Abhaiya OS--Show me the light.updated april6th pg8

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

its just awsome & very beautifully written😳😳

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Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

starting is nice 😛 ...abhay loves her then why he behaved like a jerk ...pls dont separate them..pls pls pls 😒

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesome
lovely
superb
eagerly w8ng for next update
continu soon

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...Rishab...

@...Rishab...

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow,nice os.

abhay's behaviour is much interesting.wanna know about his past life.why he thinks that he is not supposed to love pia???

waiting for next update...

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awwsm work...pls apne exam ko bolo jaldi nipat jaye...aur tumhe free krde...tabhi to hame updts milenge...exam nhi manaa to main use goli maar dungi...:-P

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

My my abhay is so rude and he is blaming pia.

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

really its too good keep updating but soon and should complete this story don't let in half
very good work abhay as vamp but living his family is his family never knows about him how he join them on dinner or he is like normal vamp i means English films vamp who can drink and eat.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow indu u describe emotions so beautifully and present total innocent image of pia and grief sucken image of abhay par yeh bhonduram kabhi nahi sudharega humesa angel ko tang karta hai... love the story and waiting 4 next part to knw reason behind abhay behavior...

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

wonderful update. Alina's entire family was indeed very sweet. Wonder what happend that abhay is like this. he is so much in luv with her but yet he was so ruthless in humiliating her. can't wait to read more.