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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

loved d update..
vicky n his hunger prangs n varun telling neha to become actress not knowing she s bolly queen .. loved d way gang got missed wt varun.. that taani😡🤬 so dislike her to d core.. swaron getting teased was cute.. loved it.. gang singing making sharon al blushy blushy.. loved it..
kria confronted rey abt wat taani said to her in canteen.. waiting for next part update soon..

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

AWESOME

loved it

interesting

bt hated what taani did

but den kriyaansh confrontation

update soon :)

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Just readed all the 6 parts in one go...
Awesome story...
Very well written... Krisha r so cute...
Nd manju ko kaise bhul sakti hu... He is super cute...
Thank u varun ko ye ss me include karne ke liye... I really like him
kriya ne right kiya... But still me chati hu ki kriyaansh ek ho jaye par jaldi nhi ... Thoda rey ko bhi tapadne do...
Aur me us idiot ka naam likh kar apne cmnt ko kharab nhi kar na chati..
Loved it
update soon
thnx for pm

p.s. I really loved the banner

p.p.s. Sry late comment karne ke liye ...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

JUST NOW READ ALL THE UPDATES..

DEY WERE AMAZING.. 😆😆

IT HAD A BANG ON START.. 👏👏

LOVE KRISHA REALLY A LOT...

rey's reaction was nice..

im likin sharon the diva who protects her sister frm everything 😆😆

REALLY HATE TAAREY...🤢

varun ki entry... 😳😳😳

really happy tht kriya is ignoring rey..

(I really like kricky's bond...especially during shivam's party..der couple entry..was d best part) ------ i agree 😊😊 MISSING KRIYA..😭😭

yes rey realized tht he is wrong...

loved the fun @ swayam's house..

hate tht cheapster taani.. [ mind my lanuage bt i cant stop myself whn it comes to taani 🤢🤢 ]

loved the gang teasing swaron.. aawww 😳

y did u stop it dere??? plz update soon

P.S. LOVED THE VM & SPECIALLY THE TITLE

THNX FOR THE PM 😊😊

AND DO PM ME WHEN U UPDATE

THE CONCEPT N THE STORY IS AMAZING... 👏👏

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

amazing update

swaron scene ws cute😛

mann kar raha hai taani ko mar du 😡

kria n rey confrontation was superb...

waiting for next part...

aur plz big update dena

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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deepzz_rockss

@deepzz_rockss

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

awesome update...!!!

luved it...❤️❤️

waiting for nxt part..update soon

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Ayushi/Rivana

@KriShaReYam

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

awewsome SS deepsha!!!

very well done!!!

loved d last update!!

jst read d whole of it now!!

continue soon!!!

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

awesome update...

luvd it...

hate dat taani...😡

kya kya chalta rehta hai uske dimag main usee hi pata...

i hope kr ki beech ki misunderstanding dur ho jaye...

update soon...thnx 4 de pm...

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

sorry for d late comment...
update is tooo gud...
hate dat nani lyk hell😡...
kriyaansh ki confession jaldi karvado...
thnx fr d pm...

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deepshakriya

@deepshakriya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

PART 7:

heyz guyzz... i'm back wid the update so here's part 7...

happy reading guyzzz...

Re: kriya thtz nt true.. Taani ne joh kuch bhi kaha woh Sab true nahi

hai...

Kr:Rey..!!! Ab kya true hai aur kya false mujhe mat sikao plzz...

Re: par...

Kr: hey...!! I don't need ur explanation...Kk u better get tht ah..!!

Re: kriya...!!!! Tumhe meri baat sunne he padegi Kk... I just wanted to

tell u tht I still LOVE you kriya..!!!

Kr: ohh yeh kab se hua...

Re: Kk yeh kab hua ri8.. Mein baata hoon kab hua... Hum jab NEW

YEARS EVE par dehradun mein mile na tabhi se hua... And Humare

college ke DANCE FEST.. Ke din yaad hai humne ek dusre ko confess

kiya tha.. Tab se hua.. Mujhe tumse pyaar...

Kriya remembered their confession.. Hw she confessed him tht.."AAP

MERE ACHE DOST SE KUCH ZYAADA HO"... N the way he jumped

lyk mad in happiness...

Kr: Rey mujhe yeh Sab nahi Sunna... Jus leave Kk.. Past is past.. Aap

tho aapki present ka dyaan rakho...

Taani ke saath...

Re: kriya Tum mera pehle pyaar ho.. Uss pre valentines day ke din jab

tumne mujhe woh Sab kuch kaha tha mein woh Sab meine believe nahi

kiya aur jab Tum mujhe swayam ke baare mein baataya ki Tum

humesha se swayam ko lyk karthi thi... Tab mujhe bahut gussa aaya aur

mujhe woh baardash nahi hua...

Kr: Rey stop it..!! I jus wanna go...

Re: Tum kahi nahi jaogi jab tak meri baat poori nahi ho jayegi.. Kk

( holding her tightly.. Nt letting her go..)

Re: aur humari first kiss..."BUTTERFLY KISS" woh kya tha.. Tum Bhool

gayi woh Sab joh waqt hum saath mein bitaaye

Ab Tum yeh mat kaho ki Tum woh Sab Bhool gayi ah...!!!

Kriya again went to her memories which she shared with Rey..!!!! Woh

butterfly kiss...

Re: aur woh humari adventure hum uss din kiya.. Plz kriya try to

understand taani aur mere beech mein kuch bhi nahi hai.. Mein taani se

pyaar nahi kartha hoon.. Mein sirf aur sirf tumhe pyaar kartha hoon..

Kr: par Rey ab mein tumse pyaar nahi karthi..mein varun se pyaar

karthi hoon is tht clear..!!!!

Re: kriya joot mat bolo.. Mein jantha hoon ki Tum varun se pyaar nahi

karthi...

Kr: karthi hoon Kk nw jusz leave me.. N she ran frm der with tears

eyes which didn't go unnoticed by Rey...

Re: kriya mein tumhe wapas Pakar hi rahoonga... Aur mujhe taani se

baat karna hogi.. Aakir ussne kriya se aur kya bolo tha...

Kriya went out with teary eyes as well as frustrated..

Kr: sharon chalo letz go home..!!!

Sh: par kriya kya hua..

Kr: Sharon chalo..!!!!

Sh: Kk... Bye guyzz..

Va: kriya wait...

By then Rey came out n came towards the gang...

Kr: varun Tum bhi chalo.. Letz go...

They left kriya,varun and Sharon... And everyone left to der house...

Rey in his house... Remembering all those moments which he spent with

kriya... "NEW YEARS EVE" in dehradun , "SWIMMING POOL scene n

DER FIRST DANCE" , DER FRIENSHIP CONFESSION in fire

exit... "DER CONFESSION"," DER 1st KISS"... N all those moments

which were so special in his life...

On the side kriya in her house crying... kyun Rey aap taani se kyun

pyaar kartha ho... Kya aap mujhse pyaar nahi karte te... Aur aap

kehrahe ho ki aap mujhse pyaar karthe ho.. Aur woh Sab kya tha joh

taani ne mujh se kaha...

Aahatein Frm ek mein aur ek tu...

Male ( imagine Rey gaa raha hai )

Chhoti-chhoti baatein yunhi aate-jaate

Yaadein sehlaake jaati hai

Raaton ko sirhaane baasi muskaane

Mujhko sula ke jaati hai

Milna nahin hai mumkin itna bataaun lekin

Hum phir mile kyun hain

Tujhko bula naa paaun

Tujhko bhula naa paaun

Yeh silsile kyun hain

Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai

Teri aahatein nahin hai

Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai

Teri Aahatein nahin hai.. nahin hai

Rey was missing kriya to hell.. He wanted her back in his life... N

started crying...

Female ( imagine guyz kriya gaa rahi hai )

Maine nahin jaana, tune nahin jaana

Jaane anjaane jo huaa

Kuchh tto hua jo mujh ko hua naa

Tujhko magar kyun hua

Ghalti nahin hai teri

Ghalti nahin hai meri

Phir bhi gile kyun hain

Tujhko bulaa na paaun

Tujhko bhula na paaun

Yeh silsile kyun hain

Sab kuch wahi hai [wahi hai]

Par kuch kami hai [kami hai]

Teri aahatein nahin hai

It was the same with kriya... But she was literally crying...

Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuch kami hai

Teri aahatein nahin hai, nahin hai hai

Teri aahatein nahin hai aahatein nahin...

Swayam was going on thinking wht must have happend between dem

tht dey left suddenly frm his house. He decided to go to kriya's house

the very next morning...

Kriya and Rey were So upset n whole ni8 dey didn't have proper sleep.

The next morning...

Swayam got ready n left to kriya's house...

Ting tong...

Sh: hey swayam..!!! Tum yaha itne subah subah...

Va: Sharon shayad tumhari yaad aarahi hogi ri8..

Sh: shut up varun...

Kr: Sharon koun hey...

Sh: swayam...!!!!

She came out of her room n greeted swayam..

Sw: hey kriya...!!!! Kriya Tum kal esse achanak kyun chali gayi...

Kr: guyz mein Abhi aayi Hun.. ( diverting the topic) and she left frm

der...

Sw: Sharon whtz wrong wid her.. Issa kyun behave kar rahi hai...

Sh: swayam kya hai na nnarrated n whole incident which Hpnd between

Rey n kriya as kriya won't hide anything frm her...

Sw: I hope Rey is Kk nw...Sharon Rey still loves kriya... Sorry varun

woh u now abt Rey n kriya ri8...

Va: yaa yaa...

Sh: I know swayam Rey still loves kriya but ussne kriya itne jaldi bhul

Gaya aur move on hogaya na wid taani so let him deserve dis

punishment...

And Sharon went to kriya's room to call her downstairs...

While varun n swayam were talking about der love ladies...

Va: so swayam tell me abt ur love story...

Sw: hmm.. Mein aapni siren ko jab pehle baar dekha... Tabhi usse pyaar

hogaya.. And phir finally usse propose kiya aur woh accept kardi...

Va: ohh u call her siren...

Sw: haa... Woh uss Rey ne kriya ko.. Baa... Nahi kuch nahi haa I call her

siren kyunki woh humesha chalti

rahti hai...

( actually guyz swayam was abt to tell tht incident when both swayam

n Rey were talking abt der lady loves n hw do dey address dem n all...

Agar yaad nahi aaya than checkout reyam scene 42)

Sh: wht...!!! Humesha mein chilati rehti hoon... So mean...

Sw: woh woh sh..a...Ron I was just...

Sh: you..!! Swayam hw dare u..???

And starting running back of him...

Kr: swayam u do mean... To my sissy...

Va: agar swayam ko sach mein lagtha hai toh then he's ri8...

Kr: haa... Varun Tum bhi.. Matlab.. U too

And kriya also started running back of him... Dey four finally landed

on d couch after der chasing session...

Kriya on varun n swayam on Sharon...

Den suddenly some1 enter der house... And...

Smriti: hey surprise my kids...!!!

And she was shocked to see dem in dis position..

Dey stood up straightened demselves..

Swayam said namaste to der Krisha's parents...

Sm: hey kya ho raha tha...

Sh: woh mom dad aap yaha...

Sm: haa hum wapas aagaye...

Ga: hmm so hw u my kids..!!! Hugging Sharon n kriya...

Krisha: 5n dad...

Ga: hmm yeh kyun hai.. Pointing towards varun..

Kr: dad he's varun my friend frm Canada...

Ga: ohh hello...

Va: hello uncle...

Ga: swayam ri8... Pointing towards swayam...

Sw: yes uncle.. Hello...

Ga: hiii..!!!!

hmmm finaaly update...

do lyk n comment...

lots of love

-deepsha❤️

Edited by deepshakriya - 12 years ago

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