just rooted to his place..closed his eyes tight..nd remembered der soo called..confession..in dis room...
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That's it..guys..
How's it...? hope u all liked it..
Plzz share ur reviews..n do hit like tab..

Precap-KR confrontation continuation...
Nd ENTRY of gautam n smriti rai Prakash

-deepsha❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res:-D. . .
Unres. . . . .
Super-awsome update man. . . .
Start was hilerious with our gang ki masti . . .
And in middle,
woh b*tch naani ne apna and rey ka so calld confsn ki story sunai. . .i just want 2 kil her . . . .
And ending part was like a big blow 2 me and rey. .
Rey ko kyu to tumhe pata hi hoga,
and mujhe isliye coz wow finaly rey ho reality face kerni padegi,and kriya usko reality face karewayegi.. . . .
And precap. .
Hmm. . .gud hai .just hope gautam and smiriti ki enty se kr ko koi effct naa pade. . .
And just a requst,
pls yeh varun ke lovly-shovly scens mat likho pls,i knw its realy imp to show varun n kriya scens to make him jeolus,bt at the end of d day its an kr story and i cnt see rey or kriya ke lovly scens with any1 else rather with them 2gethr. . .its just a requst. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear...read last 2 parts nw...
hey r amazing...
hate tht taani...
kria n rey confrontation was superb...
waiting for next part...
thnx for pm n sorry for commenting late on last part...

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