#2 FF:Ten things I hate about you (Chapters13-19)

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: harsha..
Nice update. You bring out the emotions so well. Continue soon.

I am glad you think that way. Thank you so much! 😃😃😃

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: ak_maggi
my eyes are half open...n ve sadness over Arnav s condition.. i wanna just say "i still love Arnav here" no matter wat...though it makes me sad...really sad. i know it was necessary for Khushi to very very clearly know wat she wants.. else she 'd always push herself n say tht Shrey is her bf forever! n i am big fan of such intense hurtful moments... brings lot of intensity to d characters n d situation😊

i must say i kinda identify both Arnav n Khushi here...

For Arnav its like someone else holding his entire world... coz Khushi is his world now... he accepts or not... its no longer his choice...his reslessness seein Shrey n by d end sentence.. his world just crumbled in front of his eyes... Uff tht was an unforgettable moment! ( like really high TRP types😛)

Its very tricky to put down Khushi s feelings here... n u ve done a great job guggu.. 👍🏼 khushi got something she thought she was expecting al this while.. she is in his arms but she feels she belongs to someone else... she craves for Arnav...I am glad she dint deny tht feelin to herself n accepted it like a strong woman shud...

Their attraction.. dat dream like moment... had just shook them off d ground n Shrey brought them back to ground!!! n how!!!!!!!😕

K now this is My favvv moment
she almost stumbled, standing on her two feet. Shrey's hands were quick enough to steady her but her heart wished to be comforted by someone else totally and that certain someone was about to reach out for her but had stopped...
it says it all... Shreys possessiveness...n Khushi craving for Arnav...n.Arnavs helpessness.

well now i am really really nervous for next update guggu... cnt see Arnav more hurt😔 Khushi... do something...😕 ( well precisely my cheapo do something😛 )

lots of love🤗
glad atleast i am on d first page of update😃

What shall I do without you? I don't know and I don't want to find out because I demand that you always stay with me and my stories because we are two cheap sisters, aren't we? *mei emotional ho gayi bhai* 😃

You pick out your fav lines and I shall pick out mine. You're absolutely right when you say that it's no longer his choice. He can fight with it all he wants but it's not going to help! And I agree, it was like really high TRP types! 😆

I don't know why but I blushed when u called me guggu. Pagal hu na mei? LOL. I am glad you liked the description, I won't deny that it was a bit hard for me. :D

Your favourite moment, I realise now, is very tricky. :D You make me realise the importance of all the important lines. :) Thank you maggi! What would I ever do without you? Did I say that again?

And the trio is in good hands, don't worry sista!! 😃 LOVE you! :)

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

saw this story today...

loved the concept and characterization ..

i would like to read the future updates plz send pm .i promise u to comment regularly😊

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rskumar

@rskumar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

lovely update... so now he is feeling better after knowing Shrey khushi hadn't shared a room 😉 is he planning to take khushi to orphanage..i also feel she need to have a closure.so that She's can move on her life...

Edited by rskumar - 13 years ago

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bunnylovessunny

@bunnylovessunny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Edited :D

Finally :)

I'm glad Khushi stood her ground with that douche! He's quite an asshole! 😆 (sorry, i'm obliged to hate him :D)

Arnav Singh Raizada always learns the hard way doesn't he? He does and he regrets :D But you gotta love him though, he is totally adorably amazing :D

Khushi, the poor thing is already messed up in that place and is terrified of her horrid past and now with her so called boyfriend and her boss friend, she is in quite a fix :D I hope she breaks up with that excuse of a man and welcomes Arnav with an open heart, because hey, we all know he's her knight and shining armour :D

I love how Khushi can still be crazy despite her melancholy avatar. The girl is determined to prove herself to Arnav in every aspect and hell she is doing a good job :D

I love how Arnav deals with emotions, he's a poor lost soul when it comes to Khushi, he sooo loves her, he sooo wants her in his life and he's just not very sure how to move ahead with it... now i'll say it again, Khushi better get rid of that baboon fast now 😆

Waiting, waiting, waiting, waiting, waiting...

LOVED THE UPDATE!! AS ALWAYS :D

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divvk

@divvk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

amazing update!!! just loved every bit of it!!! and why did khushi lie to him in first place about nt being able to join them fr dinner?? thanks for the pm buddy 😃

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blek

@blek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

nice update
thanx 4 the pm

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#619

oh my god.

LOVED the update. That silent communication warmed the cockles of my heart.

SO epic.

Sigh.

Really really well written.

Khusi has taken quite a few steps. The best thing about your FF is that every update brings something new...

Like Khushi takes steps ahead in their relationship and you are making her realize her feelings for Arnav with each and every update and the same with Arnav which I find really nice..

A very nice update :)