Originally posted by: ..mandy..
This time Tora wasn there to beat me to reserving first but still I lost 😭 no problem..do it next time. 😊
Anyways coming to the OS I really loved it dear. I donno wat makes u say it wasn good 😕 Ur works always have the poetic poignant touch 😳 n I so wish at times I could write half as well as u do actually i wrote it in one go..i mean i always do but in this case i just wrote it without thinking much..u know..but anyway if you say so..😊
The detailing helped us live each n every moment n thats the magic of ur words 👏 U do know how to strike a chord with ur readers n pull their heartstrings 😳 Thats the effect u have on us. thank you. 😳
The only teeny tiny error was a very minute grammatical mistake which happnes plenty of time in all our updates too but since u were berating urself I thought I shd point it out 😛 thanks for that..😊
I loved ur portrayl of Abhay in this OS. I am really curious to know what happened in his past that he has isolated himself from the world around him n also from himself Its sad to see him suffer like this Pia was the person who could break all his barriers but yet he threw the last ray of happiness from his life 😭 I so hope Abhay will undo the damage he has done himself yes abhay is going through a lot and theres a big reason behind his act.you will know that very soon..well lets see wether he can...🤔
U really love Abhay a lot na? 😳 The way u connect with Abhay's character in each of ur stories is proof enough for that. dear tell me one thing,who does not love abhay? 😆 😛 everyone does here..😉tabhi toh we all write on him. 😆 😛 on serious note ya ..mm..i guess maybe somehow..for some reason i can connect with his character more..😳Do continue writing dear but after ur exams r over 😳 for now my xms r over but finals r on june n i cant stay without writing that long! 😆addiction u see..😛 so am afraid u have to bear my torture...😛 😉
My adjectives r bleak in front of ur writing But I would still say this was a marvelous piece of writing 👏 no matter what adjectives u use, but without ur comments my writing is always incomplete dear..n i mean it...u donno how much they mean to me..😳thank you dear...🤗thanks for always encouraging me n believing on me...🤗