Abhaiya OS--Show me the light.updated april6th pg8

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: shria
its just awsome & very beautifully written😳😳

thanks shria.glad you like it.😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Sorry for being late 😳

It was an excellent piece of writing. Like usual, your piece has a poetic, poignant and classic touch. how do you even write so well... i cant even imagine or describe.. the word can be felt.. it was so beautiful that way.

I guess the painting in Abhay's room has to be something with his past or the reason he lost connection with happiness and light.

abhiya were palpable and absolutely poetic in the OS.. so beautiful yet deep. loved it. please continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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captainplus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

another wonderful os ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

lo❤️ed it !

bt y is abhay on stay away mission ?

plz do continue soon ...

tanks 4r the pm 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ririrararaatry
starting is nice 😛 ...abhay loves her then why he behaved like a jerk ...pls dont separate them..pls pls pls 😒

thank you. 😊 Why he behaved so u will see very soon!

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: meerubzara
awesome
lovely
superb
eagerly w8ng for next update
continu soon

thanks for liking dear. Next update will be up soon. 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ..Jenny..
wow,nice os.
abhay's behaviour is much interesting.wanna know about his past life.why he thinks that he is not supposed to love pia???
waiting for next update...

thanks a lot jenny.😊 you will know everything in the next chap dear...

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: samwllms
awwsm work...pls apne exam ko bolo jaldi nipat jaye...aur tumhe free krde...tabhi to hame updts milenge...exam nhi manaa to main use goli maar dungi...:-P

thank you dear.😊 ya, my xms! Bt as soon as they are over i wnt keep u guys waiting!

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Asyalover
My my abhay is so rude and he is blaming pia.

dear try to undrstand why he is doing so..there's a reason 4 his refusal.

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
really its too good keep updating but soon and should complete this story don't let in half
very good work abhay as vamp but living his family is his family never knows about him how he join them on dinner or he is like normal vamp i means English films vamp who can drink and eat.

dear i never said in the story that he is a vamp. 😆Its a normal human story.😛 and for ur worry,i already said at the end that this OS will end in the next chapter. 😊

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
wow indu u describe emotions so beautifullythank you trishna.😳 and present total innocent image of pia and grief sucken image of abhay par yeh bhonduram kabhi nahi sudharega humesa angel ko tang karta hai... Abhay has his reasons for staying away dear. Ofcourse he doesnt hw strong her feelings are, though he undrstands...bt he will very soon..😳love the story and waiting 4 next part to knw reason behind abhay behavior...

thanks again for reading.😊