Abhaiya OS--Show me the light.updated april6th pg8 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful update. Alina's entire family was indeed very sweet. Wonder what happend that abhay is like this. he is so much in luv with her but yet he was so ruthless in humiliating her. can't wait to read more.

thanks for the appreciation megha.😳ya you'r right! Abhay is in love with her..and to an extent that he dsnt even hesitate to forbade his own happiness for her..but then true love always finds its way...isnt it ?😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Superb OS

Nice start
Why abhay pretends to b sadu n rude?
Continue soon

thanks anji..😳he has reasons dear..u will know why..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: vmpy

classically classic.tthanks dear.Am happy to know you liked it.😳
theres definitely some reason behind abhays such unpredictable behaviour.yes you'r absolutely right! There is a big reason..
cant wait for da next update.thanx a lot for pm.

you are most welcome.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome os indu
but so emotional
abhay being so rude to piya...she is in so much in love with him even he too love her but what is the reason that abhay stay away from her...hope soon piya know this...cont soon

thanks a ton beenish.😳 yes, pia will know the reason quite soon! Hope to update this weekend.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SheDevil

<font size="3">Awesome start
Quite.a.complex
Why.Abhay is abandoning Pia
Wht is his history ?
Poor Pia.felt bad for her
Plz cont..</font>

thanks shrish. The situation and abhay's past had made everything complicated..yes..but can abhay resist pia..?n even if he does.. for how long?..lets see..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
thanks dear..welcome.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot salman.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally i am here with my comment. I so missed commenting in ur works dear.
Anyways coming to the OS, what should I say? u have left me speechless dear. Just one word beautiful.
Just beautiful OS dear.
you are really a very talented writer yaar and ofcourse god gifted.
The way u bring out each and every raw human emotion is just brilliant. The most beautiful thing about ur writing is the way u describe each and everything and the emotions that each character go through very beautifully.
It was just written totally in a classical way. So poetic, intense and wonderful. The words u used were so apt. dear.
I loved the way u potrayed both Abhiya here but Abhay somehow more.
Loved how abhiya met for the first time, then abhay's jealousy, their confession and Abhay's selfless act made me cry😭
I wonder what really happened in his past that he likes to be alone and desolated from others. I loved how beautifully u potrayed his emotions. Piya was the only ray of light in his dark world but still he had to be selfless and throw her away from his life, and that is our Abhay and that is why we love him so much, his selflessness makes him special and loveable.
Abhay is in pain. I loved how Abhay confessed his feelings, the minute details of his changing emotions every now and then was described excellently by you.
I am feeling bad for piya too. She fell in love with Abhay but had to pay the price. She is leaving but i know Abhiya will never be separated so, i will patiently wait for ur next update.
I wonder who was the girl in that painting and that fire panting was somehow related to Abhay's past right?
waiting for u to unfold Abhay's past. I loved the way the u shaped up the storyline and yea loved how u maintained suspense throughout the whole OS.
Once more just superb OS indu. Its again a masterpiece dear!!! Waiting for ur next update. Plz update asap and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

This time Tora wasn there to beat me to reserving first but still I lost 😭 no problem..do it next time. 😊

Anyways coming to the OS I really loved it dear. I donno wat makes u say it wasn good 😕 Ur works always have the poetic poignant touch 😳 n I so wish at times I could write half as well as u do actually i wrote it in one go..i mean i always do but in this case i just wrote it without thinking much..u know..but anyway if you say so..😊
The detailing helped us live each n every moment n thats the magic of ur words 👏 U do know how to strike a chord with ur readers n pull their heartstrings 😳 Thats the effect u have on us. thank you. 😳
The only teeny tiny error was a very minute grammatical mistake which happnes plenty of time in all our updates too but since u were berating urself I thought I shd point it out 😛 thanks for that..😊
I loved ur portrayl of Abhay in this OS. I am really curious to know what happened in his past that he has isolated himself from the world around him n also from himself Its sad to see him suffer like this Pia was the person who could break all his barriers but yet he threw the last ray of happiness from his life 😭 I so hope Abhay will undo the damage he has done himself yes abhay is going through a lot and theres a big reason behind his act.you will know that very soon..well lets see wether he can...🤔
U really love Abhay a lot na? 😳 The way u connect with Abhay's character in each of ur stories is proof enough for that. dear tell me one thing,who does not love abhay? 😆 😛 everyone does here..😉tabhi toh we all write on him. 😆 😛 on serious note ya ..mm..i guess maybe somehow..for some reason i can connect with his character more..😳Do continue writing dear but after ur exams r over 😳 for now my xms r over but finals r on june n i cant stay without writing that long! 😆addiction u see..😛 so am afraid u have to bear my torture...😛 😉
My adjectives r bleak in front of ur writing But I would still say this was a marvelous piece of writing 👏 no matter what adjectives u use, but without ur comments my writing is always incomplete dear..n i mean it...u donno how much they mean to me..😳thank you dear...🤗thanks for always encouraging me n believing on me...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Sorry for being late 😳 no probs..😊

It was an excellent piece of writing. Like usual, your piece has a poetic, poignant and classic touch. thank you tanzie. 😳 but was it really classic..?! 😕
how do you even write so well... i cant even imagine or describe.. the word can be felt.. it was so beautiful that way. ohh..tanzie nowadays you always embarass me with ur praises..😳 but thank you soo much..😳
I guess the painting in Abhay's room has to be something with his past or the reason he lost connection with happiness and light. yes there is definitely a connection and that will be revealed in the next update. 😊
abhiya were palpable and absolutely poetic in the OS.. so beautiful yet deep. loved it. please continue soon 👏 👏 👏 thanks for the appreciation..will update soon! 😳

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