Kriyaansh ss 1st luv Neva..to be 4getten..updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya ..guys..this is deepsha..actually dis is my first ss
am reli pissed off as what's happening in current d3 track..soo trying to get over it..
(guys plz imagine sneha as sharon..d old sharon of d3😊

So here I go..wid d update..

thnqz tam(angel_luvkreya) 4 dis wonderful banner...!!!!!



Part-1

A girl was lying on d bed..crying bitterly..it's her daily routine as she used to be in her bedroom alone thinking about her past..her love..her friends...den suddenly a girl came running to room..n shouted..sweetu...bt she was shocked to d scenario..she was like pissed off to see her sis..like dis daily...

"Kriya not again..."d girl said jumped in to d bed sat before her..

Kr:kya hua "sharon"she asked wiping her tears...(yes krisha r sisters😛

Sh:as if u dnt know..kriya faked a smile..to which she just hugged her tight..n kriya hugged her back..n both cried..silently
Den suddenly sharon phone started beeping..by seeing d caller I'd a smile crept on her face..

Kr:awww my sharu is blushing..go n pick d cal..
She gave a kiss on her cheek n left d room..
Sharon picked d cal..hello!!
Frm d other side a boy speaking ..(I know u ol may hav guessed till now)
"Hello sharon"..

Sh:hi swayam kaise ho?

Sw:ya am fine..tum batao..tum kuch kehne chahte thi na..sharon

Sh:haa swayam actually I wanted to say tat kri.. She was about to say kriya bt some noise fr coming frm d other side like cheering..as if won some biggest trophy ever..

"Wat was tat sound"??she asked to know..wt was happening around in d clg..

Sw:vo sharon actually mein ye Baat kehne ke liye call kiya
Sh:hmm bolo..

"Aaj rey n tani ne confess kiya"he said in a go..in nt soo..happy tone..

She went numb..dunno how to respond..n remained silent..

Sharon u der??asked swayam
Yup..ahh swayam I ll cal u later ok..bye n she cut d cal

swayam was hell shocked..by dis behaviour of sharon..n went towards d gang
(Guyz m nt giving any taa...confession )

Here sharon went numb by hearing d words of swayam tat his best friend has confessed she kneeled on d floor n started crying...mumbling d words"rey aur tani ek saath hai"

She was going on repeating those words which gonna hurt her kriya a lot..

Something broke down n she turned behind..to her surprise it was kriya who was standing with a coffee cup

Kriya immediately ran to her room lyed on d bed n Started crying..sharon too followed her..
Banged d door n moved towards kriya n hugged her..

"Sweetu plzz ro mat"she said calming her..n broke d hug..

She cupped Kriyas face n said sternly.."kriya he don't deserve u.."
Kriya was shocked by her sudden change

Kr:sharu rey tho tumhare best friend hai na tum ye Sab she was cut by sharon

Sh:correction kriya best friend hai nahi tha

Kr:no sharon dnt do this..coz of me tum dono.. cut by sh

Sh:sweetu plz usse bhul jao he dnt deserve ur love..agar rey tumse pyar katha hai tho he wouldn't hav moved on soo easily..

"I think ua right sharon mei bhi pagal thi jo unse pyar kar baithi"she said sobbing
Sharon hugged her tight.."k ab no rona Dhona "

She broke d hug n made her sleep...she was der only until she completely dozed into sleep
After some time kriya was asleep..sharon pecked her forehead n covered a blanket n left d room..
After sharon went kriya opened her eyes n tears made their way..she opened her drawer beside bed n took a pic of rey n hers(dance fest after kaisa ye ishq hai performance )
She kissed tat pic "rey aap mujhe itne jaldhi bhul Gaye ho..meine socha hi nai"
N remembered those memories she have spent with her old rey..their beautiful confession
Ever..n she soon dozed off to sleep

In Mumbai all wer congratulating rey n tani
Den rey suddenly remembers d confession which he nd kriya had on. Last day of dance fest..a smile crept on his face..n he immediately jerked on wat he was thinking

Sw:kya hua rey tum kuch Soch ne lage ho..kya kis bare mein..

"Kriya ke bare mei tho nai Soch rahe ho na"said closed his eyes n fists..
Rey was like shocked..hearing Kriyas name..he immediately made his way out frm d rehearsal hall..gang was asking million questions..to swayam he just ignored n dashed out..
(flashback swayam was hell shocked by Sharon's behaviour..n he called her after some time wen she made her way out of kriyas room..n went towards her room ..den suddenly her cell started beeping..she kept ignoring..swayam agn called her..
Dis time she lifted d cal.."wt d hell swayam am cutting ur calls tat means I dnt want to talk to u"
Sw:y sharon wt happend??



Sw: (concerned)kya hua Sharon?? Bolo na...

Sh: kuch nahi swayam mein tumse baad mein baat karungi...

Sw: Sharon plzz bolo kya huwa plzz...

Nw Sharon gets full on frustrated n shouts...

Sh: kya bolu swayam ki mein kriya ko Iss halat mein nahi dekh sakti...

Sw: wht...swayam Donoo hw 2 react n became silent n suddenly realises n spoke..
Sw: wht..??? Kriya... But woh tumhare paas kaisse..
Nw Sharon is literally sobbing.

Sh:swayam... Woh... K..r..iya is my sis

Sw: wht kriya is ur sis??

Sh: yaa swayam mujhe bhi yaha aane ke baad patha chala... N narrates him d whole story n hw even tells him hw kriya loves Rey n missing him 2 hell... N tells d way she used 2 cry 4 for him n spents her day by looking at his photo d way she loves him n whole story...

Nw swayam is very touched by hearing dis tears starts flowing frm his eyes n realises hw much she loves Rey n misses him even 2 day..n Over tht Sharon n swayam cry a lot tht at one side someone's sis is suffering for misses her love n another side a friend ( I mean bst friend )
Suddenly sharon hears kriya calling her n she excuses by telling him tht she'll call him later... N cuts d call...

Here swayam is so touched n literally cry's n spoke in btw...,

Sw: hw could I... ??? Kriya ko ek baar bhi dondh ne ki koshish nahi ki... Aur usse galat samaj beyta... Hw I could I be so... Kriya I'm so sorry... I'm really sorry kriya I made a mistake... Aur yeh bhi nahi socha ke tumhare college chodne kar reason kya hogs. N literally sobbs...


Itz nite 9 o clock...krisha r having dinner wid der parents n suddenly gautham spoke...

Ga: kriya Sharon kal Tum donno Mumbai jao aur Sharon tumhara college bhi n kriya ko bhi wapas join karlo...

Sh: okk dad par mom dad aap log humare saath nahi aa rahe ho...??

Ga: nahi beta... Woh kya hai mujhe yaha ek zaroori meeting so I can't come wid u all so smriti bhi mere saath yaha rehgi Kk

Sh: Kk dad bye... Gd nite...
Ga: Kk gd nite beta aur kriya gd nite..
Kr: gd nite papa...gd nite mom in low voice...

And Sharon n kriya go 2 der room n here kriya starts...

Kr: Sharon mein Mumbai nahi aana chahte aur I can't face anyone... Nahi mein yahi rahunge aur yahi tekh hoon...

Sh: kriya Tum pagal ho Gaye ho kya... Hv u lost it... Yeh kya hai kriya Tum mere saath nahi rehna chahte kya..?? Itne saloo hum ek dusre se dur teh aur yeh baat Jane ke baad ke Tum meri sister ho... Mein tumse dur nahi reh sakte... Kriya u hv 2 com wid me

Kr: no Sharon mein nahi aa sakte...

Sh: kriya agar Tum mere saath Mumbai nahi aayi na toh mein seriously Bol rahi hoon mein tumse zindagi mein kabhi baat nahi karungi aur aapni sakhal bhi nahi dekhaungi..

Kr: Sharon essa math bolo... It's not lyk tht... I love you so much... Starts crying...

Sh: kriya plzz don't cry...

Kr: Sharon... N hugs her tight.

Sh: kriya nw stop crying n v r gng 2 Mumbai n thtzz final...

Kr: abb sharon rai Prakash ne bola tho jabs hi padega naa..she said giggling

"Yeah right" sharon said with attitude n both burst out..laughing..

N Sharon makes kriya sleep n goes 2 balcony n calls swayam...


Phew..finally finished typing..
I hope u guys liked it..do hit like button..n comment..
If I get gud response den I ll surely continue nxt parts..

Luv ya..❤️
Deepsha..








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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
eagerly waiting for d next one
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loved the start...pls update the next part soon...
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amazing
bs ab kriya uss rey ko bhav na de plzz
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deepsha...superb...👍🏼
waitin fr kria's entry...
kria should also move on...keep it in mind..😉
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awsum update
Kriya shouldn't talk to rey
Pls cont soon
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awsum... Loved it...update nxt part soon... Thanxx 4 pm
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awesome update
update next part soon
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awsome update...
Lykd it
update soon
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awesome start dear... lovrd it
continue soon

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