Abhaiya OS--Show me the light.updated april6th pg8

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

---My Other Works---

Abhiya One Shots

First OS-The journey of a lifetime

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3246163/abhiya-os-the-journey-of-a-lifetime-edited-18oct

Second OS-I am with you forever

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3258523/an-abhiya-os-i-am-with-you-forever-edited

Third OS- Show me the Light

Fourth OS - And i feel scared

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3534613/abhaiya-and-i-feel-scared

Fifth OS -"Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating ?"

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3595079/abhiya-was-it-raindrops-or-i-just-heard-my-heart-beating

Sequel to the Fifth OS- ' I accept i do Love You!'

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3626503/abhiyai-accept-i-do-love-u-last-chap-updtd-30july

Abhiya SS's

what lies beneath(ongoing)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3052582/an-abhiyass-what-lies-beneath30thsept-page-21updt

The Forbidden(ongoing)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3297673/abhiya-ss-the-forbidden-new-chap-updtd-pg-74-aug-26

Abhiya FF's

My first FF-The first rain(jointly written with tora)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/2932061/the-first-rainupdtd-chap14-aug-note-pg-153?pn=15

second FF- when both worlds collide(jointly written with tora)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/2961084/new-ff-when-both-worlds-collide-imp-note-on-page-26

third FF- Tell me your dreams(jointly written with mansa aka mandy)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3033270/abhiya-ff-tell-me-ur-dreams-impt-note-on-pg-24

Co-writer in Abhiya group FF- Sands of time

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome n beautiful story.loved it a lot.
schmuch is pia leaving...then abhay...wht is his past..phir abhiya kb milenge...plz cont.n update soon.

written so well...loved it..update soon Indu.

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

res
----unres----
beautiful OS Indu👏 👏
Yar is abhay a dark creature_????!!!!
abhay hurt my poor pia😭 bt y???
plz continue soon...eagerly waiting
ALL THE BEST FOR XAMS🤗

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

This time Tora wasn there to beat me to reserving first but still I lost 😭 Anyways coming to the OS I really loved it dear. I donno wat makes u say it wasn good 😕 Ur works always have the poetic poignant touch 😳 n I so wish at times I could write half as well as u do The detailing helped us live each n every moment n thats the magic of ur words 👏 U do know how to strike a chord with ur readers n pull their heartstrings 😳 Thats the effect u have on us. The only teeny tiny error was a very minute grammatical mistake which happnes plenty of time in all our updates too but since u were berating urself I thought I shd point it out 😛 I loved ur portrayl of Abhay in this OS. I am really curious to know what happened in his past that he has isolated himself from the world around him n also from himself Its sad to see him suffer like this Pia was the person who could break all his barriers but yet he threw the last ray of happiness from his life 😭 I so hope Abhay will undo the damage he has done himself U really love Abhay a lot na? 😳 The way u connect with Abhay's character in each of ur stories is proof enough for that. Do continue writing dear but after ur exams r over 😳 My adjectives r bleak in front of ur writing But I would still say this was a marvelous piece of writing 👏

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow great os plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

wowww wonderful but paining...why he behave with her like tht?Is he suffering from any life sucking disease?////continue asap

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Aaliyah

@--Aaliyah--

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing OS !!👏
Really loved it . 😳😉
Why is Abhay behaving so rudely with Pia ?😲😕
Seems like Alina and Pia are very good friends . 😛
What's the mystery behind those paintings ?😕
Eagerly waiting for next update . 😃
Thanks so much for the pm . 😊

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

very very beautiful indu.

is that fire painting somehow symbolic as to why abhay is behaving this way?

will wait for the next part eagerly

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awwie, Abhay seems a broken man from within, and I wonder... Who was the woman in the painting? Was she...a person in his life?
Poor Pia... She lost herself in his eyes and paid the price of it already!
Continue soon Indu... I just love the way you describe AbhIya's forbidden love in all your works... It makes for very alluring reading!
Beautiful.